Editing Episode 111. Part 2

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That’s not to say our hearts didn’t sustain lasting damage.  For all we know, our insides are damaged and we’re all walking around on borrowed time.  Minus a full scan, there’s no way to be certain.  What is certain is we’re not going to expose ourselves to capture by visiting any hospital on Osiris.   
 
That’s not to say our hearts didn’t sustain lasting damage.  For all we know, our insides are damaged and we’re all walking around on borrowed time.  Minus a full scan, there’s no way to be certain.  What is certain is we’re not going to expose ourselves to capture by visiting any hospital on Osiris.   
  
'''Christian:''' I’m going to be a little paranoid here—just a little bit—Blue Sun supplies medical equipment to everybody and if Blue Sun were the ones who did this, they might be looking out for these symptoms. <br>
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Christian: I’m going to be a little paranoid here—just a little bit—Blue Sun supplies medical equipment to everybody and if Blue Sun were the ones who did this, they might be looking out for these symptoms.  
'''Nika:''' Right, but that means we go to the hospital after most of the symptoms are gone and just do a routine physical.  We don’t all go to the same hospital or go on the same planet.<br>
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Nika: Right, but that means we go to the hospital after most of the symptoms are gone and just do a routine physical.  We don’t all go to the same hospital or go on the same planet.
'''Christian:''' Is there someplace not the Core where they’ll have hospitals that could deal with something like this?
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Christian: Is there someplace not the Core where they’ll have hospitals that could deal with something like this?
  
 
Well, Hera.  But that’s right out, for obvious reasons.  Beaumonde would have something suitable.  Persephone.
 
Well, Hera.  But that’s right out, for obvious reasons.  Beaumonde would have something suitable.  Persephone.
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Later that evening, Manuel and Delilah Edge arrive with the girls and whatever of our belongings we’d left behind.  Sean Donovan is not with them, having definitely decided to cut his losses of us.  Can’t say the feeling isn’t mutual, despite the four thousand-credit favor he did us back on Sampson’s Array.  As for the Camden family, there’s nothing to be done but to stay out of their way.  There’s no reasoning with an angry rhinoceros, after all.  We’ll just keep a close eye out and avoid them.  Of more immediate concern, however, is Christian’s parents’ understandable shock at our condition and we carefully edit what we tell them.
 
Later that evening, Manuel and Delilah Edge arrive with the girls and whatever of our belongings we’d left behind.  Sean Donovan is not with them, having definitely decided to cut his losses of us.  Can’t say the feeling isn’t mutual, despite the four thousand-credit favor he did us back on Sampson’s Array.  As for the Camden family, there’s nothing to be done but to stay out of their way.  There’s no reasoning with an angry rhinoceros, after all.  We’ll just keep a close eye out and avoid them.  Of more immediate concern, however, is Christian’s parents’ understandable shock at our condition and we carefully edit what we tell them.
  
'''Christian:''' We’re okay, but I’ll be honest.  I’m not really sure what happened but the important thing is we were able to do what we needed to do.  
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Christian: We’re okay, but I’ll be honest.  I’m not really sure what happened but the important thing is we were able to do what we needed to do.  
  
 
Christian’s parents not only brought us our bags back, they’ve brought dinner, too, sparing us the chore of cooking.  Like anything the Edges do, it’s exquisitely prepared and delicious.  Gratitude is expressed all around, Mike especially so.  Rina takes Delilah aside after dinner to thank her personally for what she’s done for Mike.  The Edges do not linger long once dinner is over, however, but say their goodbyes and leave.
 
Christian’s parents not only brought us our bags back, they’ve brought dinner, too, sparing us the chore of cooking.  Like anything the Edges do, it’s exquisitely prepared and delicious.  Gratitude is expressed all around, Mike especially so.  Rina takes Delilah aside after dinner to thank her personally for what she’s done for Mike.  The Edges do not linger long once dinner is over, however, but say their goodbyes and leave.

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