Editing Dwynwen and Alvah teleporting around
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Arriving at a large flat stone platform, triangular, with a curtain wall.</br> | Arriving at a large flat stone platform, triangular, with a curtain wall.</br> | ||
It looks out over the water. Looking around it looks out to unbroken waters as far as the eye can see in all directions. </br> | It looks out over the water. Looking around it looks out to unbroken waters as far as the eye can see in all directions. </br> | ||
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Looking inside you see a small room with a small cook fire and an arrow slot for light.</br> | Looking inside you see a small room with a small cook fire and an arrow slot for light.</br> | ||
A man looks up, "oh.. hellow... What can I do for you? Is Oberon declaring war again? "</br> | A man looks up, "oh.. hellow... What can I do for you? Is Oberon declaring war again? "</br> | ||
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'''Amber Bronkhorst'''</br> | '''Amber Bronkhorst'''</br> | ||
Alvah blinks and then hodls up her hand</br> | Alvah blinks and then hodls up her hand</br> | ||
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Arriving the immediate sense is water and darkness. Surrounded by water with a sandy bottom below, and only bare splotches of light from far above. possibly thousands of feet above. The press of water pressure is deeply painful and immediate.</br> | Arriving the immediate sense is water and darkness. Surrounded by water with a sandy bottom below, and only bare splotches of light from far above. possibly thousands of feet above. The press of water pressure is deeply painful and immediate.</br> | ||
Looking down the light barely reveals countless bones cleaned of meat by scuttling creatures.</br> | Looking down the light barely reveals countless bones cleaned of meat by scuttling creatures.</br> | ||
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'''Amber Bronkhorst'''</br> | '''Amber Bronkhorst'''</br> | ||
Alvah not expecting this turns, grabs Dwynwen and holds her close to her. She then focuses on Pirate watch imagining it and wanting to go back there.</br> | Alvah not expecting this turns, grabs Dwynwen and holds her close to her. She then focuses on Pirate watch imagining it and wanting to go back there.</br> |