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It was 3 am when the bell woke King Vance of Vulsara.  The officer of the day in the trump room was on the screen.  The look in his eyes was enough to get him out of bed.
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It was 3 am when the bell woke me.  The officer of the day in the trump room was on the screen.  The look in his eyes was enough to get me out of bed.
  
 
“Lieutenant, I am guessing you need me?”
 
“Lieutenant, I am guessing you need me?”
  
“Sir, uh.. I'm on duty in the Trump hall and I need you here immediately.  Also anyone else of the blood.  My next call is to Admiral Vander, followed by Captain Agrom.  “
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“Sir, uh.. Im on duty in the Trump hall and I need you here immediately.  Also anyone else of the blood.  My next call is to Admiral Vander, followed by Captain Agrom.  “
  
Turning to summon his uniform he added his sword just in case.
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Turning to summon my uniform I add my sword just in case.
  
“Is the world on fire?  I think I would know...Will 5 minutes be enough?”
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“Is the world on fire?  I thin I would know...Will 5 minutes be enough?”
  
 
He looks away, then back, “Uh...No sir, it won't”
 
He looks away, then back, “Uh...No sir, it won't”
  
Sensing the pattern he felt a wildly damaged person with a pattern imprint.  He noddded  and let the LT go.  
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Sensing the pattern I feel a wildly damaged person with a pattern imprint.  I nod and let the LT go.  
  
 
Pulling my deck I pull Vander's trump.
 
Pulling my deck I pull Vander's trump.

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