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The night before we leave, we gather around the table to discuss where we’re going to go.  We have Rick’s Cortexisodes to broadcast to the public at large and Jake’s camera footage to send back to the show producers.  The second we hit ‘send’, our anonymity is forever gone, as our faces are beamed into every home with a CorVue.  Rina’s not particularly overjoyed at the prospect, but consoles herself that should she gain celebrity it will be as a reality show character.  Which people just don’t take seriously.  She’s hoping it’ll be enough to shield her.  We decide to make our best way to the nearest Cortex Relay station to send our material where it needs to go.
 
The night before we leave, we gather around the table to discuss where we’re going to go.  We have Rick’s Cortexisodes to broadcast to the public at large and Jake’s camera footage to send back to the show producers.  The second we hit ‘send’, our anonymity is forever gone, as our faces are beamed into every home with a CorVue.  Rina’s not particularly overjoyed at the prospect, but consoles herself that should she gain celebrity it will be as a reality show character.  Which people just don’t take seriously.  She’s hoping it’ll be enough to shield her.  We decide to make our best way to the nearest Cortex Relay station to send our material where it needs to go.
  
With our immediate plan decided on, we politely exclude Jake from the following meeting and Rina takes the opportunity to ask Shyla what Nika had meant about Mike’s remarks on ‘knowing what was going on’.  It didn’t take a genius to track back to the shared point in Mike and Nika’s histories and recognize Mike was talking about ''Harbinger''.  So what was ''Harbinger'' doing that Mike threatened to tell Nika about it?  Does it have anything to do with the schism in the Resistance Mike mentioned?
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With our immediate plan decided on, we politely exclude Jake from the following meeting and Rina takes the opportunity to ask Shyla what Nika had meant about Mike’s remarks on ‘knowing what was going on’.  It didn’t take a genius to track back to the shared point in Mike and Nika’s histories and recognize Mike was talking about Harbinger.  So what was Harbinger doing that Mike threatened to tell Nika about it?  Does it have anything to do with the schism in the Resistance Mike mentioned?
  
 
Christian speaks up, saying that if there is any terrorist activity like blowing up factories, he doesn’t want to be present to hear it.
 
Christian speaks up, saying that if there is any terrorist activity like blowing up factories, he doesn’t want to be present to hear it.
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'''Rina:''' (growling) Then you can leave the room.<br>
 
'''Rina:''' (growling) Then you can leave the room.<br>
 
'''Christian:''' Fine.  Does it involve blowing up the targets?<br>
 
'''Christian:''' Fine.  Does it involve blowing up the targets?<br>
'''Rina:''' ''Will you let the woman speak?''<br>
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'''Rina:''' Will you let the woman speak?<br>
 
'''Christian:''' I’m asking so I’ll know if I have to leave the room or not. <br>
 
'''Christian:''' I’m asking so I’ll know if I have to leave the room or not. <br>
 
'''Shyla:''' The actions we were taking could very well have had far greater effect than what happened on Beaumonde. Perhaps not as direct.<br>
 
'''Shyla:''' The actions we were taking could very well have had far greater effect than what happened on Beaumonde. Perhaps not as direct.<br>
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'''Rina:''' (grimacing) Yeah.<br>
 
'''Rina:''' (grimacing) Yeah.<br>
 
'''Nika:''' And he nearly kicked my ass.<br>
 
'''Nika:''' And he nearly kicked my ass.<br>
'''Shyla:''' Well, Nguyen is a dangerous person to deal with but he’s a part of something that is not as black and white as you might like. There is a …I’m not calling it an alliance or a federation or anything—there is a collection of people all with varying degrees of dissatisfaction.  I am among them. But we’re not all on the same page, necessarily.  Gibbons has expressed some interest…I’m not 100% convinced of his motives, so when you ask if he’s trustworthy or not, I don’t know.  But I do believe that ''he'' believes that it is in his interest if there’s dissatisfaction.<br>
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'''Shyla:''' Well, Nguyen is a dangerous person to deal with but he’s a part of something that is not as black and white as you might like. There is a …I’m not calling it an alliance or a federation or anything—there is a collection of people all with varying degrees of dissatisfaction.  I am among them. But we’re not all on the same page, necessarily.  Gibbons has expressed some interest…I’m not 100% convinced of his motives, so when you ask if he’s trustworthy or not, I don’t know.  But I do believe that he believes that it is in his interest if there’s dissatisfaction.<br>
 
'''Nika:''' So you’re saying he’s…sowing….dissatisfaction?<br>
 
'''Nika:''' So you’re saying he’s…sowing….dissatisfaction?<br>
 
'''Shyla:''' I think he’s certainly trying to make people aware there is.<br>
 
'''Shyla:''' I think he’s certainly trying to make people aware there is.<br>
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'''Rina:''' He was trying to heal that.  And he was on the job specifically for Nguyen, to try to….bridge the gap.<br>
 
'''Rina:''' He was trying to heal that.  And he was on the job specifically for Nguyen, to try to….bridge the gap.<br>
 
'''Shyla:''' Many people see Nguyen as the quasi-Messiah of the Resistance.  He got the motivational skills and the will to do things.<br>
 
'''Shyla:''' Many people see Nguyen as the quasi-Messiah of the Resistance.  He got the motivational skills and the will to do things.<br>
'''Nika:''' (to Shyla) And you asked me if I was a Dust Devil ''why''?<br>
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'''Nika:''' (to Shyla) And you asked me if I was a Dust Devil why?<br>
 
'''Shyla:''' Well…<br>
 
'''Shyla:''' Well…<br>
 
'''Nika:''' You gave me The Face when you asked me the question and then, you know, that’s when it hit me that Harry wasn’t even at the table because I was gonna get my ass kicked if I said ‘yes’.  So.  What the—(silently mouths the word ‘fuck’)? <br>
 
'''Nika:''' You gave me The Face when you asked me the question and then, you know, that’s when it hit me that Harry wasn’t even at the table because I was gonna get my ass kicked if I said ‘yes’.  So.  What the—(silently mouths the word ‘fuck’)? <br>
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'''Shyla:''' (unflinching) I don’t know.  I want to hear some other people talk about it. Because I don’t know what’s going to happen when we shoot these waves.  The Second Miranda Wave.  Are we gonna have public outcry or are gonna have nothing?  Are we gonna have, “eh, it was twelve years ago, thirteen years ago, it’s not my business anymore….”?  There was what? forty million people killed?<br>
 
'''Shyla:''' (unflinching) I don’t know.  I want to hear some other people talk about it. Because I don’t know what’s going to happen when we shoot these waves.  The Second Miranda Wave.  Are we gonna have public outcry or are gonna have nothing?  Are we gonna have, “eh, it was twelve years ago, thirteen years ago, it’s not my business anymore….”?  There was what? forty million people killed?<br>
 
'''Arden:''' Can we agree that the Alliance shouldn’t be as all-powerful as it is?<br>
 
'''Arden:''' Can we agree that the Alliance shouldn’t be as all-powerful as it is?<br>
'''Shyla:''' Sure.  The real question is how far do ''I'' need to take this?<br>
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'''Shyla:''' Sure.  The real question is how far do I need to take this?<br>
 
'''Arden:''' That’s not what I’m asking about.  Can everyone at the table agree that the Alliance is all-powerful and needs to be reduced?<br>
 
'''Arden:''' That’s not what I’m asking about.  Can everyone at the table agree that the Alliance is all-powerful and needs to be reduced?<br>
'''Rina:''' (annoyed) ''I'' was there ten years ago. Where have ''you'' been?<br>
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'''Rina:''' (annoyed) I was there ten years ago. Where have you been?<br>
 
'''Arden:''' I’m asking for the current moment.  I’m not trying to be trouble.<br>
 
'''Arden:''' I’m asking for the current moment.  I’m not trying to be trouble.<br>
 
'''Rina:''' We can partially answer your question by asking ourselves who stands to benefit most and in what way from the stuff we’re going to be broadcasting.  Who stands to lose?  Who stands to win?<br>
 
'''Rina:''' We can partially answer your question by asking ourselves who stands to benefit most and in what way from the stuff we’re going to be broadcasting.  Who stands to lose?  Who stands to win?<br>
'''Nika:''' We already mean to be broadcasting it. But are we meant to be broadcasting it? (to Shyla) What did you come out here to actually ''do''?<br>
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'''Nika:''' We already mean to be broadcasting it. But are we meant to be broadcasting it? (to Shyla) What did you come out here to actually do?<br>
 
'''Christian:''' That’s a good question. Why were you here for?<br>
 
'''Christian:''' That’s a good question. Why were you here for?<br>
 
'''Shyla:''' I came out here to verify.<br>
 
'''Shyla:''' I came out here to verify.<br>
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'''Arden:''' I think she was serving multiple masters on this mission.<br>
 
'''Arden:''' I think she was serving multiple masters on this mission.<br>
 
'''Shyla:''' They’re not my masters.  People recognized me as an independent person who could report back without a motive.<br>
 
'''Shyla:''' They’re not my masters.  People recognized me as an independent person who could report back without a motive.<br>
'''Rina:''' Are you saying ''impartial observer''?<br>
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'''Rina:''' Are you saying impartial observer?<br>
 
Shyla:'''' Well….I think that they thought I was a friendly observer to their perspective. But one who would not color the information to make it match people like Nguyen or some of the others.<br>
 
Shyla:'''' Well….I think that they thought I was a friendly observer to their perspective. But one who would not color the information to make it match people like Nguyen or some of the others.<br>
 
'''Rina:'' So in other words, you were impartial enough to be useful.<br>
 
'''Rina:'' So in other words, you were impartial enough to be useful.<br>
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'''Arden:''' Before you answer, I want to ask a possibly impolite question: are either you or Harry armed at the current moment?<br>
 
'''Arden:''' Before you answer, I want to ask a possibly impolite question: are either you or Harry armed at the current moment?<br>
'''Nika:''' ''What''?<br>
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'''Nika:''' What?<br>
 
'''Shyla:''' You mean right now? (shugs) Harry’s always armed. Even when she’s not carrying weapons.  What?  You think I’m gonna take over the—<br>
 
'''Shyla:''' You mean right now? (shugs) Harry’s always armed. Even when she’s not carrying weapons.  What?  You think I’m gonna take over the—<br>
 
'''Arden:''' I don’t know. <br>  
 
'''Arden:''' I don’t know. <br>  
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'''Shyla:''' Maybe you don’t remember but we’ve been here with you for four months.<br>
 
'''Shyla:''' Maybe you don’t remember but we’ve been here with you for four months.<br>
 
'''Arden:''' I remember, I realize that but—<br>
 
'''Arden:''' I remember, I realize that but—<br>
'''Rick:''' And ''Go'' was with you for however long he was aboard ''your'' ship.<br>
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'''Rick:''' And Go was with you for however long he was aboard your ship.<br>
 
'''Shyla:''' And yes, it’s true that Go had been with us for years after Nika left and that I—<br>
 
'''Shyla:''' And yes, it’s true that Go had been with us for years after Nika left and that I—<br>
 
'''Christian:''' I’m relatively certain that Harry is not an evil traitor.<br>
 
'''Christian:''' I’m relatively certain that Harry is not an evil traitor.<br>
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'''Christian:''' It kinda does…but not to us.<br>
 
'''Christian:''' It kinda does…but not to us.<br>
 
'''Nika:''' It might have been somebody who’s gone or on Pala.<br>
 
'''Nika:''' It might have been somebody who’s gone or on Pala.<br>
'''Shyla:''' I think she means someone else in the Resistance.<br>
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'''Shyla:''' I think she means someone else in the Resistance.<br>
 
'''Rina:''' In the information chain where she received her orders, someone knew where she was going.<br>
 
'''Rina:''' In the information chain where she received her orders, someone knew where she was going.<br>
 
'''Shyla:''' I didn’t get orders.  I was asked.<br>
 
'''Shyla:''' I didn’t get orders.  I was asked.<br>
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The ''Gift'' has been refurbished as best as we could do her and there are a lot more monitors and screens on the bridge than before.  Our sensors are beefier and Nika has a little trouble adjusting to our extended range.  Lots of little blips show up on the periphery and disappear and she yarks at Rina there’s something wrong with the instruments.  Rina yarks back that they’re fine and Nika just needs to see faster.
 
The ''Gift'' has been refurbished as best as we could do her and there are a lot more monitors and screens on the bridge than before.  Our sensors are beefier and Nika has a little trouble adjusting to our extended range.  Lots of little blips show up on the periphery and disappear and she yarks at Rina there’s something wrong with the instruments.  Rina yarks back that they’re fine and Nika just needs to see faster.
  
55 hours into our journey we are hailed by an Alliance Longbow Cruiser and ordered to drop out of pulse for inspection.  The ship’s designation and name is unfamiliar: ''PDF Decatur''.  As we pause to decide whether to run for it or comply, ''Decatur'' launches 6 interceptor fighters for our one cargo ship.  That’s the clincher—we drop out of pulse and heave to, and wait to be boarded.   
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55 hours into our journey we are hailed by an Alliance Longbow Cruiser and ordered to drop out of pulse for inspection.  The ship’s designation and name is unfamiliar: PDF Decatur.  As we pause to decide whether to run for it or comply, Decatur launches 6 interceptor fighters for our one cargo ship.  That’s the clincher—we drop out of pulse and heave to, and wait to be boarded.   
  
 
Nika stays on the bridge and Rina stays in the engine room.  Christian stands as a Companion would at the airlock: beautifully, with subtle command and intimidation.  And indeed the grunts that step out of our airlock and onto our ship look at Christian in surprise.   
 
Nika stays on the bridge and Rina stays in the engine room.  Christian stands as a Companion would at the airlock: beautifully, with subtle command and intimidation.  And indeed the grunts that step out of our airlock and onto our ship look at Christian in surprise.   
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'''Hazmat Leader:''' Yes, we’ll talk to your pilot. <br>
 
'''Hazmat Leader:''' Yes, we’ll talk to your pilot. <br>
  
What happens next is fast and callous in its efficiency.  We the crew, and all our passengers, are taken aboard ''Decatur'' and thoroughly examined by its medical staff.   
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What happens next is fast and callous in its efficiency.  We the crew, and all our passengers, are taken aboard Decatur and thoroughly examined by its medical staff.   
  
Rina and Harry go nuts.  Harry has an extreme phobia of needles and Rina has an extreme dislike of strangers putting their hands on her.  Violence ensues.  Rina and Harry are forcibly sedated.  Spinal taps are done on all of us and tests are run on the fluid drawn.  By the time Rina and Harry wake up, the results have come back and we’re declared clean.
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Rina and Harry go nuts.  Harry has an extreme phobia of needles and Rina has an extreme dislike of strangers putting their hands on her.  Violence ensues.  Rina and Harry are sedated.  Spinal taps are done on all of us and tests are run on the fluid drawn.  By the time Rina and Harry wake up, the results have come back and we’re declared clean.
  
 
Clean of what?
 
Clean of what?

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