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===What convinced you to make a pact?===
 
===What convinced you to make a pact?===
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Six months ago, Natsumi bore witness to the attack of a rogue daemon upon a community gathering attended by her father. While the monster was driven away by a ''mahou shoujo'', ten people lost their lives to the monster's horrific assault, and many more were injured, meaning that her father, Dr. Murasaki Kyosuke, had a lot of work to do. The attack left a lasting impression upon Natsumi, both in what these things could do to people, and in what it took to stop them. When Kekku showed up a month after the attack and explained to her just what the hell was going down, Natsumi made the pact -- she knew that she had to do her part to help the people of Shinohara against the rogue daemons.
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Several weeks after Natsumi's discovery of the records of her death, Natsumi bore witness to the attack of a rogue daemon upon a community gathering attended by her father. While the monster was driven away by a ''mahou shoujo'', ten people lost their lives to the monster's horrific assault, and many more were injured, meaning that her father, Dr. Murasaki Kyosuke, had a lot of work to do. The attack left a lasting impression upon Natsumi, both in what these things could do to people, and in what it took to stop them. When Kekku showed up a week after the attack and explained to her just what the hell was going down, Natsumi made the pact -- she knew that she had to do her part to help the people of Shinohara against the rogue daemons.
  
 
===What is your wish?===
 
===What is your wish?===

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