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Our client is rather angry over our late arrival, but Christian manages to talk him down to the point he doesn’t demand a full refund.  We take two days to settle business, get fueled up and have Rina do the monthly maintenance.  With all the mods we’ve done on the ''Gift'' of late, maintenance is more costly.  However, Rina has managed to work her magic and the cost for the month is halved to 125 credits from the usual 250.
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Our client is rather angry over our late arrival, but Christian manages to talk him down to the point he doesn’t demand a full refund.  We take two days to settle business, get fueled up and have Rina do the monthly maintenance.  With all the mods we’ve done on the Gift of late, maintenance is more costly.  However, Rina has managed to work her magic and the cost for the month is halved to 125 credits from the usual 250.
  
 
Christian arranges five cargo tons of fox pelts as cargo.  They are so beautiful Rina can’t resist asking to keep one for herself and given permission, chooses one.  It lies on her pillow now, and she gets a lot of enjoyment out of stroking something soft.  Too much these days seems hard and unyielding.   
 
Christian arranges five cargo tons of fox pelts as cargo.  They are so beautiful Rina can’t resist asking to keep one for herself and given permission, chooses one.  It lies on her pillow now, and she gets a lot of enjoyment out of stroking something soft.  Too much these days seems hard and unyielding.   
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Meanwhile back with Christian, he meets and greets Hilde and it’s pretty obvious that she’s uneasy and not a little hesitant to go forward with her session and Christian puts her at ease, stating he’ll do nothing she doesn’t want.  He pours her tea and offers to talk.  He does, however, end up working his magic and it’s some time later when two men barge into his shuttle to find her in a state of deshabille.  The man in front is her fiancé, and his name is Wesley Camden.
 
Meanwhile back with Christian, he meets and greets Hilde and it’s pretty obvious that she’s uneasy and not a little hesitant to go forward with her session and Christian puts her at ease, stating he’ll do nothing she doesn’t want.  He pours her tea and offers to talk.  He does, however, end up working his magic and it’s some time later when two men barge into his shuttle to find her in a state of deshabille.  The man in front is her fiancé, and his name is Wesley Camden.
  
Yes, of ''those'' Camdens.  And he’s come for Christian to exact his revenge.
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Yes, of those Camdens.  And he’s come for Christian to exact his revenge.
  
In short, Christian has been set up.  And Wesley proceeds to have his goon beat Christian right the hell up.  Christian gets a few seconds’ drop on everyone when he cuts the lights in the shuttle and dashes into the cockpit to fire off an emergency signal to the ''Gift''.  Then the goon has him in hand and brutally works him over.
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In short, Christian has been set up.  And Wesley proceeds to have his goon beat Christian right the hell up.  Christian gets a few seconds’ drop on everyone when he cuts the lights in the shuttle and dashes into the cockpit to fire off an emergency signal to the Gift.  Then the goon has him in hand and brutally works him over.
  
 
Back at the party with the Abergs, Rina looks up from her lively discussion with the grandfather and sees the children and the matrons are gone. It’s late, after one AM and she asks the grandfather where the children might be.  He tells her they’d be sleeping upstairs and she thanks him, then goes off to look.  Everyone else is having a good time, no point in bothering them with this.   
 
Back at the party with the Abergs, Rina looks up from her lively discussion with the grandfather and sees the children and the matrons are gone. It’s late, after one AM and she asks the grandfather where the children might be.  He tells her they’d be sleeping upstairs and she thanks him, then goes off to look.  Everyone else is having a good time, no point in bothering them with this.   
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The car flies off to a mansion in the steep fjord walls above the city of Malmo and comes to a stop in its front courtyard.  She’s ordered out at gunpoint and roughly and thoroughly searched.  All her weapons and pocket tools are taken from her and she manages to suffer the search without causing trouble.  She silently says goodbye to her beloved Tokarev, knowing that it’s well and truly lost to her now.  Even if she did manage to get out of this alive, she doesn’t have any hope she will be in any position to get it back.  The search done,  she and Lem are shoved unceremoniously inside a stone walled cell.  The door is at the top of a flight of stone steps and on the floor a story down is Christian.
 
The car flies off to a mansion in the steep fjord walls above the city of Malmo and comes to a stop in its front courtyard.  She’s ordered out at gunpoint and roughly and thoroughly searched.  All her weapons and pocket tools are taken from her and she manages to suffer the search without causing trouble.  She silently says goodbye to her beloved Tokarev, knowing that it’s well and truly lost to her now.  Even if she did manage to get out of this alive, she doesn’t have any hope she will be in any position to get it back.  The search done,  she and Lem are shoved unceremoniously inside a stone walled cell.  The door is at the top of a flight of stone steps and on the floor a story down is Christian.
  
Stripped to his trousers, barefoot, beaten and bloodied.  Alive, but in a world of hurt.  Wesley Camden lingers to gloat and torture Christian with threats against his crewmate and son, and Christian lets the man have his fun, the better to gain more information he can use to escape.  Wesley tells Christian that he’s been a hard man to catch and surprisingly good at hiding.  However, when Christian adopted Lem, he left a clue as to his whereabouts, a clue big enough to lead Wesley to him.  And now, Christian is his. How perfect.  Wesley ceases his monologue before he spoils Christian for the fun to come, he takes his leave.  He pulls Hilde along with him, she manages a whispered apology to Christian, and the couple make their exit.  
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Stripped to his trousers, barefoot, beaten and bloodied.  Alive, but in a world of hurt.  Wesley Camden lingers to gloat and torture Christian with threats against his crewmate and son, and Christian lets the man have his fun, the better to gain more information he can use to escape.  Camden is aware of the ploy and stops before divulging anything significant.  He pulls Hilde along with him, she manages a whispered apology to Christian, and the couple leaves.
  
 
The door slams shut.
 
The door slams shut.
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They find the room where the children are supposed to be sleeping, and find the matron asleep, possibly dosed with some tranquilizer. In questioning those still awake, they learn that Lem was taken away by his ‘daddy’.  The man described looks nothing like Christian.
 
They find the room where the children are supposed to be sleeping, and find the matron asleep, possibly dosed with some tranquilizer. In questioning those still awake, they learn that Lem was taken away by his ‘daddy’.  The man described looks nothing like Christian.
  
The crew immediately call Christian to see if he does indeed have Lem. They cannot raise him or the shuttle.  They home in on the shuttle's pinger and find it abandoned, it's hatch wide open and evidence of a struggle inside, complete with bloodstains.  An inspection of the craft shows that a fire axe has been taken to the cockpit controls.  The shuttle isn't flying anywhere.  They start putting two and two together and now the search is on to find the car they saw flying away.  They discover the name of his client and coupled with the information they get from Jake’s family, about the Camden's buying out the Dansmueller Fishery, they realize that the Camdens might be behind the three disappearances.  Nika gets the crew into the ''Gift''’s remaining shuttle to go find where the Camdens might be staying.
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The crew immediately call Christian to see if he does indeed have Lem. They cannot raise him or the shuttle.  They start putting two and two together and now the search is on to find the car they saw flying away.  They discover the name of his client and coupled with the information they got from Jake’s family, about the Camden family buying out the Dansmueller Fishery, they realize that the Camdens might be behind the three disappearances.  Nika gets the crew into the Gift’s remaining shuttle to go find where the Camdens might be staying.
  
 
Back in the cell, Rina’s prowling around the stone room looking for anything she can use to break her son and her friend out.  There is no furniture in the room, nothing she can bash apart to use as a club if their jailers make an appearance.  The door hinges are on near side of the door and the lock is a thumblatch lock, but Rina’s got nothing to pry the hinge pins out with or to take apart the lock.  Lem has a small buckle on his belt that might serve as a screwdriver, but realistically, there’s no knowing what waits for them outside their door if they do manage to get out.  There’s some wood debris in the room, some rubble, indicating it may have been used as a rubbish room, but there’s nothing but maybe a handful of nails and a couple short lengths of wood that they could use.
 
Back in the cell, Rina’s prowling around the stone room looking for anything she can use to break her son and her friend out.  There is no furniture in the room, nothing she can bash apart to use as a club if their jailers make an appearance.  The door hinges are on near side of the door and the lock is a thumblatch lock, but Rina’s got nothing to pry the hinge pins out with or to take apart the lock.  Lem has a small buckle on his belt that might serve as a screwdriver, but realistically, there’s no knowing what waits for them outside their door if they do manage to get out.  There’s some wood debris in the room, some rubble, indicating it may have been used as a rubbish room, but there’s nothing but maybe a handful of nails and a couple short lengths of wood that they could use.

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