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Arden’s been keeping an eye on the injured crew, making sure their recovery isn't ruined by overwork (Rina) or complications due to internal injuries (Christian).  He also notices Jake spending hours at a time absent from the ship and when he does show up, it’s with an expression of one dealing with a private emotional issue.  He keeps an eye on Jake and the situation there, too.  Perhaps Jake will be forthcoming later, once we’re under way.
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Arden’s been keeping an eye on the injured crew, making sure their recovery by overwork (Rina) or complications due to internal injuries (Christian).  He also notices Jake spending hours at a time absent from the ship and when he does show up, it’s with an expression of one dealing with a private emotional issue.  He keeps an eye on Jake and the situation there, too.  Perhaps Jake will be forthcoming later, once we’re under way.
  
 
On the dawn of the 23rd, we take on our cargo and take off.  Next stop, the Skyplex.
 
On the dawn of the 23rd, we take on our cargo and take off.  Next stop, the Skyplex.

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