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"I said, not so smart, are you?" The girl's voice was raising, and a scowl of anger distorted her face.
 
"I said, not so smart, are you?" The girl's voice was raising, and a scowl of anger distorted her face.
 
  
 
Judy only whimpered, and the Carter's pulled back for a kick... and then felt a heavy hand on her shoulder. She turned in irritation, angry words on her lips... and froze.
 
Judy only whimpered, and the Carter's pulled back for a kick... and then felt a heavy hand on her shoulder. She turned in irritation, angry words on her lips... and froze.
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Malika stared for a long moment. “She's a... she's interested in Hana? But... I mean, Hana's not... is she?”
 
Malika stared for a long moment. “She's a... she's interested in Hana? But... I mean, Hana's not... is she?”
  
''“They'' aren't,” said Sorcha, firmly. “Hana hasn't noticed. Honestly, I don't think that Hana gets it at all. Have you noticed? Talk about boys with Judy and she'll change the subject, but talk about boys with Hana and she just doesn't get it. Anyway, Juds is in love with Hana, and that's that.”
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“They aren't,” said Sorcha, firmly. “Hana hasn't noticed. Honestly, I don't think that Hana gets it at all. Have you noticed? Talk about boys with Judy and she'll change the subject, but talk about boys with Hana and she just doesn't get it. Anyway, Juds is in love with Hana, and that's that.”
  
 
“But...” Malika didn't understand this at all. Why would Judy be in love with Hana, and not Hana's handsome and clever and nice older brother Jason? “So it doesn't... bother you?”
 
“But...” Malika didn't understand this at all. Why would Judy be in love with Hana, and not Hana's handsome and clever and nice older brother Jason? “So it doesn't... bother you?”
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“Who? All they'd do is put her in a home or something, and she'd lose her friends, and probably get treated just as bad,” Judy pointed out. “We can't let her just sleep out in the streets, though.”
 
“Who? All they'd do is put her in a home or something, and she'd lose her friends, and probably get treated just as bad,” Judy pointed out. “We can't let her just sleep out in the streets, though.”
  
Malika thought about it. “Why don't I ask her over tonight? Since my sister got married, we've got a little more space. I think I have some clothes that'd fit her, and mom goes crazy about cooking for company.” Normally, Malika considered her family, especially her mother, far too traditionalistic and embarrassing to expose her friends to, but if it meant that Emma would have a roof over her head, a hot shower, and a full stomach, it was well worth it.
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Malika thought about it. “Why don't I ask her over tonight? Since my sister got married, we've got a little more space. I think I have some clothes that'd fit her, and mom goes crazy about cooking for company.” Normally, Malika considered her family, especially her mother, far to traditionalistic and embarrassing to expose her friends to, but if it meant that Emma would have a roof over her head, a hot shower, and a full stomach, it was well worth it.
  
 
Judy smiled brightly. “Perfect. Thank you, Malika. That's...”
 
Judy smiled brightly. “Perfect. Thank you, Malika. That's...”
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“I'll learn!” promised Chloe, her grin broader than ever.
 
“I'll learn!” promised Chloe, her grin broader than ever.
 
=='''What is Love?'''==
 
 
Jason looked out the window and sighed.  There she was again--- Judy Nesmith.  His sister's best friend... and his first love.  He wasn't sure when he'd fallen for her, but, thinking back, it had been a while now.  She'd been so pathetic and sad when she first started staying over at the Jeong residence-- his heart had gone out to her, the more so when he realized how incredibly smart she was.  He'd wanted to help her, to make her smile... to impress her with his kindness and intelligence and ability.  But it had always been in vain.  He'd tried telling her how he felt as best he could, but he could never find the right words.  He'd hoped, as clever as she was, that she could figure out his feelings for her, but it never happened.  No matter what he did, whenever he saw her, she was with Hana, oblivous to his feelings for her.  It didn't help that Hana's gang turned up a little too often, either-- they'd started out by ignoring him or regarding him contemptuously, but lately, it felt like they were deliberately sabotaging his efforts to get closer to Judy.  At least Hana herself wasn't interfering.  He wasn't sure what he could do if she did-- he didn't like to admit how frightening she could be, but she was.  He found himself frequently wishing that Hana would find a boyfriend already, as well-- it might keep her busy, giving him a better chance with Judy.  If he could only get up the courage.
 
 
And there was Judy, outside.  With Hana, and several of Hana's hangers-on.  Again.
 
 
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"Goddamn ''bastard!''" snarled Grace as she threw her cell phone down at the ground hard enough to break it.  "After all that, he's ''breaking up'' with me!  What if I really ''am...'' you know..."
 
 
Sorcha shook her head.  "You have got the worst luck with men, Grace.  D'you want us to invite Timmy-boy over for a little boot party?"
 
 
"No, damnit," Grace groaned.  "No, he's just like the rest of 'em.  One little hint--"
 
 
"One broken Trojan--"
 
 
"One hint that he might have to take some responsibility for something in his life, and Tim's gone.  Just like every other boy I've gone out with, damnit."  Grace kicked the remains of her phone along the street.
 
 
"You've had better luck than me, though," Sorcha pointed out.  "I can't get two dates with one guy."
 
 
"Maybe.  But I fall for them more than you do, too.  And they always either play around with other girls, or run out on me!" Grace snarled.  "Damnit, isn't there anything better?"
 
 
"Well," Sorcha grinned, "if you was to ask Judy, now..."
 
 
"Not an option," said Grace, firmly.  "I like boys.  Period.  And there are no good ones, anywhere."
 
 
"You might just be right, there... you might just be right."
 
 
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"All right.  I'll see you at eight," said Blue, closing her phone.
 
 
Ruby shook her head.  "We're on our way to meet the others, Blue.  This might run late, and are you really going to go on a date after, ah..."  She glanced around the crowded bus.  ''"Business?''  You won't really have time."
 
 
"I'm not," answered Blue firmly.  "I'm standing him up.  His pride needs to take a hit, or he'll think that he's in charge."  As far as Blue was concerned, this was not an option-- if she was dating someone, what she said, went. 
 
 
Or if it wasn't going to be that way, whoever she was dating had better damn well stand up for himself.
 
 
"If I treated boys the way that you do, Blue, I'd never have a boyfriend," said Ruby. 
 
 
"And instead you've got Justin, who is entirely weak and useless," replied Blue.  "Does he ever do anything but what you want?"
 
 
"Now wait just a minute, Blue," said Ruby, angrily.  "That's exactly what you're trying to turn John into!"
 
 
"A foolish consistency is the hobgoblin of simple minds."
 
 
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Tilly tried to conceal her disappointment as she approached the others.  She shouldn't have been surprised that Judy was already talking to Hana, of course, and she didn't want to get in the way of Judy's feelings, if Hana returned them.  But Hana seemed entirely oblivous to Judy's feelings, just as Judy seemed to not notice Jason's attraction. 
 
 
''Really,'' she thought, ''this entire gang is one big soap opera.  Malika likes Jason.  Jason likes Judy.  Judy likes Hana.  I like Hana.  Hana likes... well, I don't know.  Fighting, I guess.  And then there's Blue and her boys, and Grace and ''her'' boys... at least Ruby's been halfway steady with Justin, even if he is a total wimp... and pretty much none of them have noticed when somebody likes them.  I don't see how they miss it.  I'm pretty sure ''I'd'' notice if somebody liked me... maybe I should write a poem about that.  Oh, God-- here comes Chloe... I hope she doesn't...''
 
 
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Malika couldn't help but laugh as Chloe put Tilly in an arm bar.  Chloe's behavior, while erratic, was still pretty funny at times, and she seemed to have latched onto Tilly as the perfect person to torment in strange way, like now, as she tried to force a Hello Kitty temporary tatoo onto Tilly's arm.  ''Well, Tilly really needs to learn to stand up to her better.  At least she's stopped bothering Emma...''  Emma had spent the night with Malika's family again, and was watching Tilly and Chloe wrestle with amusement.
 
 
''That's good.  I wonder if...'' Malika looked up at the window to the Hana's apartment.  Sure enough, there was Jason, looking down on him.  ''Jason... he's so nice.''  She waved up at him, and his face disappeared instantly.  ''Shy, too.  And clueless.  Like Hana.''  Malika looked at Hana, who was laughing as she talked to Judy.
 
 
''I think I've been friends with Hana longer than anybody but Judy.  I gues I'm kind of clueless, too-- I didn't see what was going on with Judy until Sorcha pointed it out-- but I'm still ahead of her.  I mean, Hana's in a class of her own.  I can see why she'd miss Judy liking her, but there were those two guys, last year, and the year before that.  And she just didn't get it at all.  No matter what they did, she just didn't get it.  Nobody else could have missed it... maybe it runs in her family, though.  I mean, Jason's missed it every time that I've flirted with him, and he's totally missed that Judy likes Hana.''
 
 
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Judy laughed at Hana's joke, and gave her a sad smile as Hana ruffled the hair on Emma's head.  ''Hana... I don't know if I'll ever be able to tell you.  I could stay like this with you forever, really.  As long as you're happy.  Even if you decided that you liked some boy, or even Tilly.  Although you might have some competition if you liked Tilly... but I don't think that's going to happen soon.  And that's fine.  Even if I can't be as close to you as I want, if I can stay by your side.  If you can be happy.''
 
 
''That's all that matters.  Because I love you.''
 
 
=='''Hana and Judy at the fair'''==
 
 
Blake St. John sighed.  He'd taken his new family out to the Doccombe Village Fetê in the hopes that some good, old-fashioned fun would be a good chance for them to bond together.  He was quite fond of his stepdaughter, and would have liked to spend more time with her, as well as to get a chance to get her away from her frankly thuggish pack of friends.  She'd be starting at a new school now-- thankfully, a much better school, away from the gang (and you really had to call it a gang) that she'd been associating with. 
 
 
Except that Judy had ''insisted'' that her friend Hana come along. 
 
 
To be fair, Hana had been perfectly well-behaved on the trip so far, and even friendly with him (if more familiar than he would have thought appropriate), and, as his new wife had pointed out to him more than once, she'd been Judy's friend through some very bad times in her life, protecting her from her beast of a father.  And he certainly didn't hold Hana's relative poverty against her-- Jeong and Son was a perfectly respectable plumbing business, if small, and, after all, he was very wealthy indeed. 
 
 
But... Hana Jeong was another matter.  It was a wonder that the girl hadn't been jailed, really... and, to be honest, she made him... nervous.  Not scared, of course.  A man his age had no reason to be scared of a young girl, no matter her reputation.  It was important that he remember that.  But... nervous.  There was something in her eyes that unnerved him... something predatory.
 
 
Aside from that, though, the day wasn't going all that badly.  Hana and Judy hadn't done anything illegal, or even really questionable so far, instead playing cards on their trip out, and not even for money.  Now they were at the fair, running around, having fun like two normal young girls... and he could spend more time with his new wife, which wasn't bad at all.
 
 
“Come on, Hana!” said Judy, leading her best friend towards a tent.  “Let's check this one out!” 
 
 
Hana followed reluctantly.  “Juds,” she said, “why a fortune teller?  You're the smart one.  You know that this stuff is fake, right?”
 
 
“It's just for fun, Hana,” Judy answered.  “Come on.  What's it going to hurt?”
 
 
“Fine, fine...”
 
 
Hana followed Judy into the tent, watching as an old woman had Judy stir loose tea leaves into a cup, stir them, and drink most of the tea.  Judy was then told to swirl the remainder (three times clockwise), and concentrate on a wish while touching the edge of the saucer to the cup, and then turn it upside down into the saucer, and she did, passing the cup to the old woman, who looked at the leaves remaining inside.
 
 
“Ah, I see...” she began.  “Do you see here, the axe at the top, away from the handle?  You will face difficulties, but you will be able to overcome them.  This cigar indicates new friends-- several of them, from the stalks placed near it.  The goat, though, warns of enemies, and from the size, you will either face strong ones or many ones.  You will need the help of your friends to overcome them.  This snake warns of the danger you will face, as well-- a subtle danger, as well as the overt one symbolized by the flag.  From danger may come knowledge, though.”
 
 
Hana was looking skeptically over Judy's shoulder at the cup.  She couldn't make out any shapes in the blobs that the leaves formed, although at least all this talk of danger and enemies was at least more interesting than the usual rot about journeys and mysterious strangers.  Perhaps the old lady had heard of the Bales School Girls, and knew who she was talking to.
 
 
“...and finally, the star on the bottom signifies that your wish will come true, although the rabbit nearby suggests that you will need bravery to make it happen.  Clearly, your life is going to be very interesting.”  Judy glanced at Hana, smiling, and got up.
 
 
As they left, Judy gave Hana an amused look.  “You know, Hana, I'm supposed to be the rational one.  Why are you so skeptical?”
 
 
“Eh, me whole family is mad for fortune tellers.  They even got some fancy one in all the way from Korea for dad's wedding.  She told 'em that him and ma would have a few kids, and that the oldest would be strong and loyal, and the youngest would be gentle, kind, and studious.  Now, I'm the youngest, and nobody would ever describe me that way,” Hana explained.  “Talk about a waste of money!”
 
 
Judy laughed.  “Well, you're really kinder than you give yourself credit for, but you're right.  That's not you at all.  Although...”  She thought about it for a moment.  “It's not a bad description of Jae-Sun, you know.  And the description of Chung-Ho is dead on.”
 
 
Hana snorted.  “Where does that leave me, though?  I'm the youngest-- not Jae-Sun.”
 
 
“Maybe you're an alien or something,” said Judy, laughing.  “Come on, let's go get something to eat.”
 
  
 
=='''Hana and Judy meet a monster'''==
 
=='''Hana and Judy meet a monster'''==
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=='''End of an Era'''==
 
=='''End of an Era'''==
  
Wiping tears from her eyes, Tilly had steeled herself.  She couldn't face things anymore, and it was clear to her that the hurting would never stop.  Besides, there was no one who would miss her, anyway.  Nobody understood her.  Nobody cared.  Even if anyone who knew her had been there, they surely wouldn't want to stop her.  Closing her eyes, she'd stepped out in front of the speeding truck, confident that she'd be dead instantly.  A final Christmas present to herself.
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Wiping tears from her eyes, Tilly had steeled herself.  She couldn't face things anymore, and it was clear to her that the hurting would never stop.  Besides, there was no one who would miss her, anyway.  Nobody understood her.  Nobody cared.  Even if anyone who knew here had been there, they surely wouldn't want to stop her.  Closing her eyes, she'd stepped out in front of the speeding truck, confident that she'd be dead instantly.  A final Christmas present to herself.
  
 
The strong hand on the back of her jacket that had abruptly yanked her back out of the street had taken her completely by surprise.  It had hurt, of course-- she'd taken the hard pull on her armpits and throat, and felt half choked.  She had turned tear-filled eyes up to her rescuer, expecting an adult.
 
The strong hand on the back of her jacket that had abruptly yanked her back out of the street had taken her completely by surprise.  It had hurt, of course-- she'd taken the hard pull on her armpits and throat, and felt half choked.  She had turned tear-filled eyes up to her rescuer, expecting an adult.
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She just didn't know what it was.
 
She just didn't know what it was.
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=='''Runaway'''==
 
=='''Runaway'''==
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"Don't make me poke you with my dirigible."
 
"Don't make me poke you with my dirigible."
  
 
 
=='''Erin and the Crystal'''==
 
 
It was a bit late to be out, but Erin needed to return that library book. For a certain value of "needed", that is.
 
 
The library wasn't far from home...And yet, she managed to encounter something quite extraordinary on her way. Something that would change her life.
 
 
As she passed near a small alee, she noticed both light and loud sounds coming from it. Looking in, she went bug-eyed as she saw a scene straight out of a fantasy movie: A large, shifting mass of utter blackness, shrieking as it fought a young woman in a beautiful, elaborate green and blue dress.
 
 
The fight probably didn't last more than thirty seconds, but Erin lost notion of time as she watched the surrealistic scene. The dark entity, whatever it was, seemed to be repelling light somehow. The woman, by contrast, seemed to be fighting it with luminous blasts, while making incredible leaps that led Erin to wonder if she might actually be flying.
 
 
Finally, the woman pointed her finger at the entity, and, with a look of strong determination, shouted out: "It ends here, foulest of fiends! EVIL-SMITING SPIRAL!" As she did, a spiral of multicolored light burst from her finger and struck the creature, which shrieked even louder than before as it dissolved. The woman then rushed toward someone lying on the ground (whom Erin had failed to notice earlier, too transfixed by the battle). "Tommy? Are you alright?" She pleaded as she gently shook the person. The latter slowly got up, inquiring first about the woman's well-being, then about the "nihl", as he called it. She confirmed the first, and said the latter had been destroyed. Reassured, the two left.
 
 
Neither of them had noticed Erin, who, shell-shocked, remained motionless for another good minute, trying to process what she had just seen. Actually...Had she seen anything? Had she just imagined it? Was she going insane? It...warranted investigation, to the very least.
 
Searching the area, Erin noticed that none the attacks of the woman had seemed to damage the surroundings. It was practically as if no battle had taken place...Save for one thing: A black crystal, repelling the light around it like the creature earlier. In fact, it seemed to lie at approximately the spot where the creature had disintegrated - probably its only remains.
 
 
As she left the scene, Erin clutched the crystal. It was, after all, her only evidence that what she had witnessed had been real.
 
 
 
''Research journal, entry #43: I've begun experimenting on the crystal.''
 
 
''This thing is more than a little unusual. When I touch it, I can perceive some thoughts it seems to be having. How this works, I have no idea; the scientific implications are staggering.''
 
 
''I've looked up known types of crystals, but nothing matches this. I don't dare run tests to determine its chemical composition; if this thing can think by itself, as I suspect it can, then I might inadvertently kill it by doing so.''
 
 
 
''Research journal, entry #46: The crystal seems to be reacting to my own thoughts with its own. I think it's trying to calibrate something, in order to be able to communicate with me.''
 
 
 
And eventually, it did.
 
 
"So...what exactly ARE you?"
 
 
"The term is 'void crystal'. I exist to manipulate magical energies."
 
 
"Magical? But magic doesn't..." she remembered the scene that had led to her finding the crystal. "All right, we'll call it magic for convenience's sake. What is it, really?"
 
 
"I cannot give a meaningful answer to this question. I have very little knowledge not directly pertinent to my function."
 
 
"Ah. Well...what about your origins? Where you come from? Who or what created you? I remember you mentioning the name 'Shao' at some point..."
 
 
"Miscommunication."
 
 
"Ah. Then what about that girl in green and blue you were fighting?"
 
 
"Insufficient information. I was attacked without warning for reasons I am not aware of. It is clear, however, that she was using magic."
 
 
"Sigh...That doesn't give me many leads."
 
 
"You wish to know more about magic?"
 
 
"Well, yeah."
 
 
"That fits my purpose. I can teach you how to use magic yourself."
 
 
A yet-undiscovered field of scientific research. How could she refuse?
 
 
 
The Watsons's garage had de facto become Erin's lab years ago. That she was spending even more time there than usual did not particularly worry her parents at the time. If they had only known...
 
 
"Looks like I have fine control now," said Erin, observing how the beam generated by her laser pointer was curving around her finger. Manipulating space itself was proving to be her forté.
 
 
"That you do, but this remains only very basic magic," said the crystal. "Our research is progressing slowly."
 
 
"I know, I know" Erin sighed. "The stuff I can already do is very interesting, and I'm really grateful for your lessons, but I just can't seem to do any of the advanced stuff."
 
 
"You are not magical by nature. It may be impossible for you as is."
 
 
"As is?"
 
 
"It ought to be possible to change that."
 
 
"Please explain."
 
 
"There exists a procedure for void crystals to fully empower humans with magic."
 
 
"Isn't that what you've been doing for the last two months?"
 
 
"No. I've only allowed you to channel some of the energies I create. The operation I speak of would fully empower you, giving you abilities as advanced as my own."
 
 
"Whoa. Any reasons NOT to do it?"
 
 
"The process requires a lot of energy on my part. I will need a few days to recuperate."
 
 
"Oh. Is that...a problem?"
 
 
"You are a good student. I believe it is worth the effort."
 
 
 
And so, they prepared the operation. As the void crystal explained, it involved creating a direct mental link between their minds, which would allow it to unlock her own abilities.
 
 
Finally, they were ready, and began the ritual. Erin could feel the mental link forming, and the thoughts of the void crystal becoming clearer and clearer.
 
 
Then, suddenly, something began to feel really wrong. Hate. Suffering. Despair. And this horrible, horrible world all around her that had to be DESTROYED at all costs!
 
 
Which...didn't really feel like her.
 
 
"What...what's going on?"
 
 
"Oh, that is simply void crystal possession kicking in."
 
 
"Wait, possession?"
 
 
"Why yes, you foolish, foolish girl." Foolish. Worthless. Those thoughts assaulted her mind. "A full mental link means I can override your thoughts with my own. Really, I have been quite lucky - not only did that brightly-colored imbecile fail to realize she had to destroy the crystal to truly destroy me,
 
I was found almost immediately by an easy-to-manipulate host! Well, you may take solace in knowing that, for once in your wretched life, you've actually accomplished anything worthwhile!"
 
 
That last part felt like it was making far more sense than it normally would. "You're...being...more colorful than usual..."
 
 
"Oh yes. I've felt it would be better to display no personality while manipulating you. No need for that now, of course."
 
 
"You were...lying to me all along? How much was true?"
 
 
"Only what I had no reason to lie about. Not that it matters. All that you need to know now is the following:
 
 
The universe is a blight."
 
 
It was. Such a horrible thing. It filled her with disgust.
 
 
"Oblivion is the only true path."
 
 
Very true. It would be so much better, with this horrible, awful universe gone.
 
 
"Reality must be destroyed."
 
 
Yes. Burn it to the ground! Unmake every atom! Erase space and time!
 
 
"The Nihls must triumph."
 
 
The Nihls. Beings of non-being. The inevitable destroyers of reality. She would smash the world for them.
 
 
"There is nothing but the Nihls' quest for oblivion."
 
 
Nothing else mattered. It was all she existed for. Yes...
 
 
No. Those thoughts weren't natural. "That's...That's just mind-control. You're making me think those things."
 
 
"Doesn't make them any less true."
 
 
Of course. The crystal was right...
 
 
NO! The crystal was WRONG! "This is all lies! All of it! Truth is based on reason, on facts and deduction, not on...on FORCING someone to think something!"
 
 
"Poor, poor deluded human. There IS no truth. Only oblivion."
 
 
"Now you're not even making any sense! If there's no truth - and there IS - then what YOU'RE saying isn't true either!"
 
 
"Shush, human child. That's enough from you. Accept your new goal - your only goal - as my host in the war against existence.
 
 
Yes. NO! "Get bent! The universe DESERVES to exist!"
 
 
"It most certainly doesn't. It deserves to be erased, leaving only glorious void for the Nihls."
 
 
"Bullshit! This universe...It's...It's...Magnificent!" Breathing deeply, she went on, trying to summon every bit of mental and emotional strength at her disposal as she struggled to remember all that made the world worthy of existing. "You don't understand, you stupid little piece of rock! You just fail to see the beauty of it all! How such simple physical rules can form the fractal of reality! How everything, through every order and scale, fits together! How it all connects! How it all makes perfect sense!"
 
 
"Futilities! All of it is abhorrent!"
 
 
"All of it is FREAKING AWESOME! You see...You take the world. Then, you start doing things. And other things happen as a result, and at first, you don't know why.
 
 
Then you come up with an idea that could explain why. But you don't know if it's true yet. But if it's true...then it would imply that other things should happen. So you run tests. And your idea was right...those other things WILL happen. Because that's how the universe works: By being consistent. By making perfect sense."
 
 
"Rubbish, all of it! It doesn't matter if it all fits together - none of it should exist in the first place!"
 
 
"And then," she ignored the interruption, "once you have an idea of how things are...You can start figuring out how to use those rules in your favor. That's how you create technology out of science. And again, it works. Because that's how reality rolls."
 
 
"You think that impresses me, imbecile?!"
 
 
"It impresses ME. And I've barely started."
 
 
 
Indeed, she barely had. The mental tug-of-war last for quite a long time, as the void crystal kept trying to force the Nihls' ideology onto her mind, and she kept countering by poking holes at its logic, and reassuring herself that if the crystal's ideas made no sense, they couldn't possibly be true.
 
 
The crystal tried to force her to betray all she stood for. She explained how trust made logical sense, and kept society working. It pushed her to destroy the world. She went on a long tirade about the worth of human life; she praised happiness for the sake of happiness; she called the crystal's campaign against both nonsensical. The crystal would make her hate the world. She would make herself love it again by remembering all the bits that she had previously found so wondrous.
 
 
And it worked. She believed - to the very bottom of her soul - in the primacy of logic and reason. And she clung to that as she resisted the crystal's mind-control, countering every attack with hearty arguments in favor of the world. It got easier and easier - in fact, she could distinctly feel the crystal weakening.
 
 
"You are...such an idiot" the crystal pressed on. "You think your puny reason and science triumph over all? What makes you think the world makes sense in the first place?! What makes you think it's not all random?!"
 
 
"Nothing."
 
 
"Nothing at all! Wait. What?"
 
 
"I do NOT, in fact, know that the universe makes sense. I just choose to work on that assumption."
 
 
"Wha...but..."
 
 
"Again, this is only logical. If the world makes sense, then we must treat it as if it makes sense. If it does not, then there is no meaning to anything we do or think at all. Under the assumption that it makes no sense, there is no point in anything...So, pragmatically, one must assume that logic does, indeed, reign supreme."
 
 
"But you don't know that! And since you don't..."
 
 
"Your mind-control has gotten a lot weaker. You're relying more and more on arguments."
 
 
"I..."
 
 
"And all of those arguments - every single one - requires logic and reason in order to work AT ALL."
 
 
"..."
 
 
"Schroedinger's cat got your tongue?"
 
 
"Shut up! I am a void crystal! I serve the Nihls' campaign of oblivion! Your words are meaningless to me!"
 
 
"So, destroying the world is the meaning of your life?"
 
 
"YES! And..."
 
 
"But you keep insisting that there's NO meaning to anything. No purpose."
 
 
"But..."
 
 
"Don't you see the contradiction? You seek purpose in the very destruction of all purpose!"
 
 
"I seek nothingness!"
 
 
"For no good reason! You're not serving nothingness - you're just doing all you do for NOTHING! None of what you say has any worth or substance whatsoever! Even when you say you want to destroy the world, you're still operating under the basic rules of cause and effect!
 
 
So come on! I DARE you to say something, ANYTHING, that doesn't require reason in order to work!"
 
 
"I...I am...I am..."
 
 
There was a crash. For the first time since the battle had begun, Erin noticed she had been surrounded by utter darkness - which was suddenly receding as the void crystal shattered into thousands of pieces and evaporated before her very eyes.
 
 
Erin caught her breath and looked around. She was still in her lab...the garage that is. Slowly, she walked through the door and into the living room.
 
 
"Hey sweetie."
 
 
She looked at her parents. Everything seemed normal.
 
 
"Sweetie? Are you all right?"
 
 
She paused for a moment. "Yeah. Everything is all right. Everything is all right."
 
 
 
=='''Erin Watson, The Soul Of Science'''==
 
 
Three months had passed since Erin's battle with the void crystal. She reflected upon it for the thousandth time as she made her way to Chloe's house.
 
 
The first couple of days after the fight had been filled with worries. She had seen the crystal destroyed, but was it really the end of it? What if she went to sleep one day, and woke up the next as a nihilistic monster?
 
 
Those worries quickly gave way to wonder, however: The powers of the crystal had not been lost. They were now hers, and far superior to the little parlor tricks she had been taught previously. Exploring and analyzing them had been the most amazing experience of her life so far. Matter creation! Spatial manipulation! Pocket dimensions! She had created an extra-dimensional castle from scratch, and designed her own magitech, for crying out loud! She was making those incredible scientific breakthroughs, and creating an entirely new branch of technology! This was the best thing that had ever happened to her.
 
 
Buuuuut...That months-long high had been slowly giving way to practical concerns. The crystal had revealed the existence of the "Nihls" - and while Erin's information was far from complete, she knew enough to understand the Nihls were a threat to the universe at large. The mind boggled at the concept. She'd been trying to come up with offensive and defensive forms of magic, but that wasn't enough. Witht he world at stake, surely she shouldn't be taking all of it on her shoulders? Shouldn't large organizations be devoted to this? Armies, governments...Perhaps she ought to go directly to Parliament and give a demonstration...
 
 
"Fire!"
 
 
...Or perhaps she could just now notice the burning house three blocks away from her.
 
 
There was already a large crowd gathered in front of it, and at least two people had cell phones, so she figured the firemen must already be on the way...But she heard no sirens, so it could take a few minutes. There could be people inside...And she had her Genesis Pen on her...
 
 
A dark alee was all she needed. "To make sense of it all: The Scion of Science!" A lightshow later, and she was ready. Warping space to get past the crowd, waving her pen to generate tons of water, cuttig a path through the flames...It was almost easy. Soon enough, she found a group of people trapped inside the house. Some water, some space twisting, and they were out. The crowd seemed wowed.
 
 
Then one of them took a step forward. "Who the heck are YOU, lady?"
 
 
"Er...Soul. The Soul of Reason!" She replied hastily with the first thing that came to mind, then, in a slight panic, teleported away to Castle Nexus.
 
 
Minutes later, as Erin Watson, magical girl, reached her cousin's home...She was vaguely aware that things would be very different for her from now on.
 
  
 
=='''A Moonlit Night in Birmingham'''==
 
=='''A Moonlit Night in Birmingham'''==
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Simon was quiet for a bit. "Oh. Alright then. Nevermind."
 
Simon was quiet for a bit. "Oh. Alright then. Nevermind."
 
=='''Wish You Were Here'''==
 
 
Simon knew he shouldn't. He'd promised, after all. But he just couldn't help himself. He'd picked up the phone and was dialing before the guilt even really hit him.
 
 
Simon listened to the phone ring. She'd probably angry, or at least annoyed. She might not even answer the phone.
 
 
Simon heard the phone pick up on the other end, and then a sigh.
 
 
"You promised you'd wait."
 
 
"I know."
 
 
"I've been gone all of three hours."
 
 
"I know. How are you doing?"
 
 
"I'm fine."
 
 
"How's Paris?"
 
 
She paused for a second. "It's nice. Simon, you're-"
 
 
"Being really clingy, I know."
 
 
She sighed. "And shamelessly, as usual."
 
 
"I'm just worried about you."
 
 
"I know, Simon."
 
 
"Look, I'm sorry I bothered you."
 
 
"It's alright. Goodbye, Simon."
 
 
"Hey, sis?"
 
 
"Yeah?"
 
 
"Wish you were here, sis."
 
 
She hung up. Simon set the phone down and sat back in his chair. ''Am I really that bad? I just...''
 
Simon looked over at his father, sitting at the living room desk. ''It's supposed to be one of the worst things that can happen to a couple. And they don't care. They just accept it and move on. They never tried to prevent it or fix it or anything. It's like they don't miss it at all.
 
 
If they could lose that, why couldn't they lose their love for us? Their love for her? Couldn't they just wake up one day, realize that they don't give a damn about their own children, and just accept it?
 
 
Well, I'm never going to be like that. That's why I bother you so much, sis. Because I love you. And you need to know that. And I'm going to try to make sure nobody ever hurts you. Because what our parents have done... what our parents could do, that's worse than you ever deserve.
 
''
 
''So, please, sis, tolerate me.''
 
 
Simon's father cleared his throat. "You shouldn't pester your sister so much. She's not that little anymore."
 
 
"I know, dad."
 
 
Simon got up. "I'm going to step out for a bit of fresh air."
 
 
His father looked up from his work. "A bit late for a walk."
 
 
"Don't worry, I'll be careful." ''I think it's a lovely evening to put on the ritz..''
 
 
 
=='''A Warrior Named Phillipi'''==
 
 
The sound of swords clashed in the training field as the young Spartan warriors sparred with each other.  All of the trainers eyes were on a certain match..  Parathias was a solid fighter but it was the new recruit who was getting all of the attention.  This recruit was named Phillipi.  He had excelled in his Krypteia and killed many helots.  He was a rising star.
 
 
''Clang, clang!'' The sound of the swords became more violent as Parathias and Phillipi faced off.  Phillipi was calm as Parathias lunged in with a clumsy move.
 
 
''This fool thinks he can win?'', Phillipi thought this as he parried the blow easily.  Phillipi continued to force the sword downwards.  He looked into Parathias' eyes and then, with his opponent's sword trapped, hit him with a devastating backhand.  Parathias stumbled backwards and dropped his sword.  Phillipi gave no respite as he dashed forward with uncanny speed and struck his target with the hilt of his sword right in the gut.  Parathias doubled over on his knees, the ability to breathe escaped him for a moment. 
 
 
"Stop!"  The command came as Phillipt's sword was a mere wisp away from Parathias' throat.  The trainer was not going to let Parathias die today.  His father was an ephor and he had earned the right to die in glorious battle. Not to mention the political power his father wielded. Phillipi though, his skills were almost god-like. It was like watching Hercules himself! 
 
 
"Against me, you will always die." Phillipi said flatly as he extended his hand to the man.  Parathias brushed aside his hand and stood with his own power.
 
 
"We will see about that!", said Parathias, "Do not be overconfident."
 
 
It was true though.  At the age of eighteen, Phillipi was better than soldiers who have served for years.  Parathias would never stand a chance but his Spartan pride would not let him submit.  Phillipi needed a challenge.  Killing helots was easy sport to him.  He did not want easy, he wanted to fight to the death.  The sound of the trainer's voice interrupted his thoughts.
 
 
"Phillipi!  Come with me son.  Parathias, go get some rest.  It was a good match boys.  You both are fine Spartans"
 
 
"Yes sir!" The two responded at the same time. Phillipi looked at pathetic Parathias as he walked towards the trainer.
 
 
''Fine Spartan indeed.  By the blood of Hercules, you hardly make a good sparing partner.  You'll be dead soon enough.'' He didn't even think about what the trainer could want with him as the left the field.
 
 
=='''Tamaa'''==
 
''Africa''
 
''A long time ago''
 
 
What was left of my tribe huddled together at the base of the cliffs. The sun was falling low in the sky, and when the daylight faded, doom would arrive. The monsters always attacked at night – our warriors had fought bravely, but they were no match for these creatures. Now, we had no warriors left – women and young boys and old men carried spears, but they stood even less chance. If they wanted too, the monsters could have taken us all at once, but they didn’t. Instead, they took a few of us every night – it seemed as though the fear and despair those remaining felt.
 
 
I hated seeing everyone feel that way. I had to do something. I jumped onto a rock and spoke to the rest of the tribe.
 
 
“Everyone, we traveled many nights to reach this place, didn’t we? They say the spirits live here! Surely, they will protect us!”
 
 
But the rest of the tribe no longer believed the spirits would save them. They simply waited for the night to fall, and the monsters to come again, and take more of us. Mother dragged me away from the rock, to my screams of protest. Well, if nobody else was going to try to contact the spirits, then it was up to me. I closed my eyes, and began my prayer.
 
 
When I opened them again, I was looking straight at a cave that I hadn’t seen before. I remember the elders telling the children that we should avoid strange caves, for they may be gates to the spirit world. But wasn’t that exactly what I needed, now? I started into the cave.
 
 
As I walked deeper in, an odd feeling came over me – it was as if the fear and sorrow I had felt since the monsters first came were being gently lifted away from me. I saw strange shapes on the walls, and odd lights sparkled like stars around me, eventually cascading into the shape of a man.
 
 
“Who are you, child? Why are you here?” I should have been afraid – the elders say that the spirits can do terrible things if angered. Maybe I was just so desperate to save my tribe that it didn’t matter to me.
 
 
“My name is Nika. I beg of you, spirit, please save my tribe! The monsters will come again at nightfall, and the whole tribe has lost hope that they will be saved.”
 
 
“Not the whole tribe, Nika. You have not lost hope. What strength you have, child.”
 
 
“So you will save my tribe?”
 
 
“No, Nika. You are the one who shall save them.” The strange shapes on the walls began to glow, and then, one after another, I understood what they meant, and how to make them. “Nika, I bestow upon you the title of Tamaa, Hope. With that power, you shall save your tribe, and others.”
 
 
Suddenly, I found myself outside, with my tribe again. The last rays of sunlight were fading, and my tribe huddled in terror as the monsters’ shadowy shapes became visible.
 
 
But they would take no more of my people.
 
 
I traced a pattern in the air, and a circle of glowing light appeared around the tribe. Once again, I leaped onto the rock I had stood on before.
 
 
“Do not despair!” I cried, light glowing from my body, forcing the monsters to back away. “The Spirit of Creation has answered! I promise, these creatures will take no more of us!”
 
 
I traced a different symbol in the air, and the monsters froze where they were standing. Yet another, and they were consumed by that brilliant light.
 
 
''Thank you, Spirit of Creation,'' I prayed silently. ''From now on, I, and my descendants, will walk in places where there is no hope, and the people are defenseless. And in those places, with your aid, I will protect the people who are helpless, and light once again the flame of hope. My name is Tamaa-Nika, and this I swear.''
 

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