Editing The Broken Universe:Chiyoko

=Chiyoko=
[[File:AliceSara_Arechi.jpg|thumb|Chiyoko]]
'''Name:''' NAKAHARA [仲原] Chiyoko [知世子] 

'''Player:''' Alice Sara

'''Game:''' [[The_Broken_Universe|The Broken Universe]]

'''Age:''' 16 (2nd year high school)

'''Height:''' 155cm

Chiyoko transfered to school in Shinohara from Shibaishi, another city, at the beginning of the 2nd year of high school. She keeps mostly to herself and seems to have a quiet intensity to her. She'll respond politely if people talk to her, but she won't do anything to keep the conversation going. She's not a member of any clubs, and leaves school as soon as she can each day.

Besides that, she's a little odd. She has very pale blond hair, but doesn't appear to bleach it. Her most noticeable feature might be her blood red eyes. She doesn't wear colored contacts, otherwise the teachers would have made her remove them, so they must be natural. Maybe she's part foreigner? When she's spotted around town outside of school hours, she seems to prefer gothic lol<!--avoiding spam filter!-->ita fashions, mainly black dresses.

=Relationships=
{|class="wikitable"
! Name 
! Description
! IDs Known
! Level 
|-
|[[The_Broken_Universe:Yuna|Ocean Princess Yuna]]
|A fellow magical girl.
|Magical, Normal
|0
|-
|[[The_Broken_Universe:Natsumi|Spirit Gunner Natsumi]]
|A fellow magical girl.
|Magical, Normal
|0
|-
|[[The_Broken_Universe:Kei|Steel Empress Kei]]
|A fellow magical girl.
|Magical, Normal
|0
|-
|[[The_Broken_Universe:Akane|Starlight Magician Akane]]
|A fellow magical girl.
|Magical, Normal
|0
|-
|[[The_Broken_Universe:Akari|Emerald Wind Maiden Akari]]
|A fellow magical girl. Unbeknown to Chiyoko, they are acquainted online as Ishitsu-mono and Arechi. They share a passion for landscapes and modern ruins. They've known each other for a couple years, and have had many online discussions on kakushi-mura.jp, a forum devoted to urban exploration, about places to explore, and shared pictures of places they've been. Neither is aware that the other is also a magical girl.
|Magical, Normal
|1
|-
|TANIZAKI Nodoka
|While she's not particularly close to her aunt and uncle, she is fond of her cousin. She's a 2nd year student at the same school, and president of the tea ceremony club. When they were children they used to play together every summer, and kept in touch when they were apart. They view themselves as almost sisters. She's a bit worried about her, though. Nodoka is a friend of Yuna as well.
|Normal
|2
|-
|KUBOTA Tamie
|While wandering around Shinohara, shortly after she arrived, she discovered an old woman who spends her days sitting in a folding chair under a busy highway overpass, feeding the birds. She claims that one day a strange creature turned her husband into a bird, so she wants to make sure he gets fed. Her name is Kubota Tamie, but Chiyoko usually just calls her Grandmother. Tamie lives in a tiny apartment near the overpass and has invited Chiyoko over for tea and cookies a few times. Somehow Chiyoko feels a sense of kinship with the lonely old woman.
|Normal
|1
|-
|IZUMI Midori
|Chiyoko spends a bit of time in the library doing research, and Izumi-sensei's friendly nature has managed to put a chink in her aloof facade. She wants to make sure the older woman can continue to lead a life without too much worry.
|Normal
|1
|-
|}

=Sable Dragoon=
[[File:AliceSara_SableDragoon.jpg|thumb|Sable Dragoon]]
'''Magical Girl Name:''' Sable Dragoon [セーブル ドラグーン]

*'''Girl Type:''' Driven Warrior
*'''Reason:''' Unknown
*'''Wish:''' Unknown
*'''Crisis:''' Unknown
*'''Element:''' Nothingness
*'''Weapon:''' Sword
*'''Power:''' Nightmare
*'''Costume:''' Black armor, dark blue dress, iron mask.

A mysterious magical girl with pale blond hair, clad in a long dark blue dress with black metal armor, and a steel visor covering her eyes. She wields a black sword with glowing red patterns on its blade.
==Attributes==
*'''Magical Attributes:''' Magic 9 [Attack] Heart 4 [Defense] Fury 8 [Support]
*'''Normal Attributes:''' Tenacity 9 Insight 7 Charm 2
*'''Resolve:''' 21

==Fallout==
*'''Minor Distortions:'''
*'''Major Distortions:'''
*'''Temporary Changes:'''
*'''Permanent Changes:''' [Magic] Graphical Glitch, [Fury] Bloody Eyes, [Fury] Weather Phenomenon
==Specialty/Talents==
*'''Specialty:''' Witch/Reaper
*'''Talents'''
**'''Basic/General:''' Boost (F, 3/S, 1:V), Recover (NC, 2/E), Shield (--, 1-3:S), Others unknown
**'''Witch:''' Hex (m 1/R), Reaping Strike (m, 2/S), Cruel Reaper (+1 dam all atks), Blast Strike (M, 1:A), Drain Life (F, 1:A), Rough Going (m, 1:A), Others unknown
**'''Other:''' [Knight] Regeneration (F, 1/E)

==Advances==
#+x [T1] +1 to Insight
#+x [T1] +1 Insight
#+x [T3] New Witch Talent: [           ]
#+x [T3] New Witch Talent, can rearrange combat stats (no change): [           ]
#+x [T1] +1 to Fury, can rearrange combat stats (no change)

==Descriptive Fluff==
*[http://forum.rpg.net/showthread.php?729560-Magical-Burst-The-Broken-Universe&p=18045303#post18045303 '''Transformation Incantation''']
 Darkness beyond blackest pitch
 Deeper than the deepest night
 Emptiness as vast as the largest ocean
 Colder than the coldest ice
 I call upon thee and swear myself to thee.
 I stand ready to bear the strength you give me.
 Let those who stand before me be destroyed.
*[Power] '''Garden of Oblivion''': Sable Dragoon can manifest a Nightmare, just like daemons can. Her Nightmare is usually a seemingly endless field of dry dusty earth peppered with jagged rocky outcroppings. On the surface of the outcroppings are the silhouettes of people, like the ones at Hiroshima and Nagasaki. But it is not lifeless, here and there small yellow flowers manage to grow, strange bat-winged birds circle high overhead, and mouse-like lizards scamper in the shadows of the rocks. The sky is a steel gray, cold, and sun-less, but there is still light as if it were noon. A constant wind blows across the desolate landscape.
*[Hex] '''Mark of Oblivion''': With naught but a destructive wish and a word, Sable Dragoon causes a small black spiral to appear on her enemy's body. The spiral slowly devourers their life, growing larger as it does. Should she wish to hurry their descent into nothingness she can strengthen the mark, causing it to grow faster.
*[Blast Strike] '''Scythe of Oblivion''': She swings her blade in a wide arc, sending a huge crescent of nothingness flying toward the enemy.
*[Reaping Strike] '''Mercy for the Empty''': After she hits with one of her attacks, she spins her sword with a flourish, causing an afterimage of the attack to strike again.
*[Shield] '''Devouring Void''': She raises her left hand and a vortex of nothingness appears between the target and the attack, consuming part, if not all, of the force of the strike.
*[Drain Life] '''Ravenous Void''': A lance of nothingness erupts from the tip of her blade, stabbing the target. The red patterns on her blade flare, drawing the essence of her enemy into her blade and feeding it back into Sable Dragoon, healing her.
*[Rough Going] '''Abyss of the End''': She stomps the ground and a swirling maelstrom of emptiness erupts, clutching at anyone who tries to flee its grasp.
*[Regeneration] '''Endless Existence''': Her body flickers, like a glitch in a computer game. With each flicker, wounds disappear as if time was rewinding.
*[Teleport] '''Path of Oblivion''': She slashes a rip in the fabric of reality, and steps through, the rip vanishing as she steps through. At her destination, she cuts another rip back into reality and emerges again.
*[Purge] '''No Effect''': She flickers briefly, between herself, and her negative. When it stops, she back to normal, cleansed of all effects.
*[Second Chance Attack] '''No Escape''': Just as it seems her target will evade her attack she reveals that the first attack was a fake and unleashes her real attack.
*[Killing Blow] '''Negation of Existence''': She draws back her sword to a readied position by her hip, then unleashes a might overhead slash, sending an overwhelming torrent of nothingness at the target, ripping apart its very existence.
*[Finishing Attack: Barrage] '''Eternal Oubliette''': She plants her sword point first in the ground in front of her, an eight-spoked magical circle of utter blackness forming beneath her feet. She holds her left hand out, palm up, and intones:
 Darkness beyond all reason
 Emptiness beyond all hope
 Void beyond all escape
 Oblivion beyond all memory
 Existence beyond all ending
 ETERNAL OUBLIETTE.
She closes the fingers of her left hand. A matching circle appears beneath her target. As she does, eight pillars, black as blackest night rise up around the target or target area. Iron walls erupt from between the pillars, connecting them. Strands of black steel weave themselves into a dome above the octagon, sealing in the area. Those entrapped experience what it is like to be utterly forgotten for an eternity. Then, the prison shatters, releasing them, if they survived.

==Songs==
===Character Song===
[https://duckduckgo.com/?q=!yt+7TA7cuF26_k Cynical World - Kajiura Yuki]
 Good intentions lost in thin air
 You were craving for affection
 And a certain invitation
 Led you here to me
 In the cynical world

===Themes===
*Sable Dragoon's Theme: [https://duckduckgo.com/?q=!yt+S3vGpRsiz5I Reveal - Kajiura Yuki]
*Chiyoko's Theme: [https://duckduckgo.com/?q=!yt+u2POL2xFjp4 A Shadow - Kajiura Yuki]
*Dragoon Furioso Theme: [https://duckduckgo.com/?q=!yt+0grW35E03s8 Makyuu Ichii-Bal - Agematsu Noriyasu]
*Eternal Oubliette Theme: [https:///duckduckgo.com/?q=!yt+sTzeez6w1U0 Aura (evil version) - Kajiura Yuki]