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"My lords are heroes!"
 
"My lords are heroes!"
  
"No!"  Xenon shook his head.  "They each have dreams they would see fulfilled, and they would change my people into something else to see them come to pass.  They would use the souls of others to their own needs met.  Is that a hero's mark?
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"No!"  Xenon shook his head.  "They each have dreams would see fulfilled, and they would use my people, change them into something else, to see their own needs met.  You prize heroism, Choshu Ishi.  If you would be a hero to the Marukan, learn to ride as my people do, turn away from these Solars and help me drive them and their ambitions from this land."   
 
 
"You prize heroism, Choshu Ishi.  If you would be a hero to the Marukan, learn to ride as my people do, turn away from these Solars and help me drive them and their ambitions from this land."   
 
  
 
The Ivory Dragon seemed barely to listen to Xenon's words; he shouted, "I would be a hero to the whole Scavenger Lands!"  More white Earth Essence bled into his anima, and Xenon saw his muscles ripple with the Strength of Stone.
 
The Ivory Dragon seemed barely to listen to Xenon's words; he shouted, "I would be a hero to the whole Scavenger Lands!"  More white Earth Essence bled into his anima, and Xenon saw his muscles ripple with the Strength of Stone.
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Xenon dropped into his own Lightning Hoof Form and grew calm as his anima called the waving grasses of the Marukani plain up from the ground beneath his horse's feet.  He held up his jade powerbow, Cloud of Pollen.  "I have learned new tricks in the weeks since last we fought, Ishi.  If you will not join me, you'd do well to turn back to your masters now."
 
Xenon dropped into his own Lightning Hoof Form and grew calm as his anima called the waving grasses of the Marukani plain up from the ground beneath his horse's feet.  He held up his jade powerbow, Cloud of Pollen.  "I have learned new tricks in the weeks since last we fought, Ishi.  If you will not join me, you'd do well to turn back to your masters now."
  
"My lords will thank me, all of Marukan will thank me, for ridding the land of a coward and traitor!"  Ishi gave a final twist of his wrist, activating the Five-Dragon Blocking TechniqueXenon saw and did the same.  And then, battle was joined.
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"My lords will thank me, all Marukan will thank me, for ridding the land of a coward and traitor!"  Ishi gave a final twist of his wrist, activating the Five-Dragon Blocking Technique, even as Xenon did the same, and battle was joined.
  
  

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