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''The trade district is bustling, not just with merchants selling the wares from Satarla and Shamballah and the spoils of the Qo jungles, but also with taverns and eateries and all sorts of dancers and entertainers, providing all manner of diversions for sailors after their long journey up or down the river. Along with the swarthy Tyrusians, you can here always find dark-skinned, purple-eyed Shamballahns and the myriad colourings and visages of much-diverse Satarla, whose people share no trait but their boundless pride.
 
''The trade district is bustling, not just with merchants selling the wares from Satarla and Shamballah and the spoils of the Qo jungles, but also with taverns and eateries and all sorts of dancers and entertainers, providing all manner of diversions for sailors after their long journey up or down the river. Along with the swarthy Tyrusians, you can here always find dark-skinned, purple-eyed Shamballahns and the myriad colourings and visages of much-diverse Satarla, whose people share no trait but their boundless pride.
  
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''It is a city ruled by strength, where audacity, cunning and competence can earn you a mountain of gold - and a single careless mistake can cost you your life. It is a city that has much but wants yet more, and whose leaders are forever plotting ways to gain the place as Lemuria's greatest city that they consider themselves to have been unjustly robbed of. And, for all that its high walls and grim soldiers would seem to make it invincible, it is a city in danger - for a doom is coming to Tyrus, and when it falls, all hope may yet rest in the hands of a small band of unlikely heroes...''
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''It is a city ruled by strength, where audacity, cunning and competence can earn you a mountain of gold - and a single careless mistake can cost you your life. It is a city that has much but wants yet more, and whose leaders are forever plotting ways to gain the place as Lemuria's greatest city that they consider themselves to have been unjustly robbed of. And, for all that its high walls and grim soldiers would seem to make it invincible, it is a city in danger - for a doom is coming to Tyrus, and when it falls, all hope may yet rest in the hands not of the fierce Tyrusians themselves, but with a small band of wanderers...''
  
  

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