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Ā Bí, first of the [[Black Caul Chiurgeons]], picked up the arm and carried it back to the basalt worktable.  He bowed low, and the black shroud he wore rustled with the movement.  "Who, mistress?  And what?"
 
Ā Bí, first of the [[Black Caul Chiurgeons]], picked up the arm and carried it back to the basalt worktable.  He bowed low, and the black shroud he wore rustled with the movement.  "Who, mistress?  And what?"
  
Weeping Jade spun on him, her face a mask of fury broken by the soulsteel rings and studs she'd pierced through the flesh of her face.  "[[Rivers Between Us]]!  Every patrol those damned Solars send out is armored head to foot in Gunzosha suits.  He didn't steal them from [[Lookshy]], so he must've built them himself.  But where did he get his hands on that much raw jade?  Does he piss moonsilver and crap orichalcum?"  The Abyssal threw a pair of thick, serrated shears to the ground.
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Weeping Jade spun on him, her face a mask of fury broken by the soulsteel rings and studs she'd pierced through the flesh of her face.  "[[Rivers Between Us]]!  Every patrol those damned Solars send out is armored head to foot in Gunzosha suits.  He didn't steal them from [[Lookshy]], so he must've built it himself.  But where did he get his hands on that much raw jade?  Does he piss moonsilver and crap orichalcum?"  The Abyssal threw a pair of thick, serrated shears to the ground.
  
 
"He could have developed a Charm," Ā Bí said.
 
"He could have developed a Charm," Ā Bí said.
  
She cut him off with a glare.  "And the speed!  Even if we had a dozen resurrection pits and all ten of you could cast Iron Reanimation, we could never build enough walking war machines to defeat them."
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She cut him off with a glare.  "And the speed!  Even with a dozen resurrection pits and all five of you casting Iron Reanimation, we could never have enough walking war machines active to defeat them."
  
 
As she spoke, Weeping Jade leaned back into her ghoulish work.  She stitched the Dragon Blooded arm to half a torso left over from an earlier, failed experiment with a god-blood and cemented the bond by driving an adamant rivet through the bone.  Ā Bí bent to help his mistress complete the latest of her Transcendent Revenant Vessels, the bodies that the [[Mask of Winters]]' elite Nemissaries wore when they walked abroad in Creation.  The grave-born artificer threaded soulsteel wires into the muscles of a second, merely mortal arm, to reinforce the flesh with necrotic power.  "Are the [[Prince Resplendent in the Ruin of Ages|Prince Resplendent's]] Hardened Killers not enough to turn the tide?"
 
As she spoke, Weeping Jade leaned back into her ghoulish work.  She stitched the Dragon Blooded arm to half a torso left over from an earlier, failed experiment with a god-blood and cemented the bond by driving an adamant rivet through the bone.  Ā Bí bent to help his mistress complete the latest of her Transcendent Revenant Vessels, the bodies that the [[Mask of Winters]]' elite Nemissaries wore when they walked abroad in Creation.  The grave-born artificer threaded soulsteel wires into the muscles of a second, merely mortal arm, to reinforce the flesh with necrotic power.  "Are the [[Prince Resplendent in the Ruin of Ages|Prince Resplendent's]] Hardened Killers not enough to turn the tide?"

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