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Once at Bernadette, we land and fuel up.  We find that we’re unable to buy food.  There’s none to be had.  We decide to take two days to get what supplies we can and allow Rina to get the overdue monthly maintenance work done.  We get our suits deconned.  We get a moment to put boots on dirt and breathe.
 
Once at Bernadette, we land and fuel up.  We find that we’re unable to buy food.  There’s none to be had.  We decide to take two days to get what supplies we can and allow Rina to get the overdue monthly maintenance work done.  We get our suits deconned.  We get a moment to put boots on dirt and breathe.
  
Our passengers Bala and Ms. Chin say goodbye to us, as does Pierre DuChamps.  Pierre actually pauses a moment and tells Nika it’s possible he may have work for us in the future.  Since the crew’s now twigged he’s Independent, we’d watched him more closely and consensus between us is we think he’s another of Nguyen's Browncoat chef-cum-spies.  We don’t definitively say we’re available, leery of hooking up with Nguyen again and unhappy that he may have been spying on us via DuChamps during our voyage.  We shake hands, thank him for his help and delay his departure no further.
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Our passengers Bala and Ms. Chin say goodbye to us, as does Pierre DuChamps.  Pierre actually pauses a moment and tells Nika it’s possible he may have work for us in the future.  Since the crew’s now twigged he’s Independent, we’d watched him more closely and consensus between us is we think he’s another of Browncoat chef-cum-spies.  We don’t definitively say we’re available, leery of hooking up with Nguyen again and unhappy that Nguyen may have been spying on us via DuChamps during our voyage.  We shake hands, thank him for his help and delay his departure no further.
  
 
Mike Carmen and Paul Forrester are going to stay with us a little further.
 
Mike Carmen and Paul Forrester are going to stay with us a little further.

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