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Rina turns her attention to the walls and floor next.  The floor is solid rock, cut out of the living mountain forming the fjord.  Three walls and two-thirds of the floor and ceiling are made of it.  The last wall and a third of the floor are made of wood, incongruously enough, as if the mountain ran out before the room had, and it’s in the wooden wall that they get a break: there is a narrow window, about eight feet up.  It’s glazed with a wood frame and Rina gets Christian to boost her up there so she can bust it out and grab some of the glass and wood for weapons.  She comes away with two small pieces of glass, about 2 inches each, that can be used as shivs.  She tears her handkerchief to strips and wraps one end of the shards for a makeshift handle.  She got a good look out the window while she was up there and sees it faces outward toward the fjord and the town.  If there were some way to signal friendly forces outside…
 
Rina turns her attention to the walls and floor next.  The floor is solid rock, cut out of the living mountain forming the fjord.  Three walls and two-thirds of the floor and ceiling are made of it.  The last wall and a third of the floor are made of wood, incongruously enough, as if the mountain ran out before the room had, and it’s in the wooden wall that they get a break: there is a narrow window, about eight feet up.  It’s glazed with a wood frame and Rina gets Christian to boost her up there so she can bust it out and grab some of the glass and wood for weapons.  She comes away with two small pieces of glass, about 2 inches each, that can be used as shivs.  She tears her handkerchief to strips and wraps one end of the shards for a makeshift handle.  She got a good look out the window while she was up there and sees it faces outward toward the fjord and the town.  If there were some way to signal friendly forces outside…
  
Rina strips out of her orange coveralls and getting another boost from Christian, she hangs them flag-like out the window, anchoring them on the broken glass.  She’s standing in her jog bra and her exercise shorts and boots as a result, but at least now she’s got some hope that help might be coming.  Sooner or later, the crew will miss her and Lem and Christian and they will come looking. They’ll recognize her coveralls and investigate.  There being nothing left to do but wait til morning, she and Christian and Lem huddle together and sleep as best they can.
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Rina strips out of her orange coveralls and getting another boost from Christian, she hangs them flag-like out the window, anchoring them on the broken glass.  She’s standing in her jog bra and her exercise shorts and boots as a result, but at least now she’s got some hope that help might be coming.  Sooner or later, the crew will miss her and Lem and Christiana and they will come looking. They’ll recognize her coveralls and investigate.  There being nothing left to do but wait til morning, she and Christian and Lem huddle together and sleep as best they can.
  
 
Toward morning, the door rattles and Hilde Dansmueller walks in alone. She’s sorry about all of this and she’s appalled at what’s happened.  She’s also offering to take Lem away from this, because no matter what else she agreed to go along with, hurting an innocent little boy is not one of them.  Christian knows he’s going to be kept alive for more Camden amusement.  Of Rina’s fate, he has no illusions, nor does she: she’s dead.  It’s best that Lem isn’t around to see it.  Rina and Christian give Lem to Hilde, and Christian uses all his remaining charm to convince the woman not to lock the cell door when she leaves.  He’ll give her a count of five and then try to escape, he explains and to our relief she agrees.  She leaves with Lem and we give her the five-count.
 
Toward morning, the door rattles and Hilde Dansmueller walks in alone. She’s sorry about all of this and she’s appalled at what’s happened.  She’s also offering to take Lem away from this, because no matter what else she agreed to go along with, hurting an innocent little boy is not one of them.  Christian knows he’s going to be kept alive for more Camden amusement.  Of Rina’s fate, he has no illusions, nor does she: she’s dead.  It’s best that Lem isn’t around to see it.  Rina and Christian give Lem to Hilde, and Christian uses all his remaining charm to convince the woman not to lock the cell door when she leaves.  He’ll give her a count of five and then try to escape, he explains and to our relief she agrees.  She leaves with Lem and we give her the five-count.

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