Editing Episode 1. Bat Out of Hell
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<b>Ivan:</b> Are the sensors working properly? <br> | <b>Ivan:</b> Are the sensors working properly? <br> | ||
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<b>Nika:</b> Yes, Rina's checked them. What are we supposed to be looking for anyway? <br> | <b>Nika:</b> Yes, Rina's checked them. What are we supposed to be looking for anyway? <br> | ||
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<b>Ivan:</b> Ship.<br> | <b>Ivan:</b> Ship.<br> | ||
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<b>Nika:</b> No, really?<br> | <b>Nika:</b> No, really?<br> | ||
The sarcasm goes right over his head.<br> | The sarcasm goes right over his head.<br> | ||
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<b>Christian:</b> (to Grimes) Please surrender now and I promise to have the doctor tend to you and you won't be further harmed.<br> | <b>Christian:</b> (to Grimes) Please surrender now and I promise to have the doctor tend to you and you won't be further harmed.<br> | ||
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<b>Grimes:</b> All right…<b><i>—Like hell!</i></b><br> | <b>Grimes:</b> All right…<b><i>—Like hell!</i></b><br> | ||
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<b>Christian:</b> (shocked and angry) You realize he could have been <i>innocent.</i><br> | <b>Christian:</b> (shocked and angry) You realize he could have been <i>innocent.</i><br> | ||
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<b>Rina:</b> (shocked and angry right back) <i>Tell that to my arm.</i><br> | <b>Rina:</b> (shocked and angry right back) <i>Tell that to my arm.</i><br> | ||
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<b>Christian:</b> Yes, yes I'm sure his broken spine and your arm are equals.<br> | <b>Christian:</b> Yes, yes I'm sure his broken spine and your arm are equals.<br> | ||
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<b>Rina:</b> Let's pitch his body out the airlock. We can tell them he fell down the stairs.<br> | <b>Rina:</b> Let's pitch his body out the airlock. We can tell them he fell down the stairs.<br> | ||
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<b>Christian:</b> <i>Throw him out the airlock?</i> Oh, that's a very convincing story. He fell down the stairs, rolled into the airlock, hit the airlock release button and then went out into space? No. We leave him here, and hope he was going to get a weapon to take over the ship…and not to defend it from a perceived mutiny.<br> | <b>Christian:</b> <i>Throw him out the airlock?</i> Oh, that's a very convincing story. He fell down the stairs, rolled into the airlock, hit the airlock release button and then went out into space? No. We leave him here, and hope he was going to get a weapon to take over the ship…and not to defend it from a perceived mutiny.<br> | ||
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