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She stood before the great edifice, calling the Sun to task for the dereliction of his duty. Her mighty shouts echoed throughout the emptied heart of Yu-shan for an entire hour, through streets and alleys thronged with the god-corpses of countless unlucky divinities whose sole misfortune was standing against a Mari without a Kitty to hold her back any further.  
 
She stood before the great edifice, calling the Sun to task for the dereliction of his duty. Her mighty shouts echoed throughout the emptied heart of Yu-shan for an entire hour, through streets and alleys thronged with the god-corpses of countless unlucky divinities whose sole misfortune was standing against a Mari without a Kitty to hold her back any further.  
  
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When no answer was forthcoming, she strode boldly to the great jade doors, heedless to the disintegrating Essence bolts sparking harmlessly off her adamant skin. With strength sufficient to uproot the pillars of the sky, she tore the Jade Pleasure Dome itself from its invulnerable foundations and slammed it into Yu-Shan, crushing miles of Heaven under the shattered rubble of the Palace of the Primordials.  
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When no answer was forthcoming, she strode boldly to the great jade doors, heedless to the disintegrating Essence bolts sparking harmlessly off her adamant skin. With strength sufficient to uproot the pillars of the sky, she tore the Jade Pleasure Dome itself from its invulnerable foundations, crushing miles of Heaven under the shattered rubble of the Palace of the Primordials.  
  
 
As she sifted through the wreckage, casually executing lesser divinities with broken necks, the first of the Incarnae to encounter her was Venus, who attempted to sway her with honeyed words and the promise of sensual delights. Halfway through her blandishments, Mari smashed the Whore of the Gods across the face with a glorious golden backhand, so hard that it actually severed her head from her body, the shocked expression on her face distorted by the decapitating impact. The Incarnae had ignored her words, and so she would ignore theirs.  
 
As she sifted through the wreckage, casually executing lesser divinities with broken necks, the first of the Incarnae to encounter her was Venus, who attempted to sway her with honeyed words and the promise of sensual delights. Halfway through her blandishments, Mari smashed the Whore of the Gods across the face with a glorious golden backhand, so hard that it actually severed her head from her body, the shocked expression on her face distorted by the decapitating impact. The Incarnae had ignored her words, and so she would ignore theirs.  

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