Editing Blessings of the God-Emperor Upon You:Ash Walkers

Those mutated by constant exposure to the choking ash and geothermal radiation typically display ash-grey skin, tremendous physical strength, elongated bat-like ears, and the loss of their sight as the bone surrounding the ocular area of their skull weakens - collapsing inwards as the skin rots, leaving only a gaping pit across their face - which forces the mutants to rely on a twisted version of echolocation to navigate. These poor creatures, termed "ash walkers" by the citizens, are shunned and driven to the very fringes of society to eke out a miserable survival amongst the blasted wastelands.
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−	Those mutated by constant exposure to the choking ash and geothermal radiation typically display ash-grey skin, tremendous physical strength, elongated bat-like ears, and the loss of their sight ~~along with the sense of smell~~ as the bone surrounding ~~both~~ the ocular ~~and nasal~~ area of their skull weakens - collapsing inwards as the skin rots, leaving only a gaping pit across their face - which forces the mutants to rely on a twisted version of echolocation to navigate. These poor creatures, termed "ash walkers" by the citizens, are shunned and driven to the very fringes of society to eke out a miserable survival amongst the blasted wastelands.	+	Those mutated by constant exposure to the choking ash and geothermal radiation typically display ash-grey skin, tremendous physical strength, elongated bat-like ears, and the loss of their sight as the bone surrounding the ocular area of their skull weakens - collapsing inwards as the skin rots, leaving only a gaping pit across their face - which forces the mutants to rely on a twisted version of echolocation to navigate. These poor creatures, termed "ash walkers" by the citizens, are shunned and driven to the very fringes of society to eke out a miserable survival amongst the blasted wastelands.