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When prince Tarion XVI knew that he would soon receive the crown from his father, he went to [[AFeSF:_GaliaMalphoros|Malphoros]] to bring his fiancée, Sati Nailo, back. Being an independent woman, she was entirely against the marriage, even trying to run away, but she was caught and forced to go back to Lennorien. She then tried to convince prince Tarion to choose another queen, and just after he accepted the idea, he was murdered. Satis’ brother, Laucian, was framed, and the second in line, Raellian, Tarion’s brother, offered Sati his help, freeing Laucian in exchange for Sati’s agreement in marrying him, which she accepted.  
 
When prince Tarion XVI knew that he would soon receive the crown from his father, he went to [[AFeSF:_GaliaMalphoros|Malphoros]] to bring his fiancée, Sati Nailo, back. Being an independent woman, she was entirely against the marriage, even trying to run away, but she was caught and forced to go back to Lennorien. She then tried to convince prince Tarion to choose another queen, and just after he accepted the idea, he was murdered. Satis’ brother, Laucian, was framed, and the second in line, Raellian, Tarion’s brother, offered Sati his help, freeing Laucian in exchange for Sati’s agreement in marrying him, which she accepted.  
  
Laucian escaped the prison, and in the crowning ceremony he uncovered Raellian’s plots, showing everyone that Tarion’s murderer was actually his brother. Raellian was imprisoned, and Sati Nailo became the new queen of Lennorien.
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Laucian escaped the prison, and in the crowning ceremony he uncovered Raellian’s plots, showing everyone that Tarion’s murderer was actually his brother. Raellian was imprisoned, and Sati Nailo was then the new queen of Lennorien.
  
 
A month later, Raellian escaped, vowing to avenge himself against Laucian and his sister.
 
A month later, Raellian escaped, vowing to avenge himself against Laucian and his sister.

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