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The two women walked in the back room. Soon after that, an UPS van stopped outside the store.  
 
The two women walked in the back room. Soon after that, an UPS van stopped outside the store.  
 
 
A bushy bearded driver wearing sunglasses stepped out, handing Joe a thick envelope and saying: "I have a delivery. Will you sign for it?"
 
A bushy bearded driver wearing sunglasses stepped out, handing Joe a thick envelope and saying: "I have a delivery. Will you sign for it?"
  
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"This is not my day," the red headed woman was complaining in the back room. "First the prices are daylight robbery, and now this place is really getting robbed in broad daylight!"
 
"This is not my day," the red headed woman was complaining in the back room. "First the prices are daylight robbery, and now this place is really getting robbed in broad daylight!"
  
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"One of them is coming here!" Josie said, frightened. "What do we do?"
 
"One of them is coming here!" Josie said, frightened. "What do we do?"
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"You hide in the restroom and call the police," the redhead said. "I will deal with the man."
 
"You hide in the restroom and call the police," the redhead said. "I will deal with the man."
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As the man code-named Green stepped in the back room, the first thing he saw was an attractive redhead holding her arms up apparently frightened. "Please don't hurt me!" the woman said. "I will do absolutely anything!"
 
As the man code-named Green stepped in the back room, the first thing he saw was an attractive redhead holding her arms up apparently frightened. "Please don't hurt me!" the woman said. "I will do absolutely anything!"
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"Anything?" Green leered and stepped closer. "Well, I am a bit in a hurry, but perhaps a little feel..."
 
"Anything?" Green leered and stepped closer. "Well, I am a bit in a hurry, but perhaps a little feel..."
  
"How is this for a feel?" the redhead said and her head snapped forward. Green felt a stinging pain in his neck and attempted to bring his gun up.  
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"How is this for a feel?" the redhead said and her head snapped forward. Green felt a stinging pain in his neck and attempted to bring his gun up. "You crazy bitch!" he said. "You bit-"
  
"You crazy bitch!" he said. "You bit-"
 
  
 
Green stopped speaking and his gun fell from his nerveless fingers. And not just because he had seen the woman's suddenly long and pointed incisors. It was because his entire body had suddenly gone numb.
 
Green stopped speaking and his gun fell from his nerveless fingers. And not just because he had seen the woman's suddenly long and pointed incisors. It was because his entire body had suddenly gone numb.
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As Green collapsed on the floor, the redhead crouched down beside him, saying: "I know what you are thinking. It is true. I am a toxic individual." Patting the man's cheek she grinned and continued: "It is only paralysis, and the amount I injected should not be enough to paralyze your heart or lungs, so you will live." Hearing the sound of shattering glass as Blue was smashing the display cabinets, she said: "I suppose I should see to your friends too."
 
As Green collapsed on the floor, the redhead crouched down beside him, saying: "I know what you are thinking. It is true. I am a toxic individual." Patting the man's cheek she grinned and continued: "It is only paralysis, and the amount I injected should not be enough to paralyze your heart or lungs, so you will live." Hearing the sound of shattering glass as Blue was smashing the display cabinets, she said: "I suppose I should see to your friends too."
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"Sure," Green said, stepped next to Blue, and bit him.
 
"Sure," Green said, stepped next to Blue, and bit him.
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"What-" the driver started to say as Blue began to collapse. He was too surprised to react in time as Green then rushed him. The driver only managed to bring an arm up in defense, but the only result was that Green bit him on the arm.
 
"What-" the driver started to say as Blue began to collapse. He was too surprised to react in time as Green then rushed him. The driver only managed to bring an arm up in defense, but the only result was that Green bit him on the arm.
  
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"What the hell is going on?" said Red, who at that moment stepped out from the side door to the security station. He started to bring his gun up, but confused by the situation he hesitated. Green didn't. He leveled his machine pistol and fired a short burst, hitting Red in the thigh and bringing him down.
  
"What the hell is going on?" said Red, who at that moment stepped out from the side door to the security station. He started to bring his gun up, but confused by the situation he hesitated. Green didn't. He leveled his machine pistol and fired a short burst, hitting Red in the thigh and bringing him down.
 
  
 
"You shot me!" Red said holding his wound as Green rushed to retrieve his fallen gun. "God damn it, you shot me!"
 
"You shot me!" Red said holding his wound as Green rushed to retrieve his fallen gun. "God damn it, you shot me!"
  
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"I didn't hit the artery," Green said. "You will survive." Walking to the counter, she put the guns down on it and looked at the man cowering on the floor behind it. "Are you the manager? Will you keep an eye on the guns until the police arrive? Those men should give you no further trouble."
 
"I didn't hit the artery," Green said. "You will survive." Walking to the counter, she put the guns down on it and looked at the man cowering on the floor behind it. "Are you the manager? Will you keep an eye on the guns until the police arrive? Those men should give you no further trouble."
  
 
The store manager carefully got up from the floor. "Why- Why did you subdue your friends?"
 
The store manager carefully got up from the floor. "Why- Why did you subdue your friends?"
  
 
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Green removed his mask. His skin rippled and he turned into the red headed woman. "Because I am not their friend after all."
 
Green removed his mask. His skin rippled and he turned into the red headed woman. "Because I am not their friend after all."
  
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"You!" the manager said. "The customer from a moment ago."
 
"You!" the manager said. "The customer from a moment ago."
  
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"Yup," the redhead said, taking off the trench coat. Spotting a brand new phone under shards of glass in a display cabinet, Blue having apparently missed it in a hurry, she picked the phone up and said: "Say, do I get a discount?"
 
"Yup," the redhead said, taking off the trench coat. Spotting a brand new phone under shards of glass in a display cabinet, Blue having apparently missed it in a hurry, she picked the phone up and said: "Say, do I get a discount?"
 
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"Lady, you can have that phone," the manager said. "Courtesy of the company."
 
"Lady, you can have that phone," the manager said. "Courtesy of the company."
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"Deal," the woman said, pocketing the phone and heading for the doors. "Give my regards to the police. Unfortunately, I need to be elsewhere."
  
"Deal," the woman said, pocketing the phone and heading for the doors. "Give my regards to the police. Unfortunately, I need to be elsewhere."
 
  
 
"Who are you?" the manager called out after her.
 
"Who are you?" the manager called out after her.

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