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"Recycled phones? Bah. I could build one myself."
 
"Recycled phones? Bah. I could build one myself."
  
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"For real?"
 
"For real?"
  
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"For real," The redhead said, taking out a somewhat nonstandard looking phone. "That is how I got my current phone."
 
"For real," The redhead said, taking out a somewhat nonstandard looking phone. "That is how I got my current phone."
  
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"Really? Well, in that case, we have some phones we have gotten in exchange. They are in the back room because they were to be sent for recycling. But if you could fix one yourself - would you like to come and take a look?"
 
"Really? Well, in that case, we have some phones we have gotten in exchange. They are in the back room because they were to be sent for recycling. But if you could fix one yourself - would you like to come and take a look?"
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"Sure, why not," the redhead said. "Maybe there is one that has more features than my current phone."
 
"Sure, why not," the redhead said. "Maybe there is one that has more features than my current phone."
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As Josie rushed towards the restroom, the redhead grumbled: "A woman's work is never done," and adjusted her cleavage to be a bit more revealing.
 
As Josie rushed towards the restroom, the redhead grumbled: "A woman's work is never done," and adjusted her cleavage to be a bit more revealing.
  
 
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As the man code-named Green stepped in the back room, the first thing he saw was an attractive redhead holding her arms up apparently frightened. "Please don't hurt me!" the woman said. "I will do absolutely anything!"
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As the man codenamed Green stepped in the back room, the first thing he saw was an attractive redhead holding her arms up apparently frightened. "Please don't hurt me!" the woman said. "I will do absolutely anything!"
  
 
"Anything?" Green leered and stepped closer. "Well, I am a bit in a hurry, but perhaps a little feel..."
 
"Anything?" Green leered and stepped closer. "Well, I am a bit in a hurry, but perhaps a little feel..."

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