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| Unacceptable motivation. Please generate a motivation that is both heroic and at least theoretically achievable. -[[User:Sunrunner|SunRunner]] 12:43, 29 July 2009 (PDT)
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| * Your new motivation is acceptable. Thank you. -[[User:Sunrunner|SunRunner]] 17:40, 29 July 2009 (PDT)
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| You need Intimacies, to number at least your Compassion in positive and negative intimacies. -[[User:Sunrunner|SunRunner]] 12:43, 29 July 2009 (PDT)<br>
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| * Those look fine. Cool. -[[User:Sunrunner|SunRunner]] 17:41, 29 July 2009 (PDT)
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| Physical Attributes (8), Social Attributes (4), Mental Attributes (7). 4 Bonus Points. -[[User:Sunrunner|SunRunner]] 12:45, 29 July 2009 (PDT)<br>
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| Abilities (47), Specialties (2). 6 Bonus Points. -[[User:Sunrunner|SunRunner]] 12:46, 29 July 2009 (PDT)<br>
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| Backgrounds (22). 12 Bonus Points. -[[User:Sunrunner|SunRunner]] 12:47, 29 July 2009 (PDT)<br>
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| * Backgrounds (19). 9 Bonus Points. -[[User:Sunrunner|SunRunner]] 17:43, 29 July 2009 (PDT)
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| Charms (18). 12 Bonus Points. -[[User:Sunrunner|SunRunner]] 12:48, 29 July 2009 (PDT)<br>
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| Essence (5). 14 Bonus Points. -[[User:Sunrunner|SunRunner]] 12:49, 29 July 2009 (PDT)<br>
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| Willpower (10). 4 Bonus Points. -[[User:Sunrunner|SunRunner]] 12:49, 29 July 2009 (PDT)<br>
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| * Willpower (8). 4 Bonus Points. -[[User:Sunrunner|SunRunner]] 17:44, 29 July 2009 (PDT)
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| Virtues (7). 0 Bonus Points. -[[User:Sunrunner|SunRunner]] 12:50, 29 July 2009 (PDT)<br>
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| Merits (3), Flaws (7). +4 Bonus Points. -[[User:Sunrunner|SunRunner]] 12:50, 29 July 2009 (PDT)<br>
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| Total Bonus Points: 48 of 45 Allowed. We are over budget.<br>
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| I would suggest dropping the hearthstone bracer artifact background and the cult background; which would leave you even-balanced and ready to enter play. -[[User:Sunrunner|SunRunner]] 12:52, 29 July 2009 (PDT)
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