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Rick, Rina, and Jake ready to leave.  Christian makes sure the scouting party has their priorities straight—get to the first car that has power and restore power to our own.  If they can get to the guards in the armored center car and get our weapons back, fine, but the power must come first.  If the guard won’t open to us, we push on to the engine car. The scouting party pops the braces on the inner doors and they step into the icy world outside.  The doors behind them shut and they crawl through the tunnel into the open….and exposing themselves to Cole.
 
Rick, Rina, and Jake ready to leave.  Christian makes sure the scouting party has their priorities straight—get to the first car that has power and restore power to our own.  If they can get to the guards in the armored center car and get our weapons back, fine, but the power must come first.  If the guard won’t open to us, we push on to the engine car. The scouting party pops the braces on the inner doors and they step into the icy world outside.  The doors behind them shut and they crawl through the tunnel into the open….and exposing themselves to Cole.
  
Now it’s just a race against time and the elements, before death by exposure or Reaver, as the party tries to find the other survivors and a way out of our predicament.  Nika stands guard just outside the doors, in case we need to come back quickly.  Arden will stay inside holding the doors closed.  Christian keeps the rest of the able-bodied busy ripping up the seats for the insulating stuffing inside them.
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Now it’s just a race against time and the elements, before death by exposure or Reaver, as the party tries to find the other survivors and a way out of our predicament.
 
 
Rick’s out the tunnel first, with Rina and Jake waiting behind him.  The wind is whipping up the surface snow but Rick can still see tracks left by Cole.  And his blood. Both are everywhere.  Following the evidence with his eyes, he can see Cole’s going to be hovering in the general direction we need to go.  No conveniently wandering off deliriously into the trackless wilderness, no.  His tracks actually go under the train at one point, where the man has crawled into the slanting airspace beneath the train.  A great spot from which to ambush passersby like us.  Rick relays this information and we plow on anyway.
 
 
 
When Rina draws even with the car’s couplings she takes a look at the undercarriage and sees the drive train and the power lines are irrevocably shorn.  There is no way we’ll restore power to the car or even get her to move.  We will have to contact and salvage another car in the train if we’re going to survive and get out of here.  We push onward. We come even with the middle car, the armored car with the Qupie Dolls and we see nothing but blood smeared on the windows inside.
 
  
 
We hear something stirring inside, despite the wind and as we watch, we see a bloody hand slap the window.  Cole’s bloody face appears an instant later and not all the visible blood on him is his.  He smiles a feral smile and there are … things … in his teeth.   
 
We hear something stirring inside, despite the wind and as we watch, we see a bloody hand slap the window.  Cole’s bloody face appears an instant later and not all the visible blood on him is his.  He smiles a feral smile and there are … things … in his teeth.   

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