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"...and when I returned home from [[Celeren]], I found my wife sleeping in Wang Hsu's house, and half my flock along with her."  The shepherd looked down and all but tore apart his rice hat in his nervous hands.
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"...and when I returned home from [[Celeren]], I found my wife sleeping in Wang Hsu's houses, and half my flock along with her."  The shepherd looked down and all but tore apart his rice hat in his nervous hands.
  
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Storm of Amber sighed.  He didn't need [[Serrakeen]], hovering nearby, to know that the man was lying.  The Zenith stood away from the post-fence and fixed the full force of his Essence on the shepherd.  "Look at me," he said and though the farmer struggled to continue his contemplation of his tattered hat he found his gaze drawn irresistibly up to meet the Zenith's eye.   
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Storm of Amber sighed.  He didn't need [[Serrakeen]], hovering nearby, to tell him that the man was lying.  The Zenith stood away from the post-fence and fixed the full force of his Essence on the shepherd.  "Look at me," he said, and though the farmer struggled to continue his contemplation of his tattered hat, he found his gaze drawn irresistibly up to meet the Zenith's eye.   
  
 
"How many sheep did you lose?"
 
"How many sheep did you lose?"

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