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Yeah, she knew his name, not sure how but that happened. His eyes cast a viscious look her way, his hands tightening on the arms of his chair, half rising.
 
Yeah, she knew his name, not sure how but that happened. His eyes cast a viscious look her way, his hands tightening on the arms of his chair, half rising.
 
"Simmer down Arnav, let her work."
 
"Simmer down Arnav, let her work."
 
'''''CAT'''''
 
 
 
Lorenzo's voice a mixture of displeasure at the man and the sort of rapt fascination one might have heard in the voice of a cobra stalking a mongoose had they been audible.  Cat reached for the skull, sliding the the edge of her own chaor as she did so, cloak parting just enough to offer a glimpse of pale flesh down the center of her body. Her hands hovered over the skull a moment, a soft catch of breath as she felt a new and different energy wrap around her ankles and slithering upwards, blue eyes rolling back.
 
Lorenzo's voice a mixture of displeasure at the man and the sort of rapt fascination one might have heard in the voice of a cobra stalking a mongoose had they been audible.  Cat reached for the skull, sliding the the edge of her own chaor as she did so, cloak parting just enough to offer a glimpse of pale flesh down the center of her body. Her hands hovered over the skull a moment, a soft catch of breath as she felt a new and different energy wrap around her ankles and slithering upwards, blue eyes rolling back.
  
'''''DASH'''''
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I didn't like this to nstart and I was liking it even less when Cat's eyes rolled back. Or how she knew the smarmy fellow. The woman next to him, whom Lorenzo called Magdelena, reached for my hand on top of the table and grabbed hold. Her flesh was warm. No, more like hot, but dry, not clammy. I remember I wanted to pull my hand away just because I didn't want the distraction, but somehow I didn't. I glanced to her and could now see her full face, which was beautiful in the extreme.  
 
 
I didn't like this to start and I was liking it even less when Cat's eyes rolled back. Or how she seemed to know the smarmy fellow. The woman next to him, whom Lorenzo called Magdelena, reached for my hand on top of the table and grabbed hold. Her flesh was warm. No, more like hot, but dry, not clammy. I remember I wanted to pull my hand away just because I didn't want the distraction, but somehow I didn't. I glanced to her and could now see her full face, which was beautiful in the extreme.  
 
 
"Are you okay, Cat?"  
 
"Are you okay, Cat?"  
 
 
I was about to rise when Lorenzo grabbed hold of my other hand and I stilled...reluctantly. I turned to Lorenzo who seemed utterly entranced by Cat and that's when I noticed her cloak had parted further and I could easily see the full cleavage and roundness of her breasts. I had to shake my head and blink my eyes! It was absurd that I should be leering at Cat's flesh in such a moment as this!  
 
I was about to rise when Lorenzo grabbed hold of my other hand and I stilled...reluctantly. I turned to Lorenzo who seemed utterly entranced by Cat and that's when I noticed her cloak had parted further and I could easily see the full cleavage and roundness of her breasts. I had to shake my head and blink my eyes! It was absurd that I should be leering at Cat's flesh in such a moment as this!  
 
 
'''''CAT'''''
 
  
 
She could feel that Arnav and Gladys wanted to touch her, they being to either side of her, and yet they did not, dissuaded perhaps by the pulse of dark energy that was working its way up her body.  Instead, they linked hands behind the gypsy, in essence sealing her inside the circle.  It was as Lorenzo took hold of the hands to either side of him that Catarina jerked as if struck, her voice rising in a hollow tone as if echoing down a long hall.
 
She could feel that Arnav and Gladys wanted to touch her, they being to either side of her, and yet they did not, dissuaded perhaps by the pulse of dark energy that was working its way up her body.  Instead, they linked hands behind the gypsy, in essence sealing her inside the circle.  It was as Lorenzo took hold of the hands to either side of him that Catarina jerked as if struck, her voice rising in a hollow tone as if echoing down a long hall.

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