Editing Episode 211: What Must Needs Be Done

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The shuttle hovers six feet off the ground and Arden and Jake leap out to get their crew mates on board.  Arden grabs Lem and throws him inside, nothing doing.  He and Jake hoist the unconscious Rina in next.  The guard with the LAW rocket dithers and Nika announces over our external PA that if he shoots, the shockwave from the explosion will turn everyone in the courtyard to a red smear.  Before the guard can call Nika’s bluff, the Abergs rise into view, their fleet of hovermules bristling with angry relatives and weapons.  The guards retreat, all the way into the house and taking the LAW rocket with them.
 
The shuttle hovers six feet off the ground and Arden and Jake leap out to get their crew mates on board.  Arden grabs Lem and throws him inside, nothing doing.  He and Jake hoist the unconscious Rina in next.  The guard with the LAW rocket dithers and Nika announces over our external PA that if he shoots, the shockwave from the explosion will turn everyone in the courtyard to a red smear.  Before the guard can call Nika’s bluff, the Abergs rise into view, their fleet of hovermules bristling with angry relatives and weapons.  The guards retreat, all the way into the house and taking the LAW rocket with them.
  
Christian lingers on the ground, asking Hilde to come with him.  She cannot seriously think to stay, now that she’s betrayed the Camdens by helping him, can she?  It appears she has faith in Wesley to be lenient with her.  She refuses to go.  Christian climbs up into the shuttle.  Arden stabilizes Rina's condition.  No longer in danger of dying outright, with adequate care she should revive an a few hours.  With the Abergs following, Nika flies us out of there and we come down off the mountain.  It remains to be seen what follows us as a consequence.
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Christian lingers on the ground, asking Hilde to come with him.  She cannot seriously think to stay, now that she’s betrayed the Camdens by helping him, can she?  It appears she has faith in Wesley to be lenient with her.  She refuses to go.  Christian climbs up into the shuttle.  Arden renders first aid to Rina and he stabilizes her condition.  With adequate care, she should revive an a few hours.  With the Abergs following, Nika flies us out of there and we come down off the mountain.  It remains to be seen what follows us as a consequence.
  
  

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