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At some point I passed some barrier. I do not know when but I began to change. I took on shapes I was not born with. They pushed and prodded and tormented me to take these forms but for some reason I could not achieve what they wanted. I could take the form but not the colors, not the hair, not the finger nails. They said the smallest flaw would be detected and I must try harder. I did. But there was pain and failure. They called me flawed. Broken. Limited. | At some point I passed some barrier. I do not know when but I began to change. I took on shapes I was not born with. They pushed and prodded and tormented me to take these forms but for some reason I could not achieve what they wanted. I could take the form but not the colors, not the hair, not the finger nails. They said the smallest flaw would be detected and I must try harder. I did. But there was pain and failure. They called me flawed. Broken. Limited. | ||
β | After that I was left alone for so long that i thought i might have been forgotten. Then they came for me again. I was allowed to help in their tasks, though I did not enjoy that. But if I was on their side of the knife, I was not hurt. I could only witness. I was told I had value to them in many | + | After that I was left alone for so long that i thought i might have been forgotten. Then they came for me again. I was allowed to help in their tasks, though I did not enjoy that. But if I was on their side of the knife, I was not hurt. I could only witness. I was told I had value to them in many and that as long as I remained valuable and did not cause them trouble I would be given permission to move around the dark land. But I would return or they would hunt me and hurt me. |
When one is beaten often enough, one knows no difference. | When one is beaten often enough, one knows no difference. | ||
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My body was stretched over the stone and I knew my death had come. I had known so little of life, only enough to hate losing it. A white hot blade was brought and quickly shoved into my stomach to quench it. I knew all my pain grown long was just preparing my pain for this. | My body was stretched over the stone and I knew my death had come. I had known so little of life, only enough to hate losing it. A white hot blade was brought and quickly shoved into my stomach to quench it. I knew all my pain grown long was just preparing my pain for this. | ||
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Something in me rebelled and I cursed. I know not what I said. But it was enough to keep the blade from me a second time. I lay upon the alter as the crowd gathered around the creature with the blade, now glowing a wicked icy blue. They cawed and clicked and laughed and drank. I fell to the ground and crawled to a corner and curled. I and my pain. | Something in me rebelled and I cursed. I know not what I said. But it was enough to keep the blade from me a second time. I lay upon the alter as the crowd gathered around the creature with the blade, now glowing a wicked icy blue. They cawed and clicked and laughed and drank. I fell to the ground and crawled to a corner and curled. I and my pain. | ||