Editing Episode 122. Part 1

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Finally, we have 3 passengers travelling in steerage. They've given us part of the payment in foodstuffs and are working off the other part. In other words, for the durations of the trip we get to use these guys to clean and cook. They're pro kitchen staff, so they've got some experience. They're going to share the remaining crew dorm.
 
Finally, we have 3 passengers travelling in steerage. They've given us part of the payment in foodstuffs and are working off the other part. In other words, for the durations of the trip we get to use these guys to clean and cook. They're pro kitchen staff, so they've got some experience. They're going to share the remaining crew dorm.
  
Rina and the two shipwrights don’t hit it off too well—they are from the Core—[[Corporations#Iskellian|Iskellian]] guys, actually—and are used to nicer, newer ships.  Their comments about the Gift piss Rina off and Christian reminds her it’s bad form to beat up or kill paying passengers.  She reins in her tongue as best as she’s able and tries to listen to their comments and recommendations with an open mind and a closed mouth.  To the shipwrights’ credit, they do spot a thing or two that Rina could fix or improve on…and she does.  But she waits til they’re out of sight when she does it.  “I told you so” doesn’t go down well, regardless of the language it’s delivered in.
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Rina and the two shipwrights don’t hit it off too well—they are from the Core—*[[Corporations#Iskellian]] guys, actually—and are used to nicer, newer ships.  Their comments about the Gift piss Rina off and Christian reminds her it’s bad form to beat up or kill paying passengers.  She reins in her tongue as best as she’s able and tries to listen to their comments and recommendations with an open mind and a closed mouth.  To the shipwrights’ credit, they do spot a thing or two that Rina could fix or improve on…and she does.  But she waits til they’re out of sight when she does it.  “I told you so” doesn’t go down well, regardless of the language it’s delivered in.
  
 
The five terraformers and the three steerage passengers are less irritating, although that is not to say they are no trouble.  One of the steerage passengers, a cook by training by the name of Kai, has this habit of wandering around the ship and going into areas passengers aren’t authorized to go.  We have to remind her repeatedly not to go here or there and after a couple days of this, Rina’s getting thoroughly hinked by this woman.   
 
The five terraformers and the three steerage passengers are less irritating, although that is not to say they are no trouble.  One of the steerage passengers, a cook by training by the name of Kai, has this habit of wandering around the ship and going into areas passengers aren’t authorized to go.  We have to remind her repeatedly not to go here or there and after a couple days of this, Rina’s getting thoroughly hinked by this woman.   

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