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|[[The_Broken_Universe:Yuna|Ocean Princess Yuna]]
 
|[[The_Broken_Universe:Yuna|Ocean Princess Yuna]]
 
|A fellow magical girl.
 
|A fellow magical girl.
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|[[The_Broken_Universe:Natsumi|Spirit Gunner Natsumi]]
 
|[[The_Broken_Universe:Natsumi|Spirit Gunner Natsumi]]
 
|A fellow magical girl.
 
|A fellow magical girl.
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|[[The_Broken_Universe:Kei|Steel Empress Kei]]
 
|[[The_Broken_Universe:Kei|Steel Empress Kei]]
 
|A fellow magical girl.
 
|A fellow magical girl.
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|[[The_Broken_Universe:Akane|Starlight Magician Akane]]
 
|[[The_Broken_Universe:Akane|Starlight Magician Akane]]
 
|A fellow magical girl.
 
|A fellow magical girl.
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|[[The_Broken_Universe:Akari|Emerald Wind Maiden Akari]]
 
|[[The_Broken_Universe:Akari|Emerald Wind Maiden Akari]]
 
|A fellow magical girl. Unbeknown to Chiyoko, they are acquainted online as Ishitsu-mono and Arechi. They share a passion for landscapes and modern ruins. They've known each other for a couple years, and have had many online discussions on kakushi-mura.jp, a forum devoted to urban exploration, about places to explore, and shared pictures of places they've been. Neither is aware that the other is also a magical girl.
 
|A fellow magical girl. Unbeknown to Chiyoko, they are acquainted online as Ishitsu-mono and Arechi. They share a passion for landscapes and modern ruins. They've known each other for a couple years, and have had many online discussions on kakushi-mura.jp, a forum devoted to urban exploration, about places to explore, and shared pictures of places they've been. Neither is aware that the other is also a magical girl.
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|TANIZAKI Nodoka
 
|TANIZAKI Nodoka
 
|While she's not particularly close to her aunt and uncle, she is fond of her cousin. She's a 2nd year student at the same school, and president of the tea ceremony club. When they were children they used to play together every summer, and kept in touch when they were apart. They view themselves as almost sisters. She's a bit worried about her, though. Nodoka is a friend of Yuna as well.
 
|While she's not particularly close to her aunt and uncle, she is fond of her cousin. She's a 2nd year student at the same school, and president of the tea ceremony club. When they were children they used to play together every summer, and kept in touch when they were apart. They view themselves as almost sisters. She's a bit worried about her, though. Nodoka is a friend of Yuna as well.
 
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|KUBOTA Tamie
 
|KUBOTA Tamie
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A mysterious magical girl with pale blond hair, clad in a long dark blue dress with black metal armor, and a steel visor covering her eyes. She wields a black sword with glowing red patterns on its blade.
 
A mysterious magical girl with pale blond hair, clad in a long dark blue dress with black metal armor, and a steel visor covering her eyes. She wields a black sword with glowing red patterns on its blade.
 
==Attributes==
 
==Attributes==
*'''Magical Attributes:''' Magic 9 [Attack] Heart 4 [Defense] Fury 8 [Support]
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*'''Magical Attributes:''' Magic 9 [Attack] Heart 4 [Defense] Fury 7 [Support]
*'''Normal Attributes:''' Tenacity 9 Insight 7 Charm 2
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*'''Normal Attributes:''' Tenacity 9 Insight 5 Charm 2
 
*'''Resolve:''' 21
 
*'''Resolve:''' 21
  
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*'''Permanent Changes:''' [Magic] Graphical Glitch, [Fury] Bloody Eyes, [Fury] Weather Phenomenon
 
*'''Permanent Changes:''' [Magic] Graphical Glitch, [Fury] Bloody Eyes, [Fury] Weather Phenomenon
 
==Specialty/Talents==
 
==Specialty/Talents==
*'''Specialty:''' Witch/Reaper
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*'''Specialty:''' Witch
 
*'''Talents'''
 
*'''Talents'''
**'''Basic/General:''' Boost (F, 3/S, 1:V), Recover (NC, 2/E), Shield (--, 1-3:S), Others unknown
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**'''Basic/General:''' Boost (F, 3/S, 1:V), Recover (NC, 2/E), Others unknown
**'''Witch:''' Hex (m 1/R), Reaping Strike (m, 2/S), Cruel Reaper (+1 dam all atks), Blast Strike (M, 1:A), Drain Life (F, 1:A), Rough Going (m, 1:A), Others unknown
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**'''Witch:''' Hex (m 1/R), Others unknown
**'''Other:''' [Knight] Regeneration (F, 1/E)
 
 
 
==Advances==
 
#+x [T1] +1 to Insight
 
#+x [T1] +1 Insight
 
#+x [T3] New Witch Talent: [          ]
 
#+x [T3] New Witch Talent, can rearrange combat stats (no change): [          ]
 
#+x [T1] +1 to Fury, can rearrange combat stats (no change)
 
  
 
==Descriptive Fluff==
 
==Descriptive Fluff==
*[http://forum.rpg.net/showthread.php?729560-Magical-Burst-The-Broken-Universe&p=18045303#post18045303 '''Transformation Incantation''']
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*'''[Transformation Incantation]'''
 
  Darkness beyond blackest pitch
 
  Darkness beyond blackest pitch
 
  Deeper than the deepest night
 
  Deeper than the deepest night
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  Let those who stand before me be destroyed.
 
  Let those who stand before me be destroyed.
 
*[Power] '''Garden of Oblivion''': Sable Dragoon can manifest a Nightmare, just like daemons can. Her Nightmare is usually a seemingly endless field of dry dusty earth peppered with jagged rocky outcroppings. On the surface of the outcroppings are the silhouettes of people, like the ones at Hiroshima and Nagasaki. But it is not lifeless, here and there small yellow flowers manage to grow, strange bat-winged birds circle high overhead, and mouse-like lizards scamper in the shadows of the rocks. The sky is a steel gray, cold, and sun-less, but there is still light as if it were noon. A constant wind blows across the desolate landscape.
 
*[Power] '''Garden of Oblivion''': Sable Dragoon can manifest a Nightmare, just like daemons can. Her Nightmare is usually a seemingly endless field of dry dusty earth peppered with jagged rocky outcroppings. On the surface of the outcroppings are the silhouettes of people, like the ones at Hiroshima and Nagasaki. But it is not lifeless, here and there small yellow flowers manage to grow, strange bat-winged birds circle high overhead, and mouse-like lizards scamper in the shadows of the rocks. The sky is a steel gray, cold, and sun-less, but there is still light as if it were noon. A constant wind blows across the desolate landscape.
*[Hex] '''Mark of Oblivion''': With naught but a destructive wish and a word, Sable Dragoon causes a small black spiral to appear on her enemy's body. The spiral slowly devourers their life, growing larger as it does. Should she wish to hurry their descent into nothingness she can strengthen the mark, causing it to grow faster.
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*[Hex] '''Mark of Oblivion''': With naught but a destructive wish and a word, Sable Dragoon causes a small black spiral to appear on her enemy's body. The spiral slowly devourers their life, growing larger as it does. Should she wish to hurry their descent into nothingness she can strengthen the mark, causing it to grow faster,
*[Blast Strike] '''Scythe of Oblivion''': She swings her blade in a wide arc, sending a huge crescent of nothingness flying toward the enemy.
 
*[Reaping Strike] '''Mercy for the Empty''': After she hits with one of her attacks, she spins her sword with a flourish, causing an afterimage of the attack to strike again.
 
*[Shield] '''Devouring Void''': She raises her left hand and a vortex of nothingness appears between the target and the attack, consuming part, if not all, of the force of the strike.
 
*[Drain Life] '''Ravenous Void''': A lance of nothingness erupts from the tip of her blade, stabbing the target. The red patterns on her blade flare, drawing the essence of her enemy into her blade and feeding it back into Sable Dragoon, healing her.
 
*[Rough Going] '''Abyss of the End''': She stomps the ground and a swirling maelstrom of emptiness erupts, clutching at anyone who tries to flee its grasp.
 
*[Regeneration] '''Endless Existence''': Her body flickers, like a glitch in a computer game. With each flicker, wounds disappear as if time was rewinding.
 
*[Teleport] '''Path of Oblivion''': She slashes a rip in the fabric of reality, and steps through, the rip vanishing as she steps through. At her destination, she cuts another rip back into reality and emerges again.
 
*[Purge] '''No Effect''': She flickers briefly, between herself, and her negative. When it stops, she back to normal, cleansed of all effects.
 
*[Second Chance Attack] '''No Escape''': Just as it seems her target will evade her attack she reveals that the first attack was a fake and unleashes her real attack.
 
*[Killing Blow] '''Negation of Existence''': She draws back her sword to a readied position by her hip, then unleashes a mighty overhead slash, sending an overwhelming torrent of nothingness at the target, ripping apart its very existence.
 
*[Finishing Attack: Barrage] '''Eternal Oubliette''': She plants her sword point first in the ground in front of her, an eight-spoked magical circle of utter blackness forming beneath her feet. She holds her left hand out, palm up, and intones:
 
Darkness beyond all reason
 
Emptiness beyond all hope
 
Void beyond all escape
 
Oblivion beyond all memory
 
Existence beyond all ending
 
ETERNAL OUBLIETTE.
 
She closes the fingers of her left hand. A matching circle appears beneath her target. As she does, eight pillars, black as blackest night rise up around the target or target area. Iron walls erupt from between the pillars, connecting them. Strands of black steel weave themselves into a dome above the octagon, sealing in the area. Those entrapped experience what it is like to be utterly forgotten for an eternity. Then, the prison shatters, releasing them, if they survived.
 
  
 
==Songs==
 
==Songs==
 
===Character Song===
 
===Character Song===
 
[https://duckduckgo.com/?q=!yt+7TA7cuF26_k Cynical World - Kajiura Yuki]
 
[https://duckduckgo.com/?q=!yt+7TA7cuF26_k Cynical World - Kajiura Yuki]
Good intentions lost in thin air
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You were craving for affection
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And a certain invitation
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|Good intentions lost in thin air<br>You were craving for affection<br>And a certain invitation<br>Led you here to me<br>In the cynical world
Led you here to me
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In the cynical world
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===Themes===
 
===Themes===
 
*Sable Dragoon's Theme: [https://duckduckgo.com/?q=!yt+S3vGpRsiz5I Reveal - Kajiura Yuki]
 
*Sable Dragoon's Theme: [https://duckduckgo.com/?q=!yt+S3vGpRsiz5I Reveal - Kajiura Yuki]
 
*Chiyoko's Theme: [https://duckduckgo.com/?q=!yt+u2POL2xFjp4 A Shadow - Kajiura Yuki]
 
*Chiyoko's Theme: [https://duckduckgo.com/?q=!yt+u2POL2xFjp4 A Shadow - Kajiura Yuki]
*Dragoon Furioso Theme: [https://duckduckgo.com/?q=!yt+0grW35E03s8 Makyuu Ichii-Bal - Agematsu Noriyasu]
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*Dragoon Furioso Theme: [https://duckduckgo.com/?q=!yt+8XRylNe2xSo Makyuu Ichii-Bal - Agematsu Noriyasu]
*Eternal Oubliette Theme: [https:///duckduckgo.com/?q=!yt+sTzeez6w1U0 Aura (evil version) - Kajiura Yuki]
 

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