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Nekuto shook his head fiercely and snorted.  "No.  I thought you'd..."
 
Nekuto shook his head fiercely and snorted.  "No.  I thought you'd..."
  
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"We had to scatter when [[The Jokun|those elementals]] laid into us.  Some fell behind, but me and a few others marched south to the Summer Mountains and through the hills to [[Kirighast]].  I sent my father a letter, and he got me posted with the Legion here again."  Hejek hugged his adopted brother close.  "What about you?  Did you get reassigned to Kirighast?"
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"We had to scatter when [[the jokun|those elementals]] laid into us.  Some fell behind, but me and a few others marched south to the Summer Mountains and through the hills to [[Kirighast]].  I sent my father a letter, and he got me posted with the Legion here again."  Hejek hugged his adopted brother close.  "What about you?  Did you get reassigned to Kirighast?"
  
 
Ragara Tusare had begun dressing down her men after she saw Nekuto and Hejek knew each other, but now she stood uncomfortably close, not quite eavesdropping, but hovering and impatient.
 
Ragara Tusare had begun dressing down her men after she saw Nekuto and Hejek knew each other, but now she stood uncomfortably close, not quite eavesdropping, but hovering and impatient.

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