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''It's the fourth morning of travel and, beside a few rotting jetties, all signs of civilization are gone. [[Batbayar]] puts the spyglass back in it's case and, as is his custom,  fills the chill air with stories of his travels past.''
 
''It's the fourth morning of travel and, beside a few rotting jetties, all signs of civilization are gone. [[Batbayar]] puts the spyglass back in it's case and, as is his custom,  fills the chill air with stories of his travels past.''
  
[[Batbayar]]: "Princess, did I ever tell you of Mal'rock? All [[garos'thuja]] are a sight to see, but [[Mal'rock]]...
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[[Batbayar]]: "Princess, did I ever tell you of Mal'rock? Any other time of the year it's nothing to look at but at the bloomfest, they call bloomfest Ju-ju-galaa. At the time of [[Ju-ju fest]], the town is filled with hanging bells and chimess. The giant pines are..."
  
 
[[Else]]: "Yes Sire, you told me of Mal'rock many times. I shall see it in a few days my self so no sense in wasting wind."
 
[[Else]]: "Yes Sire, you told me of Mal'rock many times. I shall see it in a few days my self so no sense in wasting wind."
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[[Batbayar]]: "You might be right princess but..."
 
[[Batbayar]]: "You might be right princess but..."
  
[[Else]]: "I asked you star-many times to stop calling me that, Sire."
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[[Else]]: "I asked you star-many times to stop calling me that, father."
  
 
[[Batbayar]]: "''sigh'' Well, I'm sure [[Ake]] would like to hear more of [[Mal'rock]]."
 
[[Batbayar]]: "''sigh'' Well, I'm sure [[Ake]] would like to hear more of [[Mal'rock]]."
  
[[Ake]]: "Whole winter we listened about all the places we are going to see, Sire. There are no surprises left I fear. "
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[[Ake]]: "Whole winter we listened about all the places we'll see, Sire. There are no surprises left I fear. "
  
 
[[Batbayar]], acting offended: "Well if no one wants to hear my story I better keep quiet or I'll have a mutiny on my hands. It's my turn to steer anyway, pass me the pole [[Ake]]."
 
[[Batbayar]], acting offended: "Well if no one wants to hear my story I better keep quiet or I'll have a mutiny on my hands. It's my turn to steer anyway, pass me the pole [[Ake]]."
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[[Batbayar]] on [[Jabu]]:  
 
[[Batbayar]] on [[Jabu]]:  
  
"I'll tell you of one funny character. [[Jabu]] is a native Gnome, and one of the first ones to accept the concept of trade. But a few things he still does not understand. He's an innkeeper and brewer. Makes the finest drink I ever tried in all my travels. But, he can't get rid of the habit of him self chosing what his customers drink. I admit, he knows how to pick ones drink, but still, the one with the silver is the one who chooses! Silly gnome. But he knows his spirits. They are his art! And what an assortment he has. Whatever I could think of, he had it, and of a quality and taste rarely matched. And listen to this, all of the alcohol he has, he makes him self. Ale, cyder, [[Dandelion wine]], [[Araq]]... I guess he did some traveling of his own when he was younger. But as most gnomes, he's not one to talk about him self so I never found out where he learned to make all of these liquers."
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"I'll tell you of one funny character. [[Jabu]] is a Gnome, but, he has a business in town!  Ain't that a rarity? [[Jabu's]] he calls it. Imagine a gnome among all those halflings and humans, how this one stands it I know not. Anyway, as gnomes tend to be this one is a master at his art. And his art is spirits. Not the Ju-ju kind mind you, the intoxicating kind. And what an assortment he has. Whatever I could think of, he had it, and of a quality and taste rarely matched. And listen to this, all of the alcohol he has, he makes him self. Ale, cyder, [[Dandelion wine]], [[Araq]]..."
  
 
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