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Looking to the guitarist, we met eyes.  His were forlorn, shorn of hope, knowing he was doomed to the pots.  I had once had that look.  I had known that despair.
 
Looking to the guitarist, we met eyes.  His were forlorn, shorn of hope, knowing he was doomed to the pots.  I had once had that look.  I had known that despair.
  
“Are you refusing to sell him to me?”
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“Are you refusing to sell him to me?”
 
    
 
    
 
Stepping back, bowing deeper he said, “No, Sahib, I would give him to you at his stewing price if you will take him. I would make no profit, take a loss in fact, if you would take him thus and not mark me as having insulted the illustrious house of Hendrake”
 
Stepping back, bowing deeper he said, “No, Sahib, I would give him to you at his stewing price if you will take him. I would make no profit, take a loss in fact, if you would take him thus and not mark me as having insulted the illustrious house of Hendrake”
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Looking uncertainly at me, with something akin to confused gratitude he went on.
 
Looking uncertainly at me, with something akin to confused gratitude he went on.
  
“I certainly appreciate the impulse.  I'm certain that I would have made a stringy stew.  Of course it would have been harder on my musical career.  Frankly, I have no place to go.  Anyplace out of Chaos would be delightful.  By the way, I'm Chasa Birbiglia.  I’d say your humble servant if you were inclined to have me such.  If not, from wherever you can leave me will be fine.”  
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“I certainly appreciate the impulse.  I'm certain that I would have made a stringy stew.  Of course it would have been harder on my musical career.  Frankly, I have no place to go.  Anyplace out of Chaos would be delightful.  By the way, I'm Chasa Birbiglia.  I’d say your humble servant if you were inclined to have me such.  If not, from wherever you can leave me will be fine.”  
  
 
“Vek du Hendrake.  I am afraid I don't really have anyplace to go either.  I'm trying to avoid attention myself.  I'm hoping your former owner doesn't go running to the Hall of Punishments to register your sale with them.  I'm not sure of the procedure.”  
 
“Vek du Hendrake.  I am afraid I don't really have anyplace to go either.  I'm trying to avoid attention myself.  I'm hoping your former owner doesn't go running to the Hall of Punishments to register your sale with them.  I'm not sure of the procedure.”  
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“Well, Chasa.  I spent some time at a place in shadow that I liked a great deal.  The air is warm, the water is clean and the sky a bright light purple.  Its a sailing place.  Why don't we go there for a bit and see what we find?  That pouch would do you well there.”  
 
“Well, Chasa.  I spent some time at a place in shadow that I liked a great deal.  The air is warm, the water is clean and the sky a bright light purple.  Its a sailing place.  Why don't we go there for a bit and see what we find?  That pouch would do you well there.”  
 
 
Weighing the pouch in his hand, “Lead on, sahib, this should do us both well.”
 
Weighing the pouch in his hand, “Lead on, sahib, this should do us both well.”
 
   
 
   
 
Smiling at the gaunt musician, "Chasa, I think this is the beginning of a beautiful friendship."
 
Smiling at the gaunt musician, "Chasa, I think this is the beginning of a beautiful friendship."

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