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The first people to walk upon the World after the War in Heaven already knew the story of Jaser and it is from their stories that the basis of Jaser's church was formed. For hundreds of years this was enough. Jaser guarded the world and they thanked him for his divine protection and guidance. Then the monsters of the Green Star came. People turned from Jaser's flock and He realized that a Champion was needed. Jaser watched the world looking for the knight who would become His Voice. <br />
 
The first people to walk upon the World after the War in Heaven already knew the story of Jaser and it is from their stories that the basis of Jaser's church was formed. For hundreds of years this was enough. Jaser guarded the world and they thanked him for his divine protection and guidance. Then the monsters of the Green Star came. People turned from Jaser's flock and He realized that a Champion was needed. Jaser watched the world looking for the knight who would become His Voice. <br />
Instead he discovered Lady Bethan. Lady Bethan was the youngest daughter of a powerful Count whose family had always been fervent followers of Jaser. An Archdaemon cult rose up in his holdigns eventually gaining enough strength to assault the Bethan Keep. The young Lady Bethan watched as these cultists and their undead servitors slew her entire family, her father and two brother's struck down in the heat of battle. She refused to believe that Jaser would abandon them to the Archdaemon and her conviction made her decision for her. Taking up her brother's mace and father's longsword Bethan began to destroy the undead monsters and their cultish masters. Jaser saw this and spoke through Lady Bethan, powerful words of rebuke that destroyed the blasphemous cult. The words of divinity caused Lady Bethan to collapse and in her stupor she met Jaser Himself. <br />
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Instead he discovered Lady Bethan. Lady Bethan was the youngest daughter of a powerful Count whose family had always been ferverant followers of Jaser. An Archdaemon cult rose up in his holdigns eventually gaining enough strength to assault the Bethan Keep. The young Lady Bethan watched as these cultists and their undead servitors slew her entire family, her father and two brother's struck down in the heat of battle. She refused to believe that Jaser would abandon them to the Archdaemon and her conviction made her decision for her. Taking up her brother's mace and father's longsword Bethan began to destroy the undead monsters and their cultish masters. Jaser saw this and spoke through Lady Bethan, powerful words of rebuke that destroyed the blasphemous cult. The words of divinity caused Lady Bethan to collapse and in her stupor she met Jaser Himself. <br />
 
He named her His champion and His Voice and bade her gather the clergy who were willing to stand against the Green Star and train them to fight His foes. She did so and Jaser's Army strode across the world, Jaser's Voice at its head guarding the faithful until the green star left the sky. The Lady Bethan then formed the Central Abbey of the Fighting Orders of Jaser creating and codifying the tradition of Jaser's warrior clergy. Abbey teachings claim that Lady Bethan did not die. When her work was complete Jaser drew her to him, to stand above the World as its Divine Champion.
 
He named her His champion and His Voice and bade her gather the clergy who were willing to stand against the Green Star and train them to fight His foes. She did so and Jaser's Army strode across the world, Jaser's Voice at its head guarding the faithful until the green star left the sky. The Lady Bethan then formed the Central Abbey of the Fighting Orders of Jaser creating and codifying the tradition of Jaser's warrior clergy. Abbey teachings claim that Lady Bethan did not die. When her work was complete Jaser drew her to him, to stand above the World as its Divine Champion.
  

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