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  Iz explained that he had talked with Shye, and had been trapped in temporal stasis since the fall of the Ronkan empire.
 
  Iz explained that he had talked with Shye, and had been trapped in temporal stasis since the fall of the Ronkan empire.
 
  Iz explained that Shye was apparently planning on war.
 
  Iz explained that Shye was apparently planning on war.
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  Iz accompanied them to the mine. The group investigated the western mineshaft, but upon attempting to get into the southern  
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  Iz accompanied them to the mine. The group investigated the western mineshaft, but upon attempting to get into the southern and eastern
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     and eastern mines, found that the doors had been melted, and the openings closed with smooth stone.
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     mines, found that the doors had been melted, and the openings closed with smooth stone.
 
  When they returned to the ship (parked a mile up), Iz was waiting for them.
 
  When they returned to the ship (parked a mile up), Iz was waiting for them.
 
  The group decided to head north, and Iz decided to accompany them.
 
  The group decided to head north, and Iz decided to accompany them.

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