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The coffin is sprawled carelessly behind the throne, the place where it formerly rested now occupied by the too-small form of a Solar Exalt. The door to the tiny chamber opens, revealing the bodies of Nysela and hundreds of the righteous dead lying scattered in the corridor beyond.
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The coffin is sprawled carelessly behind the throne, the place where it formerly rested now occupied by the too-small form of a Solar Exalt.
  
 
Mari strokes Kitty without looking at him, eyes fixed on the windows of distant viewing, telling her of the woes of Creation. And they are many indeed. Below her, by the command of a heartless Sun, Oramus clashes with Isidoros, while the Endless Desert struggles against the Sea That Marched Against The Flame at their feet. The stultifying, dominating power of Sacheverell's opened eye wars with the incomparable order imposed by She Who Lives In Her Name. The other Yozis do battle against the apocalypse gods Sol Invictus released in his final moments, but the victor is ultimately immaterial, for Creation is already ravaged by the scars of their strife.
 
Mari strokes Kitty without looking at him, eyes fixed on the windows of distant viewing, telling her of the woes of Creation. And they are many indeed. Below her, by the command of a heartless Sun, Oramus clashes with Isidoros, while the Endless Desert struggles against the Sea That Marched Against The Flame at their feet. The stultifying, dominating power of Sacheverell's opened eye wars with the incomparable order imposed by She Who Lives In Her Name. The other Yozis do battle against the apocalypse gods Sol Invictus released in his final moments, but the victor is ultimately immaterial, for Creation is already ravaged by the scars of their strife.
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Nee-san had fallen into darkness. It had broken her heart, and without Shadow to help her, she might well have had her mind broken as well. So they pursued her across Creation; Frost and Wrath and Adara and all the others. And they had found Shrike, in the end. And they had wept, because she had turned to the Neverborn of her own free will.  
 
Nee-san had fallen into darkness. It had broken her heart, and without Shadow to help her, she might well have had her mind broken as well. So they pursued her across Creation; Frost and Wrath and Adara and all the others. And they had found Shrike, in the end. And they had wept, because she had turned to the Neverborn of her own free will.  
  
Then there was nothing left for it but battle, battle so bloody and violent that of all the Celestials who had come after Shrike, only Shadow and Mari remained. Of course, nearly half a dozen Deathlords had met their true, final deaths in the end... but she would not trade a thousand dead Solar ghosts for the lives of one of her friends. More importantly, over twenty deathknights had perished in that battle... including the Cerement-Shrouded Ibis.
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Then there was nothing left for it but battle, battle so bloody and violent that of all the Celestials who had come after Shrike, only Shadow and Mari remained. Of course, nearly half a dozen Deathlords had met their true, final deaths in the end... but she would not trade a thousand dead Solar ghosts for the lives of one of her friends.  
  
 
But the true horror was what came after that. She returned from her expedition to find Kraik dead; unable to bear the shame that Mari was his superior in artifice, he had hanged himself in despair. The General Staff plotted on their own account and expected Mari to rubberstamp everything they said. So many people were relying on her... and the only person who would help was Kitty. The other Deathlords had joined into coalition, working alongside the Demon Empress to uproot Lookshy and conquer or kill Creation. It was too much for one girl to bear... and so she did the only thing she could think of.
 
But the true horror was what came after that. She returned from her expedition to find Kraik dead; unable to bear the shame that Mari was his superior in artifice, he had hanged himself in despair. The General Staff plotted on their own account and expected Mari to rubberstamp everything they said. So many people were relying on her... and the only person who would help was Kitty. The other Deathlords had joined into coalition, working alongside the Demon Empress to uproot Lookshy and conquer or kill Creation. It was too much for one girl to bear... and so she did the only thing she could think of.
  
It had made so much sense then. The Unconquered Sun was the (Once-)Guarding Star; certainly he could help protect Creation and get rid of all the baddies, right? But he wasn't doing his job, wouldn't answer the prayers she made to him from the shrine within the Temple of Light. In the end, harried by demands and regret and self-doubt, she decided that there was nothing else to do but speak to Sol Invictus himself. Blossom, eager to make up for her past sins, had brought Mari and Kitty to the gates of Heaven. But the golden lion on duty refused to let her in. She could see the fear in his eyes as he denied her entrance, but on this matter, her mind was made up. She was intent on seeing the Sun, and nothing would stay her course.  
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It had made so much sense then. The Unconquered Sun was the (Once-)Guarding Star; certainly he could help protect Creation and get rid of all the baddies, right? But he wasn't doing his job, wouldn't answer the prayers she made to him from the shrine within the Temple of Light. In the end, harried by demands and regret and self-doubt, there was nothing else to do but speak to Sol Invictus himself. Blossom, eager to make up for her past sins, had brought Mari and Kitty to the gates of Heaven. But the golden lion on duty refused to let her in. She could see the fear in his eyes as he denied her entrance, but on this matter, her mind was made up. She was intent on seeing the Sun, and nothing would stay her course.  
  
 
She tried to be merciful at first. She left the celestial lions and lion dogs throwing themselves in her way alive, albeit horribly mangled, as she continued her inexorable path toward the Jade Pleasure Dome. But every battle sapped her strength, and it didn't matter how kind she was - the guardians of Heaven came after her with murderous intent, and when Kitty died, sacrificing his life to protect hers, she decided that his would not be the only death that day. With the Ghost-Eating Blow, she devoured her assailants for their motes, becoming stronger and stronger with every kill she made, until at last even the Aerial Legion lay broken at her feet, before the now-ominous shadow of the Jade Pleasure Dome.
 
She tried to be merciful at first. She left the celestial lions and lion dogs throwing themselves in her way alive, albeit horribly mangled, as she continued her inexorable path toward the Jade Pleasure Dome. But every battle sapped her strength, and it didn't matter how kind she was - the guardians of Heaven came after her with murderous intent, and when Kitty died, sacrificing his life to protect hers, she decided that his would not be the only death that day. With the Ghost-Eating Blow, she devoured her assailants for their motes, becoming stronger and stronger with every kill she made, until at last even the Aerial Legion lay broken at her feet, before the now-ominous shadow of the Jade Pleasure Dome.
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Mercury fled. This was the smartest thing any of them could have done. But even if ''samsara'' had not established the dictate that Mari's pursuit of justice would be inexorable, the Maiden of Journeys still could not have outrun the Solar's meteoric, pouncing leaps of pursuit, which shattered the imperishable adamant floor of Heaven for hundreds of yards around every place she touched down. Neither sail nor mount nor fleetness of foot availed her, and when she finally turned to face her hunter, her Essence and strength had been depleted by her flight. In that state, ripping Mercury's arm off and beating her to death with it was a trivial matter for Mari.
 
Mercury fled. This was the smartest thing any of them could have done. But even if ''samsara'' had not established the dictate that Mari's pursuit of justice would be inexorable, the Maiden of Journeys still could not have outrun the Solar's meteoric, pouncing leaps of pursuit, which shattered the imperishable adamant floor of Heaven for hundreds of yards around every place she touched down. Neither sail nor mount nor fleetness of foot availed her, and when she finally turned to face her hunter, her Essence and strength had been depleted by her flight. In that state, ripping Mercury's arm off and beating her to death with it was a trivial matter for Mari.
  
Returning to the ruins of the Dome, Mari encountered Jupiter. She fell to her knees before the Lawgiver, baring her neck to the Solar. Curious, Mari asked why she did not offer resistance. Jupiter's only answer was that it was clearly Fate's design that the Maidens fall by her hand, and thus there was no point in delaying the inevitable. Neck still bared, she offered a dagger to Mari, claiming that it would kill her quickly and cleanly, were she to put all her strength behind the blow. Mari weighed the weapon in her hand, pondering the decision to strike for long moments, before driving it hilt-deep into her own neck. As she expected, Jupiter had tangled their fates, and while every wound dealt to Jupiter would be visited on Mari in full, she had not considered that the reverse was also true. Mari left the corpse of Jupiter, hoist by her own petard, behind her, as she approached the remains of the Dome.
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Returning to the ruins of the Dome, Mari encountered Jupiter. She fell to her knees before the Lawgiver, baring her neck to the Solar. Curious, Mari asked why she did not offer resistance. Jupiter's only answer was that it was clearly Fate's design that the Maidens fall by her hand, and thus there was no point in delaying the inevitable. Neck still bared, she offered a dagger to Mari, claiming that it would kill her quickly and cleanly, were she to put all her strength behind the blow. Mari weighed the weapon in her hand, pondering the decision to strike for long moments, before driving it hilt-deep into her own neck. As she expected, Jupiter had attempted to switch their fates around, and while every wound dealt to Jupiter would be visited on Mari in full she had not considered that the reverse was also true. Mari left the corpse of Jupiter, hoist by her own petard, behind her, as she approached the remains of the Dome.
  
 
Saturn was there waiting for her, slim daiklave in hand, violet eyes glittering with tears. He had left - ''commanded'' her and her sisters to die, she whispered, and her only consolation was that she could take it out on Mari. The Lawgiver curtly replied that the Sun had much to answer for, and right now, Saturn was simply another obstacle keeping her from so. The Maiden of Endings fought with suicidal abandon, knowing that ''samsara'' had abandoned them all that day, and that even if she won, there would be nothing but shadows and dust for her to return to. Perhaps it was a mercy that Mari ended her pitiful existence with her own blade. She certainly smiled in that evanescent moment before she dispersed in a zephyr of violet Essence.
 
Saturn was there waiting for her, slim daiklave in hand, violet eyes glittering with tears. He had left - ''commanded'' her and her sisters to die, she whispered, and her only consolation was that she could take it out on Mari. The Lawgiver curtly replied that the Sun had much to answer for, and right now, Saturn was simply another obstacle keeping her from so. The Maiden of Endings fought with suicidal abandon, knowing that ''samsara'' had abandoned them all that day, and that even if she won, there would be nothing but shadows and dust for her to return to. Perhaps it was a mercy that Mari ended her pitiful existence with her own blade. She certainly smiled in that evanescent moment before she dispersed in a zephyr of violet Essence.
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That did it. With a roar of divine fury, the Unconquered Sun joined battle with Mari. Perfection clashed against perfection in this epic duel - and not simply perfection, but power. The opening moves devastated the country around them, and every blow after that wrought havoc upon the land. He blocked her deadly fists with his gleaming golden shield, while she turned the thrusts of the Godspear of All-Searing Noon aside with deft flicks of the wrist, when she did not take the strikes full on and laugh as they failed to harm her. As the battle dragged on, the deciding factor changed from Charms and Essence to simpler qualities, like Virtues. Which the Sun had forsaken. By turning a deaf ear to her pleas, he had abandoned his Conviction. By fleeing instead of answering her challenge, he had sacrificed his Valor. In permitting her to provoke him to battle, she had broken his Temperance. And now, to validate his Conviction, he had no choice but to use the most dreadful of weapons at his disposal.
 
That did it. With a roar of divine fury, the Unconquered Sun joined battle with Mari. Perfection clashed against perfection in this epic duel - and not simply perfection, but power. The opening moves devastated the country around them, and every blow after that wrought havoc upon the land. He blocked her deadly fists with his gleaming golden shield, while she turned the thrusts of the Godspear of All-Searing Noon aside with deft flicks of the wrist, when she did not take the strikes full on and laugh as they failed to harm her. As the battle dragged on, the deciding factor changed from Charms and Essence to simpler qualities, like Virtues. Which the Sun had forsaken. By turning a deaf ear to her pleas, he had abandoned his Conviction. By fleeing instead of answering her challenge, he had sacrificed his Valor. In permitting her to provoke him to battle, she had broken his Temperance. And now, to validate his Conviction, he had no choice but to use the most dreadful of weapons at his disposal.
  
The Titan-Calling Clarion rang out, beckoning forth Yozis and sealed terrors from the prehistory of Creation. He bade them destroy Mari, but the apocalypse gods simply began the work of ending Creation, with her destruction as an incidental benefit, while the Yozis merely chuckled at the irony inherent in their former jailor now begging them for help against one of his proteges, who now sought to destroy him... much as he had done the same to them by creating the Exalted Host. They mocked him, saying that they would consider doing as he asked... ''after'' Mari laid him low. The Sun's Conviction wavered then, just for a moment... but it was enough of an opening for Mari to drive her hand into his golden chest, and rip out his heart, much as the Dragon Kings had done to honor him in the ancient past.
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The Titan-Calling Clarion rang out, beckoning forth Yozis and sealed terrors from the prehistory of Creation. He bade them destroy Mari, but the apocalypse gods simply began the work of ending Creation, with her destruction as an incidentaly benefit, while the Yozis merely chuckled at the irony inherent in their former jailor now begging them for help against one of his proteges, who now sought to destroy him... much as he had done the same to them by creating the Exalted Host. They mocked him, saying that they would consider doing as he asked... ''after'' Mari laid him low. The Sun's Conviction wavered then, just for a moment... but it was enough of an opening for Mari to drive her hand into his golden chest, and rip out his heart, much as the Dragon Kings had done to honor him in the ancient past.
  
 
As the Sun fell to his knees, he looked up to her, eyes pleading. "Then... you must protect Creation," he implored her.  
 
As the Sun fell to his knees, he looked up to her, eyes pleading. "Then... you must protect Creation," he implored her.  
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And now, within the heart of the Daystar, surrounded by the restive sleep of great Gardullis, Mari looks upon the woes of the world... and is unmoved. She's come so far, won so much, lost so much. It would be an insult to their memory to stop at half measures now. She touches the stud that unchains the soul and mind of the Greater Elemental Dragon of Fire... and sits back to watch the end of the world.  
 
And now, within the heart of the Daystar, surrounded by the restive sleep of great Gardullis, Mari looks upon the woes of the world... and is unmoved. She's come so far, won so much, lost so much. It would be an insult to their memory to stop at half measures now. She touches the stud that unchains the soul and mind of the Greater Elemental Dragon of Fire... and sits back to watch the end of the world.  
  
Unbinding Gardullis will place the Daystar into a positive feedback loop, increasing the Sun's output by uncountable orders of magnitude. The increased radiance will draw forth more power from the Wyld, which will only serve to fuel the dragon's fury even more. And since the Sun is the ultimate symbol of order and power, its rays will burn so brightly that they will sear the borders of Creation shut, eradicating shadowlands with radiant, cleansing power, calcifying wyld zones into seas of shattered marble, and forever separating the material from the immaterial world. Its punishing light will incinerate all below it, mortal, raksha, demon and Exalt alike, erasing even the Yozis themselves from existence with its infinite, purifying light, leaving its victims as nothing more than scorched outlines in a sun-blasted wasteland. Gods who are "lucky" enough to be immaterial will be trapped in that state for eternity, there to slowly disperse over countless aeons, bereft of both domains and worshippers to empower them. There will be no more Exalts, because there will be nobody and nothing ''left'' to Exalt. Perhaps the Neverborn will rejoice in their Oblivion-tombs... before they realize that the scorched Creation will forever be the Fetter that prevents their fall into the Final Death.  
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Unbinding Gardullis will place the Daystar into a positive feedback loop, increasing the Sun's output by uncountable orders of magnitude. The increased radiance will draw forth more power from the Wyld, which will only serve to fuel the dragon's fury even more. And since the Sun is the ultimate symbol of order and power, its rays will burn so brightly that they will sear the borders of Creation shut, eradicating shadowlands with radiant, cleansing power, calcifying wyld zones into seas of shattered marble, and forever separating the material from the immaterial world. Its punishing light will incinerate all below it, mortal, raksha, demon and Exalt alike, erasing even the Yozis themselves from existence with its infinite, purifying light, leaving its victims as nothing more than scorched outlines in a sun-blasted wasteland. Gods who were lucky enough to be immaterial will be trapped in that state for eternity, there to slowly disperse over countless aeons, bereft of both domains and worshippers to empower them. There will be no more Exalts, because there will be nobody and nothing ''left'' to Exalt. Perhaps the Neverborn will rejoice in their Oblivion-tombs... before they realize that the scorched Creation will forever be the Fetter that prevents their fall into the Final Death.  
  
 
Then, without the Essence of the Wyld to fuel it, Gardullis and the Daystar will draw on that of Creation, leaching the life from the world itself to sustain its frenetic burn. But without a connection to the Wyld, the Essence of Creation is finite, and can be depleted. Eventually, even the Daystar itself will burn out, a giant, floating cinder hovering over a sterilized wasteland of eternal night.
 
Then, without the Essence of the Wyld to fuel it, Gardullis and the Daystar will draw on that of Creation, leaching the life from the world itself to sustain its frenetic burn. But without a connection to the Wyld, the Essence of Creation is finite, and can be depleted. Eventually, even the Daystar itself will burn out, a giant, floating cinder hovering over a sterilized wasteland of eternal night.

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