Editing Dreams of a Fallen Crown:Characters:Almun FaShazzad

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Lytek hesitated, clearly embarrassed,"I know. It's just ''so close'' to perfect. I was working on it as a personal project. I'm just certain I could get it fixed with just a bit more time."
 
Lytek hesitated, clearly embarrassed,"I know. It's just ''so close'' to perfect. I was working on it as a personal project. I'm just certain I could get it fixed with just a bit more time."
  
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Kejak closed his eyes and rubbed his temples, his jaw pulled tight. "Fine... I will see to this. Thank you for bringing this to my attention, Daimyo." Each word escaped from the Director's mouth like shards of jutting ice.
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Kejak closed his eyes and rubbed his temples, his jaw pulled tight. "Fine... I will see to this. Thank you for bringing this to my attention, Daimyo." Each word fell from the Director's mouth like razor blades.
  
 
Lytek nodded and began moving for the exit,"If it's any consolation, I do think it will be in much better condition that before."
 
Lytek nodded and began moving for the exit,"If it's any consolation, I do think it will be in much better condition that before."

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