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'''''DASH'''''
 
'''''DASH'''''
  
The twins turned about and we followed them to a flight of steps that went up to another level. Somehow, I felt we were still in a subterranean area since I had yet to see a single window. Shortly, we entered a dining hall that was was richly appointed with oaken furniture of a very old design, but this room had nothing of the more salacious flavor of the Red Hall. Magdelena, Arnav, and Gladys were all there but Lorenzo was yet missing. There were waiters or some such milling about the long dining table, filling water glasses and wine goblets and adjusting every piece of silverware to perfection. The moment we entered, Gladys hurried over and literally stole me from Catarina. "You simply must let me have him for dinner, dear," she smiled far too sweetly and hurried me toward the table as though she wanted distance between us and the others. I never considered Gladys a bimbo; just a bored, rich socialite who resolved herself to enjoying life with daddy's money. "I need to get you alone. I know what Lorenzo is up to." But taht exchange, if it was sincere, ended abruptly when Lorenzo entered. "I am quite cross that we are missing the opera, Dash. I am still holding you to it!" I was tuning her out just then as I noticed how everyone else was dressed. Lorenzo in formal dinner wear with top hat and tails and Arnav in some sort of formal Arabic attire. Magdelena and Gladys were wearing similar long gowns that hugged their figures not only perfectly, but provocatively as well. Magdelena's was backless right down to her tail bone, while Gladys's seemed dip far below her sternum, giving a great view of her cleavage. And then there was Cat and myself looking, in comparison, like we were on our way to the county fair. Lorenzo immediately took charge of Cat, 'insisting' that he be her escort for the rest of the evening. "Please! Everyone be seated," Lorenzo called to his guests, but then all attention went to Cat. "I am fascinated by what you accomplished, Miss Flynn. Later, I do hope you will tell me more of your abilities."
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The twins turned about and we followed them to a flight of steps that went up to another level. Somehow, I felt we were still in a subterranean area since I had yet to see a single window. Shortly, we entered a dining hall that was was richly appointed with oaken furniture of a very old design, but this room had nothing of the more salacious flavor of the Red Hall. Magdelena, Arnav, and Gladys were all there but Lorenzo was yet missing. There were waiters or some such milling about the long dining table, filling water glasses and wine goblets and adjusting every piece of silverware to perfection. The moment we entered, Gladys hurried over and literally stole me from Catarina. "You simply must let me have him for dinner, dear," she smiled far too sweetly and hurried me toward the table as though she wanted distance between us and the others. I never considered Gladys a bimbo; just a bored, rich socialite who resolved herself to enjoying life with daddy's money. "I need to get you alone. I know what Lorenzo is up to." But taht exchange, if it was sincere, ended abruptly when Lorenzo entered. "I am quite cross that we are missing the opera, Dash. I am still holding you to it!" I was tuning her out just then as I noticed how everyone else was dressed. Lorenzo in formal dinner wear with top hat and tails and Arnav in some sort of formal Arabic attire. Magdelena and Gladys were wearing similar long gowns that hugged their figures not only perfectly, but provocatively as well. Magdelena's was backless right down to her tail bone, while Gladys's seemed dip far below her sternum, giving a great view of her cleavage. And then there was Cat and myself looking, in comparison, like we were on our way to the county fair. Lorenzo immediately took charge of Cat, 'insisting' that he be her escort for the rest of the evening. "Please! Everyone be seated," Lorenzo called to his guests, but then all attention went to Cat. "I am fascinated by what you accomplished, Miss Flynn. Later, I do hope you will tell me more of your abilities.  
  
  
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'''''DASH'''''
 
'''''DASH'''''
  
From my previous glare, Magdelena had backed off from rubbing my shin, only to have Gladys pick up where she left off. "I assure you, nothing will happen to Miss Flynn that she does not wish to have happen. I do consider her under my protection. Don't forget, I too have business with her yet. On hold though it may be." I reached beneath the table as though to scratch my leg, but grabbed Gladys's naked foot and squeezed it in a powerful grip causing a small, ladylike "yelp!" to come out of the High Socialite. She had dossiers on me? That was incredible and unwlecomed, but at the same time quite smart of her. She bore keeping a closer eye on. Cat was speaking with some authority, but honestly, I did not know how well she could handle herself. Seeing her flanked by one known lecher, and another who more looked the part of the lech. "I don't trust him, Mr. Lorenzo. You promised me the gypsy would do a seance for me once I delievered that skull to you," Arnav complained, but Lorenzo seemed almost thunderstruck when Cat removed his arm. There was an undercurrent of something else. Something that seemed to be licking at the others, but not at me. At least I didn't feel anything. Magdelena was still staring at me, Gladys was draped all over me. Lorenzo and Arnav were practically drooling over Cat, and I felt that I was in total control of myself. Cat, on the otgher hand, was still a mystery to me, so I had no idea how affected she was, or not.  
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Dash Karp: From my previous glare, Magdelena had backed off from rubbing my shin, only to have Gladys pick up where she left off. "I assure you, nothing will happen to Miss Flynn that she does not wish to have happen. I do consider her under  
 
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Dash Karp: my protection. Don't forget, I too have business with her yet. On hold though it may be." I reached beneath the table as though to scratch my leg, but grabbed Gladys's naked foot and squeezed it in a powerful grip causing a small,  
 
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Dash Karp: ladylike "yelp!" to come out of the High Socialite. She had dossiers on me? That was incredible and un wlecomed, bnut at teh same time quite smart of her. She bore keeping a closer eye on. Cat was speaking with some authority, but  
'''''CAT'''''
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Dash Karp: hinestly, I did not know how well she could handle herself. Seeing her flanked by one known lecher, and another who more looked the part of the lech. "I don't trust him, Mr. Lorenzo. You promised me the gypsy would do a seance for  
 
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Dash Karp: me once I delievered that skull to you," Arnav complained, but Lorenzo seemed almost thunderstruck when Cat removed his arm. There was an undercurrent of something else. Something that seemed to be licking at the others, but not
She was the proverbial eye of the storm. "I am more than capable of handling myself," and as she spoke, Lorenzo seemed to struggle with something. Arnav was cast back more easily, pressed back in his seat. "I am afraid my accompanying Mr Karp is non negotiable.  He might not know a missile from THE missile of Eros, and not retieving it would be a tragedy that you can ill afford Mr. Lorenzo." She was trying to escape the touch and influence of the lecherous pair, partially successful.  Lorenzo seemed to fight through the swarm of energy, his grip shifting from her shoulders to sinking deep into raven hair, yanking her head back and stretching her throaty taut. "Enough Miss Flynn!!"
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Dash Karp: me.At least i didn't feel anything. Magdelena was still staring at me, Gladys was draped all over me. Lorenzo and Arnav were practically drooling over Cat, and felt I was in total control of myself. Cat, on the otgher hand, was  
 
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Dash Karp: still a mystery to me, so I had no idea how affected she was, or not. ()
 
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CatarinaFlynn: ::she was the proverbial eye of the storm::  I am more than capable of handling myself ::and as she spoke, Lorenzo seemed to struggle with something. Arnav was c ast back more easily, pressed back in his seat:: I am afraid my  
'''''DASH'''''
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CatarinaFlynn: accompanying Mr Karp is non negotiable.  He might well know a missel from THE missle of Eros, and not retieving it would be a tragedy that you can ill afford Mr. Lorenzo ::she was trying to escape the touch and influence of the  
 
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CatarinaFlynn: lecherous pair, partially successful.  Lorenzo seemed to fight through the swarm of energy, his grip shifting from her shoulders to sinking deep into raven hair, yanking her head back and stretching her throaty taut:: Enough Miss  
I shot up from my seat when Lorenzo started to get rough. "You have a funny way of trying to win allies, Lorenzo. Now get your hands off Catarina or not only will you get no help from us, but so help me I'll introduce you to pain like you've never known," I gave Arnav a glare of hatred then. "You I'll just kill." Magdelena gasped at my movement and words. But it was more like a gasp of arousal than fear. Gladys smiled seductively. "Oh Dash! If you keep this up I will be throwing myself at you right here and now!" I wasn't sure just how serious Gladys was but her comment wasn't even worth a retort. Lorenzo laughed, but I am sure I detected nervousness in it, and he did remove his hands from Cat. Maybe sex was in the air again (or maybe it was a constant condition in this place) but I ignored it all and embraced the anger inside me. I embraced and controlled it all at once and directed it in my steady gaze upon Lorenzo and no one else until he replied. "Very well, Mr. Karp," Lorenzo tried to appear at ease with his hands in his lap, "we will do it your way for now. My interest in the ancient relic currently exceeds my growing interest in Miss Flynn. I insist Albert accompany you both to look after my interests." Arnav had produced a hankerchief and wiped his face as though he were sweating. I felt I finally had an edge here. A tenuous edge, with little foundation, but an edge at the moment just the same. "No!" It was not simply a denial, but a demand as well. "It will be Catarina and myself. Period. Don't forget, Lorenzo, Applewhite has plenty of resources as well and is probably using them now to find Catarina and me. Certainly you would not wish to have your activities exposed." Lorenzo's jaw tightened and he slowly nodded but I knew I had not truly won yet.  
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CatarinaFlynn: Flynn!!!/d
 
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CatarinaFlynn: test
 
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Dash Karp: pass
'''''CAT'''''
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CatarinaFlynn: phew back
 
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Dash Karp: I shot up from my seat when Lorenzo started to get rough. "You have a funny way of trying to win allies, Lorenzo. Now get your hands off Catarina or not only will you get no help from us, but so help me I'll introduce you to pain  
As Lorenzo's hands loosed their hold on her hair she drew a breath, a shivering deep breath drawn.  As Dash spoke she  rose to her feet. "There ought not BE a decision  between me and some object you seek!" She almost toppled over Lorenzo, his hand all quiet and submissive. "I am no fighter,"  meant in the physical sense, but mind the energy that surrounds her.
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Dash Karp: like you've never known," I gave Arnav a glare of hatred then. "You I'll just kill." Magdelena gasped at my movement and words. But it was more like a gasp of arousal than fear. Gladys smiled seductively. "Oh Dash! If you keep this  
 
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Dash Karp: up I will be throwing myself at you right here and now!" I wasn't sure just how serious Gladys was but her comment wasn't even worth a retort. Lorenzo laughed, but I am sure I detected nervousness in it, and he did remove his hands  
'''''DASH'''''
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Dash Karp: from Cat. Maybe sex was in the air again (or maybe it was a constant condition in this place) but I ignored it all and embraced the anger inside me. I embraced and controlled it all once and directed it in my steady gaze upon  
 
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Dash Karp: Lorenzo and no one else until he replied. "Very well, Mr. Karp," Lorenzo tried to appear at ease with his hands in his lap, "we will do it your way for now. My interest in the ancient relic does exceed my growing interest in Miss  
Gladys was fanning herself while looking up at me, and Magdelena was nodding with a smile to Gladys. My performance sure had an effect on those two and a small part of me wished I could take full advantage of it. With Cat getting to her feet and away from Lorenzo and Arnav, I stepped away from my chair and went to her. Some prehistoric instinct, but I think it was less about protecting the weak and more about preserving territory. Well that might be lousy on my part, but I would analyze that and admonish myself later. "If you will excuse us, we will retire for the evening. In the morning, I want a car all gassed up and ready to go. With luck, we will be gone just one night."  
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Dash Karp: Flynn. I insist Albert accompany you both to look after my interests." Arnav had produced a hankerchief and wiped his face as though he were sweating. I felt I finally had an edge here. A tenuous edge, with little foundation, but an
 
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Dash Karp: edge at the moment just the same. "No!" It was not simply a denial, but a demand as well. "It will be Catarina and myself. Period. Don't forget, Lorenzo, Applewhite has plenty of resources as well and is probably using them now to  
 
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Dash Karp: find Catarina and me. Certainly you would not wish toi have your activities exposed." Lorenzo's jaw tightened and he slowly nodded but I knew I had not truly won yet. ()
'''''CAT'''''
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CatarinaFlynn: ::as Lorenzo's hands loosed their hold on her hair she drew a breath, a shivering deep breath drawn.  As Dash spoke she  rose to her feet:: there ought not BE a decision  between me and some object you seek! ::she almost toppled  
 
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CatarinaFlynn: over Lorenzo, his hand all quiet and submissive:: I am no fighter ::in the physical sense, but mind the energy that surrounds her::/d
When Dash came her way she felt Lorenzo loose his grasp of hair and his gaze shift to Dash as if it were a physical sensation. "We will be sharing a room, and a car, so do not skimp on either," her voice not nearly as sure as she wished, the reality of local real world grab for coin scams scared her worse than she might have imagined.
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Dash Karp: Gladys was fanning herself while looking up at me, and Magdelena was nodding with a smile to Gladys. My performance sure had an effect on those two and a small part of me wished I could take full advantage of it. With Cat getting to
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Dash Karp: her feet and away from Lorenzo and Arnav, I stepped away from my chair and went to her. Some prehistoric instinct, but I think it was less about protecting the weak and more about preserving territory. Well that might be lousy on my
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Dash Karp: part, but I would analyze that and admonish myself later. "If you will excuse us, we will retire for the evening. In the morning, I want a car all gassed up and ready to go. With luck, we will be gone just one night." ()
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CatarinaFlynn: ::when Dash came her way she felt Lorenzo loose his grasp of hair and his gaze shift to Dash as if it were a physical sensation:: we will be sharing a room, and a car, so do not skimp on either
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CatarinaFlynn: ::her voice not nearly as sure as she wished, the realiuty of local real world grab for coin scams running scared her worse that she might have
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CatarinaFlynn: imagined::/d
  
 
== Chapter 12 "Discussion of Energy" ==
 
== Chapter 12 "Discussion of Energy" ==

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