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"Com'on Alvah time for you to write a piece. You've been playing long enough with us and you proved you're not musically handicapped. And you should pull your weight. Don't be the lazy drummer." | "Com'on Alvah time for you to write a piece. You've been playing long enough with us and you proved you're not musically handicapped. And you should pull your weight. Don't be the lazy drummer." | ||
| − | Annoyed Alvah looks up at Chasa, Though she can't | + | Annoyed Alvah looks up at Chasa, Though she can't say angry at that man. He has a way about him that just amuses her. And the time in AngRi together they've become friends. |
| − | "Let me think of a dance, and i can do it. | + | "Let me think of a dance, and i can do it. Let me think of a way to kill a person in said dance and it will be perfection. But ask me to write a song, you serious? What is wrong with the things you two write?" |
| − | Let me think of a way to kill a person in said dance and it will be perfection. | ||
| − | But ask me to write a song, you serious? What is wrong with the things you two write?" | ||
| − | Chasa lights a cig and chuckles. | + | Chasa lights a cig and chuckles. "Coward, you're just afraid to fail cause you are not as good as us." |
| − | "Coward, you're just afraid to fail cause you are not as good as us." | ||
Alvah curses to herself, yeah he got her there. Downside of hanging around people that know you all to well. | Alvah curses to herself, yeah he got her there. Downside of hanging around people that know you all to well. | ||
| − | Throwing her legs from the armrest they were dangling over, | + | Throwing her legs from the armrest they were dangling over as she had draped herself in a chair, ALvah stands up to grab something to write with. With a groan she drops herself on the chair again and turns herself in such a folded up positions he can rest her paper against her legs while still lounging in the chair. Upside down she looks at Chasa. |
| − | With a groan she drops herself on the chair again and turns herself in such a folded up positions he can rest her paper against her legs while still lounging in the chair. Upside down she looks at Chasa. | ||
"Now you go.... i have to think..." | "Now you go.... i have to think..." | ||
Chasa laughs puts a pack of cigs down on the little table near her and leaves. | Chasa laughs puts a pack of cigs down on the little table near her and leaves. | ||
| − | Time passes and Alvah does not leave the room she is in. | + | Time passes and Alvah does not leave the room she is in. NOw and then one of the school bring her food or drinks which she gratefully muttering accepts. |
After quite some time a voice from the doorway, | After quite some time a voice from the doorway, | ||
"So what have i done wrong that you sleep here and not in our bed?" | "So what have i done wrong that you sleep here and not in our bed?" | ||
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Alvah sits back in her chair again draping her legs over the arm and backrest. | Alvah sits back in her chair again draping her legs over the arm and backrest. | ||
| − | "Yeah yeah in a bit | + | "Yeah yeah in a bit. Just trying to get this down." |
Without a word Vek picks up Alvah from the chair tossing her over his shoulder. | Without a word Vek picks up Alvah from the chair tossing her over his shoulder. | ||
"Yeah i know those moments of you, you won't sleep for days." | "Yeah i know those moments of you, you won't sleep for days." | ||
| − | Without resisting Alvah hangs over Vek's shoulder bouncing with his steps. | + | Without resisting Alvah hangs over Vek's shoulder bouncing with his steps. half way through the hallway Alvah starts to smile wide. |
"You know me so well... " | "You know me so well... " | ||
Vek won't see it but he just gave Alvah a major flame of inspiration. | Vek won't see it but he just gave Alvah a major flame of inspiration. | ||
