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"You are certain it is Westminster Abbey? What marks it so in your mind?"<br><br>
 
"You are certain it is Westminster Abbey? What marks it so in your mind?"<br><br>
  
And so it went for the next half hour. What elements of the building and those surrounding it could he describe to her?  The color of the walls? The style of the masonry? The period? Were there windows? Were they boarded up? Broken? Or intact? Were there trees or greenery evident? Water features? People? If so, how did they look? Happy? Productive? Oppressed? Any signage or bills or banners? What were their language and content? What season was it? Winter? Summer? Autumn? Spring? What was the overall atmosphere or mood? Was his vision accompanied by sound? Could he hear speech, animals, man-made noise? Trains or ships signaling their presence? If it was dusk, were the church bells ringing the hour or prayer office? All these details she asked of him and more.<br><br>
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And so it went for the next half hour. What elements of the building and those surrounding it could he describe to her?  The color of the walls? The style of the masonry? The period? Were there windows? Were they boarded up? Broken? Or intact? Were there trees or greenery evident? Water features? People? If so, how did they look? Happy? Productive? Oppressed? Any signage or bills or banners? What were their language and content? What season was it? Winter? Summer? Autumn? Spring? What was the overall atmosphere or mood? Was his vision accompanied by sound? Could he hear speech, animal sounds, man-made noise? Trains or ships signaling their presence? If it was dusk, were the church bells ringing the hour or prayer office? All these details she asked of him and more.<br><br>
  
 
Josephine pressed him hard, pursuing every possible angle she could think of and to his credit, Ezekiel did his level best to answer as thoroughly and truthfully as he could. Both were weary at the end of it and Josephine drew her questioning to a close.<br><br>
 
Josephine pressed him hard, pursuing every possible angle she could think of and to his credit, Ezekiel did his level best to answer as thoroughly and truthfully as he could. Both were weary at the end of it and Josephine drew her questioning to a close.<br><br>

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