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Dim black haunts in the far depths of chaos seem like the places dark things crawl to kill other dark things.  They crawl and squirm and wrestle and which dies is unknown to unseen eyes.
 
Dim black haunts in the far depths of chaos seem like the places dark things crawl to kill other dark things.  They crawl and squirm and wrestle and which dies is unknown to unseen eyes.
  
The difference between sorcery and science is semantics and location.  Call them scientists, call them sorcerers. Call them chefs.  They were jail-wardens to kitchen rats abandoned or misplaced by family and clan, too low on the birth order or to shallow in power to be worth serious attention.  Yet every scientist knows that even the slow rats might provide valuable insight if prodded with the right stick.  
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The difference between sorcery and science is semantics and location.  Call them scientists, call them sorcerers. They were jail-wardens to kitchen rats abandoned or misplaced by family and clan, too low on the birth order or to shallow in power to be worth serious attention.  Yet every scientist knows that even the slow rats might provide valuable insight if prodded with the right stick.  
  
 
This is the story of three dark kitchen rats starved to the fear of death.  
 
This is the story of three dark kitchen rats starved to the fear of death.  
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In that dark place, in the blood of violent certain death, one cried out in anguished pain and failure, and cursed the masters of his torment.  The other two rats cried out with him, their curses echoing in the dark cell, reaching up the rafters, sliding up the tunnels.
 
In that dark place, in the blood of violent certain death, one cried out in anguished pain and failure, and cursed the masters of his torment.  The other two rats cried out with him, their curses echoing in the dark cell, reaching up the rafters, sliding up the tunnels.
  
In their cry their blood erupted in a flash of their heritage, unknown to them.   
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In their cry their blood erupted in a flash of their heritage, unknown to them.  In the tall towers, the Masters of Torment felt the creation of three Death Curses of the Blood of Amber.  
 
 
In the tall towers, the Masters of Torment felt the creation of three Death Curses of the Blood of Amber.  
 
  
 
When the chef returned, the meat was ready for the fire.  That night two dark kitchen rats ate like Lords.
 
When the chef returned, the meat was ready for the fire.  That night two dark kitchen rats ate like Lords.

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