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Liasta turned away and hurried on.
 
Liasta turned away and hurried on.
  
She didn’t find a wise woman in the hills.  Or, at least, no woman wise enough to avoid the zombie.  She heard the thing before she saw it, the noisome chewing on flesh was unmistakable; and she smelled it before she heard it.  Liasta had become good at holding back her bile.  She came onto it from above and, when she pushed the rocks down onto the thing, pinning it, she tried not to think what it might mean that it’s clothing was Marukan.
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She didn’t find a wise woman in the hills.  Or, at least, not one wise enough to avoid the zombie.  She heard the thing before she saw it, the noisome chewing on flesh was unmistakable, and she smelled it before she heard it.  Liasta had become good at holding back her bile.  She came onto it from above and, when she pushed the rocks down onto the thing, pinning it, she tried not to think what it might mean that it’s clothing was Marukan.
  
The dead woman had had a basket; roots, mushrooms, mosses.  Enough food to last a week, if there was water, if the hen kept dropping eggs.  If, if, if…
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The dead woman had a basket; roots, mushrooms, mosses.  Enough food to last a week, if there was water, if the hen kept dropping eggs.  If, if, if…
  
 
Liasta sat down.  The zombie’s mute hand grasped, mindlessly, but could not reach her.  If.
 
Liasta sat down.  The zombie’s mute hand grasped, mindlessly, but could not reach her.  If.
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[[Heaven's Mandate]]
 
[[Heaven's Mandate]]
 
[[The Book of Broken Horses]]
 

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