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Closing the door tightly, Milli strolled to the driver's door, and took off with bracing speed, headed towards the cliff-front home of the Steel Magnolia of Natchez.  "I hope you ladies are comfortable.  If you'd have let our staff know, we could have had appropriate dress laid out for you at the house," he sneered.  "As is, I'm sure this will do.  After all, it's an informal affair."
 
Closing the door tightly, Milli strolled to the driver's door, and took off with bracing speed, headed towards the cliff-front home of the Steel Magnolia of Natchez.  "I hope you ladies are comfortable.  If you'd have let our staff know, we could have had appropriate dress laid out for you at the house," he sneered.  "As is, I'm sure this will do.  After all, it's an informal affair."
 
  
 
"Apparently she's interested in dressing you and me," Zadie snapped, her eyes narrowing as she made certain to face caroline.  Angling to the front so that Milli could hear clear, she practically hollared, "I'da come nekked if I knew you all were gonna dress us, mister."
 
"Apparently she's interested in dressing you and me," Zadie snapped, her eyes narrowing as she made certain to face caroline.  Angling to the front so that Milli could hear clear, she practically hollared, "I'da come nekked if I knew you all were gonna dress us, mister."
 
  
 
Caroline didn't hear what was said but she knows Zadie well enough to get the jist of it from her response. And instead of shouting, she very calmly says to Zadie, "Now, darlin, it's not worth yellin' at the hired help. He can't help the deficiencies in his upbringin', and he '''is''' after all a ''man''. How would '''he''' know what appropriate dress is?" She pauses politely and then says, as if surprised, "Oh, unless he's gay. And then his fashion advice would definitely be worth listenin' to. Are you a homosexual, sir?" she asks in a tone of politeness without bothering to turn around for an answer.
 
Caroline didn't hear what was said but she knows Zadie well enough to get the jist of it from her response. And instead of shouting, she very calmly says to Zadie, "Now, darlin, it's not worth yellin' at the hired help. He can't help the deficiencies in his upbringin', and he '''is''' after all a ''man''. How would '''he''' know what appropriate dress is?" She pauses politely and then says, as if surprised, "Oh, unless he's gay. And then his fashion advice would definitely be worth listenin' to. Are you a homosexual, sir?" she asks in a tone of politeness without bothering to turn around for an answer.
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Caroline's blue eyes skim over the other assembled company -- and my, my, there is some really ''darlin''' eye candy about this evening, that is certain. Mmm! -- but it's the older gentleman's mouth moving that catches her attention. It doesn't bode well when you're greeted at the door with being the 'entertainment.' And though oblivious to the '''why''' of the undercurrents, Caroline is exceedingly aware that there are some. She remains near Zadie. The girl is a goldfish in a pool of piranha and she doesn't even know it. She doesn't speak until spoken to, however, that would just be rude.
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Caroline's blue eyes skim over the other assembled company -- and my, my, there is some really ''darlin''' eye candy about this evening, that is certain. Mmm! -- but it's the older gentleman's mouth moving that catches her attention. It doesn't bode well when you're greeted at the door with being the 'entertainment.' And though oblivious to the *why* of the undercurrents, Caroline is exceedingly aware that there are some. She remains near Zadie. The girl is a goldfish in a pool of piranha and she doesn't even know it. She doesn't speak until spoken to, however, that would just be rude.
  
  
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And then Evangeline says words in a string that.... should make sense in that they are English. Right? They create coherent sentences. But those sentences might as well be gibberish because... what in the name of all that's holy is a ghoul and why would she call the soldiers this? KILLING ARTS? WHAT? The deaf young woman is now beyond alarmed. Her eyes flicker to Zadie to see what's happening because the hostess seems to think she'll understand. But Caroline herself is still in the dark... and keeping her face schooled into polite lines is suddenly very difficult with the addition of adrenalized fear.
 
And then Evangeline says words in a string that.... should make sense in that they are English. Right? They create coherent sentences. But those sentences might as well be gibberish because... what in the name of all that's holy is a ghoul and why would she call the soldiers this? KILLING ARTS? WHAT? The deaf young woman is now beyond alarmed. Her eyes flicker to Zadie to see what's happening because the hostess seems to think she'll understand. But Caroline herself is still in the dark... and keeping her face schooled into polite lines is suddenly very difficult with the addition of adrenalized fear.
 
  
 
Sensing Caroline's fear, Zadie trys to give her a reassuring smile.  But it is tighter than she means, cooler than would be helpful.  "Excuse me, ma'am," she states, her voice clear in the silence, "wouldn't it be kinder if poor Miss Caroline were included in all this grandiose planning?  Her being human and all, not to put a fine point on it."
 
Sensing Caroline's fear, Zadie trys to give her a reassuring smile.  But it is tighter than she means, cooler than would be helpful.  "Excuse me, ma'am," she states, her voice clear in the silence, "wouldn't it be kinder if poor Miss Caroline were included in all this grandiose planning?  Her being human and all, not to put a fine point on it."
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Pettigrew stalked to the window, now that the main event had completely distracted the entire audience.  "Ally, buddy, pal, lap dog.  I'm leaving, and devil take the hindmost," he screamed, as large taloned arms reached through the shattering window to pull him free from the parlour.  "We have an agreement, then?  Zadie and Grandma older then Moses stay, I go, your pet gets to keep a pet Tremere, and none the wiser?"
 
Pettigrew stalked to the window, now that the main event had completely distracted the entire audience.  "Ally, buddy, pal, lap dog.  I'm leaving, and devil take the hindmost," he screamed, as large taloned arms reached through the shattering window to pull him free from the parlour.  "We have an agreement, then?  Zadie and Grandma older then Moses stay, I go, your pet gets to keep a pet Tremere, and none the wiser?"
 
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