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Like all the members of [[the Baihu Society]], Subaru had memorized the layout of the [[Plum Blossom Retreat]] and knew where every shadow fell, the location of each nook into which a body could be squeezed to escape notice.  His long ears twitched slightly as he heard movement coming towards him.  A girl carrying a tray laden with clean linens and soap passed the stand of ornamental bonsai, wholly unaware of the man pressed behind it.
 
Like all the members of [[the Baihu Society]], Subaru had memorized the layout of the [[Plum Blossom Retreat]] and knew where every shadow fell, the location of each nook into which a body could be squeezed to escape notice.  His long ears twitched slightly as he heard movement coming towards him.  A girl carrying a tray laden with clean linens and soap passed the stand of ornamental bonsai, wholly unaware of the man pressed behind it.
  
Remaining still, he watched as other [[The First Generation|amalgams]] came and went through the corridor, paying special attention to the ones who were allowed to pass into the inner chambers without question.  Patience was the first lesson of those who served under [[Leaf Shakes the Wind]], and only after ten minutes of careful observation did Subaru decide he was ready.
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Remaining still, he watched as other [[The First Generation|amalgums]] came and went through the corridor, paying special attention to the ones who were allowed to pass into the inner chambers without question.  Patience was the first lesson of those who served under [[Leaf Shakes the Wind]], and only after ten minutes of careful observation did Subaru decide he was ready.
 
Touching the wellspring of solar fire that had been placed into him, he began to reshape his features, darkening his shock of white-streaked orange hair, flattening the long angles of his face, until finally he was all but indistinguishable from the household guards.   
 
Touching the wellspring of solar fire that had been placed into him, he began to reshape his features, darkening his shock of white-streaked orange hair, flattening the long angles of his face, until finally he was all but indistinguishable from the household guards.   
  
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The two of them dangled, a fleshy pendulum at the end of a few links of steel, each trying to gain the upper hand.  The steam around them cleared for a moment, and the two of them locked eyes.  Subaru’s vertical pupils took in the pure black orbs of the man who held him in a clinch, recognition lighting each of them in the same instant.  ''[[Tokaki Kui|Chung Chih]]?''
 
The two of them dangled, a fleshy pendulum at the end of a few links of steel, each trying to gain the upper hand.  The steam around them cleared for a moment, and the two of them locked eyes.  Subaru’s vertical pupils took in the pure black orbs of the man who held him in a clinch, recognition lighting each of them in the same instant.  ''[[Tokaki Kui|Chung Chih]]?''
  
Their struggles against one another ceasing, each of the amalgams cast their gazes straight downward, seeing that they now hung directly above [[Rivers Between Us]], mere feet from the young godling’s head.  The Twilight rose from the water and began to dry himself in quick, efficient strokes before casting the towel aside and taking up a nearby robe.  The watchers could almost see his brilliant mind beginning to churn again, slowed only momentarily by the relaxation of the heated water.  Subaru and Chung Chih held their breaths, each praying to the Unconquered Sun, Luna, and all five Maidens that the sorcerer would not look up.
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Their struggles against one another ceasing, each of the amalgums cast their gazes straight downard, seeing that they now hung directly above [[Rivers Between Us]], mere feet from the young godling’s head.  The Twilight rose from the water and began to dry himself in quick, efficient strokes before casting the towel aside and taking up a nearby robe.  The watchers could almost see his brilliant mind beginning to churn again, slowed only momentarily by the relaxation of the heated water.  Subaru and Chung Chih held their breaths, each praying to the Unconquered Sun, Luna, and all five Maidens that the sorcerer would not look up.
  
 
He didn’t.
 
He didn’t.

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