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“Let’s,” she said with a smile.  “The day is still young.”<br><br>   
 
“Let’s,” she said with a smile.  “The day is still young.”<br><br>   
  
So they crossed the Square after properly admiring Nelson’s Column and its fountains, and trod up St. Martin’s Lane for Seven Dials.  The surroundings grew steadily worse the farther they walked from the Mall until it quite fell into ruin by the time they’d crossed Long Acre for the famed intersection of the seven streets that gave the neighborhood its name.  The poverty and misery were grinding here and the people on the streets were many, some of whom were not above to lifting a purse or two should the opportunity arise.  Josephine and Ezekiel negotiated the slum carefully, dodging the garbage and dung, the pickpockets and prostitutes, all the way through to the less destitute neighborhood surrounding Covent Garden.  No. 4 Bow Street was just around the corner—there lay the birthplace of London’s police force, cheek by jowl with a notorious breeding ground for future criminals. The only difference lay in the amount of coin each neighborhood possessed and it many cases, only a copper stood between one fate and the other.  It was a paradox that simultaneously stunned and appalled Josephine, all the more wrenching for how easily one’s fortunes could change for better or worse.  She bought a bunch of violets from a flower girl off the steps of the theatre and slipped an extra farthing into her basket for luck. The tightly wrapped pinch of flowers were fragrant tucked in the bonnet ribbon at her ear, but the stench of the slum remained strong in her memory and only bolstered her resolve to ameliorate it, one individual at a time.  She glanced at the man at her side, wondering what he’d say of the plans that had come to her during their walk, even as she ran the figures necessary through her head.  Would he be interested, she wondered Or would his new duties as husband and head of household preclude acting on that interest?<br><br>
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So they crossed the Square after properly admiring Nelson’s Column and its fountains, and trod up St. Martin’s Lane for Seven Dials.  The surroundings grew steadily worse the farther they walked from the Mall until it quite fell into ruin by the time they’d crossed Long Acre for the famed intersection of the seven streets that gave the neighborhood its name.  The poverty and misery were grinding here and the people on the streets were many, some of whom were not above to lifting a purse or two should the opportunity arise.  Josephine and Ezekiel negotiated the slum carefully, dodging the garbage and dung, the pickpockets and prostitutes, all the way through to the less destitute neighborhood surrounding Covent Garden.  No. 4 Bow Street was just around the corner—there lay the birthplace of London’s police force, cheek by jowl with a notorious breeding ground for future criminals. The only difference lay in the amount of coin each neighborhood possessed and it many cases, only a copper stood between one fate and the other.  It was a paradox that simultaneously stunned and appalled Josephine, all the more wrenching for how easily one’s fortunes could change for better or worse.  She bought a bunch of violets from a flower girl off the steps of the theatre and slipped an extra farthing into her basket for luck. The tightly wrapped pinch of flowers were fragrant tucked in the bonnet ribbon at her ear, but the stench of the slum remained strong in her memory and only bolstered her resolve to ameliorate it, one individual at a time.  She glanced at the man at her side, wondering what he’d say of the plans that had come to her during their walk, even as she ran the figures necessary through her head.  ''Would he be interested? Or would his new duties as husband and head of household preclude acting on that interest?''<br><br>
  
 
''First present him with something to be interested in, Jo'', whispered the more practical side of her head, and she listened to it.  There would be time enough to show him later, she decided.  She had a direction for her plans, now, and the finances to implement them.  All she needed was a little time to set things in motion. By the New Year, should nothing take her away from London, she would have a better idea how things would stand.  Then, she thought, she could show him.  For now, she would continue as she had today—gather her facts and make her decisions based on what she’d found.  But it was good to have a starting point and today was an excellent one, indeed. <br><br>  
 
''First present him with something to be interested in, Jo'', whispered the more practical side of her head, and she listened to it.  There would be time enough to show him later, she decided.  She had a direction for her plans, now, and the finances to implement them.  All she needed was a little time to set things in motion. By the New Year, should nothing take her away from London, she would have a better idea how things would stand.  Then, she thought, she could show him.  For now, she would continue as she had today—gather her facts and make her decisions based on what she’d found.  But it was good to have a starting point and today was an excellent one, indeed. <br><br>  

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