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It’s easy to find where Arden has set up shop.  Some of the surgical suites were reserved for the more influential patients and Arden has moved his gear, Brian, and the other equipment that he needed into the suite.  With Rina’s help, power had been rerouted and the batteries charged up with the numerous solar panels that still littered the top of the buildings in the city.  Now Arden had a desk in a spacious room, a solitary halogen light behind a desk in a corner, and a doctor’s cot in the opposite corner.  Next to the cot a hole had been knocked in the wall; a hole that hadn’t been approved, designed, or constructed by engineers.  Instead the hole looks like it was done by a rather frustrated doctor armed with a heavy iron sledgehammer.
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It’s easy to find where Arden has set up shop.  Some of the surgical suites were reserved for the more influential patients and Arden has moved his gear, Brian, and the other equipment that he needed into the suite.  With Rina’s help, power had been rerouted and the batteries charged up with the numerous solar panels that still littered the top of the buildings in the city.  Now Arden had a desk in a spacious room, a solitary halogen light behind a desk in a corner, and a doctor’s cot in the opposite corner.  Next to the cot a hole had been knocked in the wall; a hole that hadn’t been approved designed, or constructed by engineers.  Instead the hole looks like it was done by a rather frustrated doctor armed with a heavy iron sledgehammer.
  
 
Beyond, through the hole, a dark room lies, populated with many softly beeping machines, a large bed, and the comatose Brian.  A large transparent tent has been set up around his bed and its side bulge slightly with over pressure.  His burned skin is covered with fresh bandages, applied just moment ago by Arden.  Arden is stepping out of the tent, closing the tent behind him.  A side chamber has been set up as a pseudo-airlock.
 
Beyond, through the hole, a dark room lies, populated with many softly beeping machines, a large bed, and the comatose Brian.  A large transparent tent has been set up around his bed and its side bulge slightly with over pressure.  His burned skin is covered with fresh bandages, applied just moment ago by Arden.  Arden is stepping out of the tent, closing the tent behind him.  A side chamber has been set up as a pseudo-airlock.

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