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''"The police come. Leave her."''<br><br>
 
''"The police come. Leave her."''<br><br>
  
''A final hard shove, the ferocious crack of the wall against my head, and I let the blackness inside swallow me…''<br><br>
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''A final hard shove, the ferocious crack of the wall against my head, and I let the blackness inside swallow me up…''<br><br>
  
 
She had no sense of how long it took her to deliver it all up, she only knew that she was breathing hard and sweating when she finished. Irina opened her eyes and couldn't focus. She blinked and something hot and wet splashed her chest. She wiped the tears away and sniffed and looked at Renny.<br><br>
 
She had no sense of how long it took her to deliver it all up, she only knew that she was breathing hard and sweating when she finished. Irina opened her eyes and couldn't focus. She blinked and something hot and wet splashed her chest. She wiped the tears away and sniffed and looked at Renny.<br><br>

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