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== Chapter 6 "A Visitor For Breakfast"==
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== Chapter 6 ==
  
'''''DASH'''''
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'''A Visitor for Breakfast'''
  
Morning came quickly  and it seemed I couldn't stop yawning even as the hot shower hit my face. Even as I passed the razor over my face, my jaw stretched repeatedly from sleepy yawns. But I really didn't feel that tired despite all that yawning. I dressed in a comfortable suit and entered the sitting room as the ladies from the cafe down the street were setting up breakfast. I went to Cat's door and knocked softly. "Breakfast is here, Miss Flynn," Maintaining a sense of formality for the sake of the cafe ladies. They had delivered breakfast to me and my 'guests' before, but I didn't feel they should get the same impression of Catarina.  
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Morning came quickly  and it seemed I couldn't stop yawning even as the hot shower hit my face. Even as I passed teh razor over my face, my jaw stretched repeatedly from sleepy yawns. But I really didn't feel that tired despite all that yawning. I dressed in a comfortable suit and entered the sitting room as the ladies from the cafe down the street were setting up breakfast. I went to Cat's door and knocked softly. "Breakfast is here, Miss Flynn,"
 
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Maintaining a sense of formality for the sake of the cafe ladies. They had delivered breakfast to me and my 'guests' before, but I didn't feel they should get the same impression of Catarina.  
'''''CAT'''''
 
  
 
She was awake and dressed, even if self conscious about the fact that she was wearing her dress from last night.  She tucked the cash and jewel back into her bra, trying to adjust the angle not to poke herself.  No make up on but her raven hair was silken smooth and fell to mid back, heels adding an inch to her height as she emerged, a fresh faced smile his way as blue eyes skimmed over his suited form.
 
She was awake and dressed, even if self conscious about the fact that she was wearing her dress from last night.  She tucked the cash and jewel back into her bra, trying to adjust the angle not to poke herself.  No make up on but her raven hair was silken smooth and fell to mid back, heels adding an inch to her height as she emerged, a fresh faced smile his way as blue eyes skimmed over his suited form.
 
"Good morning Mr. Karp, I hope you slept well."
 
"Good morning Mr. Karp, I hope you slept well."
A glance went to the cafe ladies, no idea if she should say hello, unused to being served anything really.
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A glance went to the cafe ladies, no idea if she sould say hello, unused to being served anything really.
 
"Smells good!"
 
"Smells good!"
 
'''''DASH'''''
 
  
 
With all due courtesy, I pulled a chair out for her and helped her to her seat.  
 
With all due courtesy, I pulled a chair out for her and helped her to her seat.  
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"Tell Mister Peterson he prepared a swell breakfast."  
 
"Tell Mister Peterson he prepared a swell breakfast."  
 
I resumed my egg cracking.  
 
I resumed my egg cracking.  
 
'''''CAT'''''
 
  
 
She settled into the chair, reaching for the carafe of coffee, a habit she had picked up since being in New York, though tea was still a go to when stressed or upset.
 
She settled into the chair, reaching for the carafe of coffee, a habit she had picked up since being in New York, though tea was still a go to when stressed or upset.
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She helped herself to two, ignoring the butter but damned near drowning them in syrup.  She cut a bite, syrup drenching fork as she brought it to her mouth.
 
She helped herself to two, ignoring the butter but damned near drowning them in syrup.  She cut a bite, syrup drenching fork as she brought it to her mouth.
  
'''''DASH'''''
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Mildred seemed nervous, but I could not fathom whatb would make her nervous just then. She did not move right away and seemed like she wanted to say something, but a knock on the door startled her to silence. It startled me to stillness as well since normally the doorman would ring to announce a visitor I was not otherwise expecting.  
 
 
Mildred seemed nervous, but I could not fathom what would make her nervous just then. She did not move right away and seemed like she wanted to say something, but a knock on the door startled her to silence. It startled me to stillness as well since normally the doorman would ring to announce a visitor I was not otherwise expecting.  
 
 
"Expecting anyone?"  
 
"Expecting anyone?"  
I asked Cat, albeit rhetorically and dropped my napkin on my plate when I rose.  
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I asked Cat, albiet rhetorically and dropped my napkin on my plate when I rose.  
 
"Mr. Karp, please be careful,"  
 
"Mr. Karp, please be careful,"  
 
Mildred warned me, but I did not understand. When I opened the door, a tall, lanky gentleman bent a bit at the waist.  
 
Mildred warned me, but I did not understand. When I opened the door, a tall, lanky gentleman bent a bit at the waist.  
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That could be the name of any two bit Italian thug, but this man spoke with great refinement and eloquence.  
 
That could be the name of any two bit Italian thug, but this man spoke with great refinement and eloquence.  
 
"I have been asked to call on you by Mr. Lorenzo, whom I believe you are acquainted with?"  
 
"I have been asked to call on you by Mr. Lorenzo, whom I believe you are acquainted with?"  
It was a natural inclination of mine to worry my tongue against my gum. I waved the man to seat at the table.
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It was a natural inclination of mine to worry my tongue against my gum. I waved the man to seat at the table.  
 
 
'''''CAT'''''
 
 
 
She had a mouthful of pancake but made an amused little scoffing noise at his question to her.  She'd just swallowed when she heard Mildred and a cold sinking sensation hit her stomach.  Long ago and far away her people had lived in deep fear from the sudden knock on the door or, more accurately, the sudden burst open of broken door followed by boots.  She had half risen, the plain truth being that running was her go to response to fear, but Dash opened the door and she swallowed, transforming the motion into an apparent reach for the sugar.  Vivid blue eyes touched on the man or what she could see of him before Dash waved him toward the table and then her gaze shifted to Dash.  Was he setting her up? Perhaps he had made a phone call last night? No, instinctively she just could not believe that of him, his energy was not cold that way, the way she had of just....sensing these things.  She was very rarely wrong. Enough of a performer to put on a believable smile.
 
  
'''''DASH'''''
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She had a mouthful of pankcake but made an amused little scoffing noise at his question to her.  She'd just swallowed when she heard Mildred and a cold sinking sensation hit her stomach.  Long ago and far away her people had lived in deep fear from the sudden knock on the door or, more accurately, the sudden burst open of broken door followed by boots.  She had half risen, the plain truth being that running was her go to response to fear, but Dash opened the door and she swallowed, transforming the motion into an apparent reach for the sugar.  Vivid blue eyes touched on the man or what she could see of him before Dash waved him toward the table and then her gaze shifted to Dash.  Was he setting her up? Perhaps he had made a phone call last night? No, instinctively she just could not believe that of him, his energy was not cold that way, the way she had of just....sensing these things.  She was very rarely wrong. Enough of a performer to put on a believable smile.
  
Garifini declined the invitation with a gentleman's aplomb.  
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Garifini declined the invitation with a gentleman's applomb.  
 
"You are quite kind, Mr. Karp, but I'm afraid I cannot. I am only here to extend an invitation from Mr. Lorenzo to meet with you at the lovely Miss Flynn at his penthouse within the hour. I have a car waiting downstairs and Mr. Lorenzo wanted me to assure you both it would be quite lucrative."  
 
"You are quite kind, Mr. Karp, but I'm afraid I cannot. I am only here to extend an invitation from Mr. Lorenzo to meet with you at the lovely Miss Flynn at his penthouse within the hour. I have a car waiting downstairs and Mr. Lorenzo wanted me to assure you both it would be quite lucrative."  
 
I looked to Cat, taking note of the worried look on her face. I was worried too, but did a much better job of hiding it.  
 
I looked to Cat, taking note of the worried look on her face. I was worried too, but did a much better job of hiding it.  
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"We need to leave, now," and I reached for Cat's hand.  
 
"We need to leave, now," and I reached for Cat's hand.  
 
"I'll get you more pancakes at Applewhite's."  
 
"I'll get you more pancakes at Applewhite's."  
 
'''''CAT'''''
 
  
 
Her heart was in her throat as she listened to the exchange between the two men, studying details of the lanky man's face but careful not to meet his gaze.  He knew her name, which meant that any inkling of coincidence was out the window, but how they knew his name, and where she was, that had her completely puzzled.  She watched as the women left, her hands white knuckled beneath the table on her lap.  She had lost her appetite entirely and while she reached to take the hand he offered she also looked stricken.
 
Her heart was in her throat as she listened to the exchange between the two men, studying details of the lanky man's face but careful not to meet his gaze.  He knew her name, which meant that any inkling of coincidence was out the window, but how they knew his name, and where she was, that had her completely puzzled.  She watched as the women left, her hands white knuckled beneath the table on her lap.  She had lost her appetite entirely and while she reached to take the hand he offered she also looked stricken.
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"It would be safer for you to stay here, let me go down...."
 
"It would be safer for you to stay here, let me go down...."
 
She was aware that even as she spoke of that, her smaller hand squeezed his more tightly, her body speaking truth while her mouth spoke  pragmatism.
 
She was aware that even as she spoke of that, her smaller hand squeezed his more tightly, her body speaking truth while her mouth spoke  pragmatism.
 
'''''DASH'''''
 
  
 
"Mr. Applewhite does not like people to miss appointments either, Catarina,"  
 
"Mr. Applewhite does not like people to miss appointments either, Catarina,"  
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"Mr.Lorenzo, it is said, sells American women to slavers in the Orient."  
 
"Mr.Lorenzo, it is said, sells American women to slavers in the Orient."  
 
Three levels to the street.  
 
Three levels to the street.  
"But I don't think that's what he wants from you,"  
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"But I don't think thats what he wants from you,"  
 
Two levels to the street.  
 
Two levels to the street.  
 
"How often have you talked about your....'abilities?"  
 
"How often have you talked about your....'abilities?"  
  
'''''CAT'''''
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There was something tense inside of her that eased when he retained that grip and made it clear he was not going to toss her to the proverbial wolves.  She did not hesitate to run with him, a hand in his and a hand at her chest to be sure her precious cargo was not shaken loose.  Her brassiere was tight as all were but still, it would not do to lose her only possesions outside her body and abilities.  Sure footed and nimble she was a wee bit breathless when they hit the street, fear tightening her throat at the mention of being sold in the Orient.  She had heard dark rumors but never considered such a danger to herself.
 
 
There was something tense inside of her that eased when he retained that grip and made it clear he was not going to toss her to the proverbial wolves.  She did not hesitate to run with him, a hand in his and a hand at her chest to be sure her precious cargo was not shaken loose.  Her brassiere was tight as all were but still, it would not do to lose her only possessions outside her body and abilities.  Sure footed and nimble she was a wee bit breathless when they hit the street, fear tightening her throat at the mention of being sold in the Orient.  She had heard dark rumors but never considered such a danger to herself.
 
 
"They have come up, its inevitable, I do readings and seances for people, some of whom he referred in my direction.  I do not brag about them though."
 
"They have come up, its inevitable, I do readings and seances for people, some of whom he referred in my direction.  I do not brag about them though."
 
Her gaze swept what she could see of the street, pressing close to him.
 
Her gaze swept what she could see of the street, pressing close to him.
 
'''''DASH'''''
 
  
 
At street level, I led her down a service corridor to a stairway that led to the basement.  
 
At street level, I led her down a service corridor to a stairway that led to the basement.  
"Mr. Lorenzo enjoys seances. And Zodiac readings. And collecting paraphernalia of the strange and mystical."  
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"Mr. Lorenzo enjoys seances. And Zodiac readings. And collecting paraphenalia of teh strange and mystical."  
 
I kept moving through the laundry area and then past the boilers that provided the steam heat for the building. The clanked and hissed and it was damn hot in there, but it was a contingency route I had discovered within a week of taking up residence.  
 
I kept moving through the laundry area and then past the boilers that provided the steam heat for the building. The clanked and hissed and it was damn hot in there, but it was a contingency route I had discovered within a week of taking up residence.  
 
"Perhaps he wants you in his collection."  
 
"Perhaps he wants you in his collection."  
 
We passed through a  steel door that exited into a subway station. But rather than take the train, we went up to the street and hailed a cab. "I almost forgot....Mr. Lorenzo is quite the Egyptologist as well."  
 
We passed through a  steel door that exited into a subway station. But rather than take the train, we went up to the street and hailed a cab. "I almost forgot....Mr. Lorenzo is quite the Egyptologist as well."  
 
Instructions were given to the cab driver and we were on our way to Central Park.  
 
Instructions were given to the cab driver and we were on our way to Central Park.  
 
'''''CAT'''''
 
  
 
She kept a tight grip on his hand as they maneuvered their way out of the building, a little bit shocked to find themselves in a subway station, her heels clicking on the stairs up to the street.
 
She kept a tight grip on his hand as they maneuvered their way out of the building, a little bit shocked to find themselves in a subway station, her heels clicking on the stairs up to the street.
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Troubled still by the notion of anyone being after her.  Some small voice in her head reminded her that she should be scared that Dash himself might be one of them, but again, her senses did not agree.
 
Troubled still by the notion of anyone being after her.  Some small voice in her head reminded her that she should be scared that Dash himself might be one of them, but again, her senses did not agree.
  
'''''DASH'''''
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When we reached Central Park, I was worried that Ribbons might not have sniffed out my plan...assuming Mildred had played her part. I was big on contingencies and I informed Ribbons long ago that if I gave any indication I was not coming down to meet the car, then he was to look for me in Central Park. There were a number of such plans I had in place, but this was actually the first time I ever needed to implement one. It was eight minutes before I spotted Ford sedan driven by Ribbons and we were on our way to Long Island and Applewhite's chateu. In the back of the Ford, I found mjyself still holding Cat's hand, but I gave it a pat and finally released it.  
 
 
When we reached Central Park, I was worried that Ribbons might not have sniffed out my plan...assuming Mildred had played her part. I was big on contingencies and I informed Ribbons long ago that if I gave any indication I was not coming down to meet the car, then he was to look for me in Central Park. There were a number of such plans I had in place, but this was actually the first time I ever needed to implement one. It was eight minutes before I spotted Ford sedan driven by Ribbons and we were on our way to Long Island and Applewhite's chateau. In the back of the Ford, I found myself still holding Cat's hand, but I gave it a pat and finally released it.  
 
 
"Sorry, Sir. Traffic,"  
 
"Sorry, Sir. Traffic,"  
 
Ribbons explained, but I waved it off. No plan was perfect.  
 
Ribbons explained, but I waved it off. No plan was perfect.  
 
"You can relax now, Cat. I think we've given them the slip."  
 
"You can relax now, Cat. I think we've given them the slip."  
  
'''''CAT'''''
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The park itself had its usual walkers and such, and she was nervous even as they enbtered the new car, her gaze lifting to the rearview mirror to glance at the driver.  She noticed he called Dash sir and that made her look back at Dash.  Right then he chose to let go of her hand and she felt a warm blush as she realized she had not let go this whole time.
 
 
The park itself had its usual walkers and such, and she was nervous even as they entered the new car, her gaze lifting to the rearview mirror to glance at the driver.  She noticed he called Dash sir and that made her look back at Dash.  Right then he chose to let go of her hand and she felt a warm blush as she realized she had not let go this whole time.
 
 
"Sorry."
 
"Sorry."
 
Whispered to him, shifting a bit away and smoothing her skirt, a hand trying to smooth raven hair that on a good day liked to do as it pleased.  She looked out the window, a skeptical look at Dash but she nodded.
 
Whispered to him, shifting a bit away and smoothing her skirt, a hand trying to smooth raven hair that on a good day liked to do as it pleased.  She looked out the window, a skeptical look at Dash but she nodded.
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"Is it a far way to our destination?"
 
"Is it a far way to our destination?"
 
She had really never been out of the city since crossing the east river from North Brother years back now.
 
She had really never been out of the city since crossing the east river from North Brother years back now.
 
'''''DASH'''''
 
  
 
"Perhaps an hour..."  
 
"Perhaps an hour..."  
 
I started to answer, but that's when Ribbons chimed in.  
 
I started to answer, but that's when Ribbons chimed in.  
"I estimate fifty-three minutes, Madame,"  
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"I estimate fifty-thre minutes, Madame,"  
 
Then he flashed a smile to me. He might have been right. He often measured city distances and traffic patterns just to be precise about such matters.  
 
Then he flashed a smile to me. He might have been right. He often measured city distances and traffic patterns just to be precise about such matters.  
"The chateau is quite secure and I am sure you will be safe there while I investigate what Mr. Lorenzo wants."  
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"The chateu is quite secure and I am sure you will be safe there while I investigate what Mr. Lorenzo wants."  
But no sooner did I attempt such reassurance, then the car lurched suddenly to one side amidst the sound of crunching metal. The impact left Cat in my lap and the Ford ground sickeningly to a halt. The next thing I know, the door is                                                           being yanked open and a big ugly face is peering inside. It was the goon from the night before who I sent to dreamland with one punch. I realized my shoulder hurt and before I could react, he was pulling Cat from my lap and out of the car. I didn't even have time to think about Ribbons when the other goon was reaching for me. I managed to kick him away and helped myself out of the car with every intention of unholstering my Colt and persuading the goon squad to back off. But apparently there was a third someone whom I failed to see and darkness came over me.  
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But no sooner did I attempt such reassurance, then the car lurched suddenly to one side amidst the sound of crunching metal. The impact left Cat in my lap and the Ford ground sickenly to a halt. The next thing I know, the door is                                                             being yanked open and a big ugly face is peering inside. It was the goon from the night before who I sent to dreamland with one punch. I realized my shoulder hurt and before I could react, he was pulling Cat from my lap and out of the car. I didn't even have time to think about Ribbons when the other goon was reaching for me. I managed to kick him away and helped myself out of the car with every intention of unholstering my Colt and persuading the goon squad to back off. But apparently there was a third someone whom I failed to see and darkness came over me.  
 
 
'''''CAT'''''
 
  
 
She did not even have time to scream when the car was struck, finding herself hurled across the car and onto Dash's lap.  Stunned, she was just processing trying to get up when the door was yanked open and oh this time she did have time to scream as the hands of the man who had grabbed her last night did so again.  She was not exactly a damsel in distress sort, but neither was she a fighter or even very big.  She struggled, the man's hand slapping over her mouth to quiet her screaming, her heels kicking at his shins when his free arm grabbed her waist, pinning her arms.  Call it instinct, or maybe a very bad decision, but she bit his hand as hard as she could, gratified to hear him yowl as she tasted blood.  Unfortunately, he did not drop her, instead she felt his hand whisk away, a cloth replacing it.  The sickly sweet dampness on it was nauseating but she could not figure out how to work her limbs as her vision swam in streamers of color.  The last thing she saw as she went limp in his arms was a third man clubbing Dash over the head.  Then blackness claimed her.
 
She did not even have time to scream when the car was struck, finding herself hurled across the car and onto Dash's lap.  Stunned, she was just processing trying to get up when the door was yanked open and oh this time she did have time to scream as the hands of the man who had grabbed her last night did so again.  She was not exactly a damsel in distress sort, but neither was she a fighter or even very big.  She struggled, the man's hand slapping over her mouth to quiet her screaming, her heels kicking at his shins when his free arm grabbed her waist, pinning her arms.  Call it instinct, or maybe a very bad decision, but she bit his hand as hard as she could, gratified to hear him yowl as she tasted blood.  Unfortunately, he did not drop her, instead she felt his hand whisk away, a cloth replacing it.  The sickly sweet dampness on it was nauseating but she could not figure out how to work her limbs as her vision swam in streamers of color.  The last thing she saw as she went limp in his arms was a third man clubbing Dash over the head.  Then blackness claimed her.

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