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'''WHAT JUST HAPPENED TO YOU?''' I was taking apart the carburetor on a Ford Torino when shards of shadow, hard as metal, intangible as the night, came swarming out of the engine, flying in my face, and then vanishing about the garage.
 
'''WHAT JUST HAPPENED TO YOU?''' I was taking apart the carburetor on a Ford Torino when shards of shadow, hard as metal, intangible as the night, came swarming out of the engine, flying in my face, and then vanishing about the garage.
  
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'''WHAT'S ON THE SURFACE?''' Medium build guy with a partially shaved head, neck tattoos, and a professional service voice and smile that both could have gone to Harvard. They never falter until I give them ''permission'' to falter.
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'''WHAT'S ON THE SURFACE?''' Medium build guy with a partially shaved head and neck tattoos with a service professional voice and smile that both could have gone to Harvard. They never falter until I give them ''permission'' to falter.
  
 
'''WHAT LIES BENEATH?''' Fraying filters and an ever deepening chasm of pure exhaustion and mounting frustration that are infested with this gibbering laughter that seems to come from everywhere inside of me and nowhere all at once.
 
'''WHAT LIES BENEATH?''' Fraying filters and an ever deepening chasm of pure exhaustion and mounting frustration that are infested with this gibbering laughter that seems to come from everywhere inside of me and nowhere all at once.

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