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One of the guards holding Rick and Jake fires two shots into the air and both guards turn and walk away, letting their helmet mikes suggest the order has been carried out.  Not a peep from our crew til the guards are out of sight.  Then Rick gets up, his ankle apparently unhurt and Rina climbs down from the container much relieved she didn’t have to shoot her and the crew out of there.  We beat a retreat, following our plan to get back to the ship.
 
One of the guards holding Rick and Jake fires two shots into the air and both guards turn and walk away, letting their helmet mikes suggest the order has been carried out.  Not a peep from our crew til the guards are out of sight.  Then Rick gets up, his ankle apparently unhurt and Rina climbs down from the container much relieved she didn’t have to shoot her and the crew out of there.  We beat a retreat, following our plan to get back to the ship.
  
On the way, we hear a fight in progress.  Ahead we see the silhouettes of two people, one of them growling and screaming, tearing and now clawing at the other, who is on the ground.  
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On the way, we hear a fight in progress.  Ahead we see the silhouettes of two people, one of them growling and screaming, tearing and now it was clawing at the other, who is on the ground.  
  
 
It’s a rioter, and it looks like the Chempliance has triggered a Reaver response.  That response is confirmed when we see the man take a big bite out of his opponent.  
 
It’s a rioter, and it looks like the Chempliance has triggered a Reaver response.  That response is confirmed when we see the man take a big bite out of his opponent.  

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