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Arden asks Mike how he’s feeling physically, since he’s not as bad off as everyone else, having been sheltered by the car the entire time.
 
Arden asks Mike how he’s feeling physically, since he’s not as bad off as everyone else, having been sheltered by the car the entire time.
  
'''Mike:''' I gotta tell you, it doesn’t feel good.  I’m not sure how it’s supposed to feel—do you know how it’s supposed to feel?<br>
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Mike: I gotta tell you, it doesn’t feel good.  I’m not sure how it’s supposed to feel—do you know how it’s supposed to feel?
'''Arden:''' No.<br>
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Arden: No.
'''Mike:''' It feels…hmm.  Did you ever as a kid get sunburned and peel it off and then realize that it’s a bad idea?  It’s like that.  But on the inside.  It’s hard to explain.
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Mike: It feels…hmm.  Did you ever as a kid get sunburned and peel it off and then realize that it’s a bad idea?  It’s like that.  But on the inside.  It’s hard to explain.
  
Dude.  Ow.  We all cringe in sympathy.  Hell, we all cringe, period.  We’re still healing and feeling crappy.  We should mend up normally, provided we don’t exert ourselves unduly and right now that undue threshold is pretty low.  It will take roughly four days to get to Persephone and by the time we arrive, we should be over the worst of it.
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Dude.  Ow.  We all cringe in sympathy.  Hell, we all cringe, period.  We’re still healing and feeling crappy.  We should mend up normally, provided we don’t exert ourselves unduly, and right now, that undue threshold is pretty low.  It will take roughly four days to get to Persephone and by the time we arrive, we should be over the worst of it.
  
 
There being nothing left to keep us dirtside, we batten down everything and haul anchor for Persephone.
 
There being nothing left to keep us dirtside, we batten down everything and haul anchor for Persephone.
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*[[Episode 111. Part 1|Part 1]]<br>
 
*[[Episode 111. Part 1|Part 1]]<br>
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