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Zhen Zhou City: the Dark Age. Winter.
 
Zhen Zhou City: the Dark Age. Winter.
  
A light snow was falling from the clouded skies over Zhen Zhou City, but the frozen drizzle did not manage to put out the still glowing embers in what remained of the wood portions of Imperial Magistrate Station 306 – instead, the droplets simply conjured up the thick, black smoke from the smoking skeleton of the previously venerable structure. The gaping maw of a stone temple dog - blackened with soot from the flames - lay in a small crater on the sidewalk, mute testament to the force of the explosion that had levelled most of the House of Law.
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A light snow was falling from the clouded skies over Zhen Zhou City, but the frozen drizzle did not manage to put out the still glowing embers in what remained of the wood portions of Imperial Magistrate Station 306 – instead, the droplets simply conjured up the thick, black smoke from the smoking skeleton of the previously venerable statue. The gaping maw of a stone temple dog - blackened with soot from the flames - lay in a small crater on the sidewalk, mute testament to the force of the explosion that had levelled most of the House of Law.
  
 
A large car was pulling up to the improvised parking lot outside the area; its´ front lights illuminated a crisscrossed barrier of police tape and chalk outlines before it died down. The doors opened, and the driver stepped out – and then, with a mighty heave of the suspension as the it breathed a sigh of relief and very nearly sent the car bouncing, the mighty bulk of the passenger did likewise.
 
A large car was pulling up to the improvised parking lot outside the area; its´ front lights illuminated a crisscrossed barrier of police tape and chalk outlines before it died down. The doors opened, and the driver stepped out – and then, with a mighty heave of the suspension as the it breathed a sigh of relief and very nearly sent the car bouncing, the mighty bulk of the passenger did likewise.

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